Star Iron: I Am the Sword in Your Hand

Please, this is the first book. There must be some shortcomings. I hope everyone will tell me and give yourself 4 stars first as encouragement. Praise Lord Medicine King! Please everyone, if you like it, you can give the author an encouragement, if you don't like it, you can also say it and rate it [blowing kiss][blowing kiss] My grades have been very poor recently. I feel like my writing is terrible and I don't know where I went wrong. Everyone must tell me [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry]

I think this novel is one of the better ones I have read among all the Bengtie fanfics. The interaction between the protagonist and Jingliu is written in the early stage, and the emotional portrayal is really good. Of course, there is also a bit of a knife in it. In the middle period, the protagonist is about to die and comes to Huangquan. The narrative is told from a dual perspective, while writing about the interaction between the protagonist and Huangquan, as well as some narrations of past experiences. The other side also writes about the evil dragon's disaster, including Dan Feng and Ying Xing's persistence in Bai Heng's resurrection, and Jing Yuan's complicated emotions towards their two best friends. Later, the protagonist gets into the car. I'm looking forward to it, even at the end, when the protagonist meets Huangquan or Jingliu, maybe there is a Shura field, but the meeting time should not be too long, otherwise it will be really boring. I hope this novel can get better and better, come on! !

This gentleman's writings are like pearls in the sea. The pen takes part in creation, and the ink flows into the sky. The strange structure is like a nine-winding galaxy, and the figures are like bones that have been carved for hundreds of years. If you go to a place with strong love, you can turn gold and stone into spring ice; when you have deep thoughts, you can teach the wind and clouds to condense into iron scrolls. The chapters are all made with the sound of gold and stone, and each word will last forever. In the past, people said that novels conveyed the truth, but now Guanhong Chapter means that all the articles about heaven and earth are here. The potential is unlimited

The beginning is pretty good. I think the interpretation of fertility and the relationship with Jingliu are very good. Personally, I feel that Chapter 6 should be polished. The destruction of Cangcheng was written a bit hastily. The characters and things mentioned are very vague. The image of General Cangcheng was not established, or it was completely brushed off.

The structure is clear and the content is substantial, which is what I like.

It's all about knives (in my personal opinion) but I have to say, it's really good-looking, and I have to watch it even if I'm killed by a knife.

Gua, I want to see Nanook go away and the main character Medicine Man become an incompetent Star God.

Beautiful, no need to say anything [shy]

It feels very good in a fanfic [laughing] and I hope the author can continue writing it [like]

This book is a peerless book, and it is a great good deed to be read by future generations.

It's quite addictive to watch [laughs]

Different people have different opinions about each book, so I won't say much and just go and taste it for yourself.

As long as it's a photo shoot, I'll give it five stars.

Digging for Gold in Manure is a very enjoyable book to read.

So far, the plot is very good. I like it very much. I wonder what will happen next?

Give a four-star support

The author continues to work hard

Beautiful, the writing has no title

Since it is all. Star friends, please support me and ask by the way. Is it more or less? Reading the introduction, I always felt that I was single.

The heroine should be from Jing Liu. The author of Bai Li's Wife's Jing Liu will answer this question.

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A good book

Good looking, keep up the good work

Very nice, come on

This book is really well written among Star Iron fans, at least I don't always think about skipping many chapters.

It's very comfortable to read, and the content is not boring. It's a very good new book OWO

The writing is very good and the plot is pretty good too

Look, that's what I think

The story of sunshine and health

Speechless, it can be called a masterpiece