A Gift Crit! The Fairy Tied Me to Her Bed!

The idea is good, but the main character is too vulgar, so disgusting that it makes people feel physically uncomfortable 🤮

This protagonist is worse than a gangster 🤮

The idea is very impressive and good, but it's too vulgar. No matter before or since, I don't really like obscene novels, especially the protagonist, who is too obscene and seems like he can't live without women. Even though it's a harem novel,

How did you come up with a protagonist with this personality?

The protagonist is a pure tool, and the female characters are also ruthless monks who have no shame and do not take their complexes seriously. As a result, even if the male protagonist has to eat, it is not enjoyable to watch.

The subject matter is good, but the protagonist's character can't stand it, and the woman has to show her shocked expression every time she receives a gift, and she won't restrain herself even after so many times.

You can be stubborn and keep a low profile. But the male protagonist is weak and wretched.

I don't believe that the author doesn't have a side job 😜

The protagonist doesn't look like a native, he looks like a fucking Indian

To be honest, although the main character is written in a very vulgar way. But for someone who is used to seeing shrewd protagonists in fairy tales, this kind of protagonist is unexpectedly good to write, because the protagonist's cheats don't require him to be too smart. If he is too smart, I feel that I can't write anymore. The heroine needs the protagonist to give gifts to be able to critically attack. Once the protagonist knows the secret, or is too smart, and notices something, I feel that the protagonist's character of not gaining anything is losing, but it is not good. Why do the proud women of heaven want to steal people in a lowly manner? Isn't it just for the benefit? He was too shrewd, and it was self-defeating when he noticed it. I felt that the protagonist didn't need anything like IQ, so just let the heroines do the calculations to please others, and let those women do the slaps in the face! However, the author wrote about how the elder Jindan didn't realize that his spiritual thoughts were swept away. The magic weapons and materials on the heroine must not be hidden. The author has fallen into a misunderstanding, that is, the protagonist is practicing Qi. Now he may say that he dare not, and he is afraid that it will be difficult to write about the golden elixir, but you are a golden finger. There is no need for the protagonist to take action, the Jindan elder noticed it. On the contrary, it is a good thing. Let a strong female cultivator be equipped with magic weapon resources and escort her. It would not look good.