He Gave up His Studies and Opened a Small Shop, but Found a School Beauty Who Was in Trouble

A rare good book with solid writing skills and a kind of beauty that does not belong to this platform (? It is very difficult to write this kind of ordinary daily life well, smoothly and interestingly. But it seems that I am not a full-time author, so it is a bit painful to keep up with it, but I still give it full marks. After thinking about it, I decided to write a more serious book review.) The writing and writing rhythm are very good, and the plot may not be good for some readers, but I think it is acceptable. Of course, it may also be because of the first two reasons that my tolerance threshold for books will be raised a lot. I feel that the level of inking of the two lovers Lin Xia and Shen Jiang is just right. Although they are suspected of being lazy, if they can be strung together without appearing separated, there is nothing wrong with it. Originally, I was worried that the author would speed up the progress of the relationship between the male and female protagonists, but now it seems that I am overly worried. It does not mean that it cannot be eaten, but that too fast a progress will make people feel that the vas deferens goes straight to the brain. And currently, between the two of them, there is still the desolation and indifference in Lu's own heart. Let's see how the author solves it through Yan. Overall it's pretty good, keep it up.

A very good novel. The writing style is excellent and the writing style is witty. The words and sentences are already at the level of a physical book. It is the highest quality work I have ever seen on Tomato. It is unreasonable to be unreasonable. The male and female protagonists are very three-dimensional, especially the male protagonist does not give people a greasy feeling of pretending to be mature. The supporting characters are vividly created and have their own memorable points. It is worthy of the group portraits in the label. After reading countless garbage white articles that are difficult to swallow in the first ten chapters. When I see a book like this, I can only say that the author has single-handedly improved my tolerance for tomato novels. If you read this comment, don't believe the other comments that are disparaging and disparaging in the comment area. You will naturally make your own judgment after reading a few chapters. Highly recommended!

There are very few daily articles of this quality. The writing style is quite good and the pace is moderate. If you say it is watery, it is not watery. If you say it is not watery, it is a bit watery. But it is kept at a very comfortable rhythm. For me, it feels just right. Of course, the above is based on my feelings and is not suitable for everyone. I suddenly understood, and I knew why I felt this way. It was just like "My Wife Came from a Thousand Years Ago", it was soothing and comfortable to read, and there were many places where you could bring in their characters and feel no problem.

This novel is very enjoyable to read. Most of today's emotional novels are sweet to the point of being cloying, like eating ten pounds of butter, but this novel is like drinking tea, very light, and has a vague sense of alienation, which is good. Update quickly without taking a break.

I can only say one thing, invincible, nothing too gorgeous. The whole article is written by young writers. The just description just hit my sweet spot. I forgot when I added the bookshelf. I originally like to read fast-paced books, and this book was also my intention. I picked it up and added it to my bookshelf casually because of the recent book shortage. I opened this book yesterday and was immediately shocked. This is the kind of chaff I should eat. The writing is unbeatable, the rhythm is unbeatable, and the plot is unbeatable. Anyway, just listen to me and finish it.

1. Relationship between core characters - Lu Kuan: The male protagonist, a former 985 top student (who gave up his postgraduate studies), has a calm, transparent and principled personality. He opened a canteen to achieve stability but hides an unknown past. He was Yan Yue's "safe haven" when he was down and out. - Yan Yue: The heroine, the former school beauty, was once a star-studded existence. She was isolated due to inexplicable rumors and her life was in trouble. She was soft on the outside but strong on the inside. She gradually found herself while getting along with Lu Su. - Key supporting roles: - Lu Kuan's little shop/frequent customer: a straightforward personality, a seasoning agent for the plot, and occasionally assists the relationship between the male and female protagonists. - The initiator of the rumors (classmate/acquaintance): Promoting the "mystery of innocence" plot is one of the core points of conflict. - A few friends who believe in Yan Yue: they may become a key help in clarifying the rumors in the later stage. 2. Refining the subsequent plot direction (derived based on the existing settings) 1. Daily heating up line: When the two get along day and night in the canteen, Lu Sui silently takes care of Yan Yue, and Yan Yue takes the initiative to help take care of the store. From strangers and temptations to mutual dependence, their relationship naturally ferments. 2. The truth-revealing line: The reasons why Lu Kuan gave up his postgraduate studies (may be related to family, ideals or past experiences) are gradually revealed; the truth behind Yan Yue's rumors (most likely due to jealousy, misunderstanding or conflict of interest) is revealed in depth, and he will encounter secondary obstacles in the process. 3. Healing and growth line: Yan Yue got out of the trough with Lu Su's company and learned to face rumors; Lu Su also re-examined his choices and found the meaning of life besides "stability" while getting along with Yan Yue. 4. Happy ending line: the rumors are clarified, the initiator gets the consequences he deserves; the male and female protagonists confirm their feelings, and the canteen becomes their common "home", which not only retains the sense of daily healing, but also achieves the dual perfection of emotion and life.

This is one of the most fluently written Tomato novels I have ever read. The writing skills are solid and don't feel pretentious. It's really rare to be able to write interesting dialogues without making bad jokes. I give you full marks.

It's very interesting, and there are too few that are worth reading. It has the same feeling between the male protagonist and Xu Qing from a Thousand Years. Apart from having an ex-girlfriend that I don't like, the rest is basically complete. The supporting characters are also very well written and vivid.

In fact, when I first read it, I thought it was a typical love story, but after reading it, I realized that it was completely different. To be honest, I feel that I am a bit picky about writing in novels, but the author's writing style really amazed me. It should be a great pleasure to read after encountering this writing style. In fact, the plot of the novel is not that complicated in nature, and even many of the cool points can be considered a relatively old-fashioned type. But through this fresh writing style (a bit like Japanese comics and a bit like literary youth), the whole article suddenly stood up. Including the small details of the interaction between the male and female protagonists, all of them hit the mark. I feel like this and that drama dealing with maids can be considered the strongest romance novels I've ever read on Tomato [Shy]

The setting of the story is very suitable to my taste. The male protagonist was "reduced to a useless person" due to a family accident. He gave up his postgraduate education and chose to buy a convenience store in a place with almost no business. It felt completely different from the clichéd academic tyrants I had seen before. Lu Su's character is sober and opinionated, and her encounter with the school beauty Yan Yue, who has been criticized by public opinion, is naturally unintentional. Just like the plot of the campus male and female protagonist who breaks out of the cliché mentioned above, their daily "human-computer" life is parallel to the growth line, and the rhythm is slow. Each character (the male dormitory and the female dormitory protagonist group) is very three-dimensional and full of fireworks. The plot has almost no poisonous points, the logic is online, and the conflicts are reasonable. It will be very relaxing and healing to read the previous chapter after studying in the evening every day (PS: If the author sees it, can he add two more chapters!!!)

It's very interesting, with all the details of life. The heroine is a genius but lacks social and emotional intelligence. She is a seasoned man in men's clothing. This is my favorite book. The emotional line is not that fast. Give it a thumbs up, the author should not be a eunuch

I have been reading novels for about seven or eight years. It is the first time I have seen a novel with this theme and style. I didn't know the name of the male protagonist until Chapter 9. The author's style is very novel and the content is also humorous. It reveals the atmosphere of life. At present, the pace seems to be slow. It is not the type of mindless meeting and liking and then directly confessing when you like it. If you don't pursue a fast pace, you can read it. I personally think it is very good. At present, the male protagonist still has some hidden plots. I am looking forward to the decryption in the future. And it feels a bit lacking. Please update the author.

The quality is very good. It is exactly as described by the seller. I am very satisfied. I really like it. It completely exceeds expectations. The delivery speed is very fast. The packaging is very careful and tight. The logistics company has a very good service attitude. It is a very satisfying purchase.

I found gold, the writing style feels super comfortable, the pace is slow but not too slow, it looks like a long stream of water, and the small events added in daily life make it look very eye-catching. Secondly, some people may think that the matter of the student union seems to be a big deal, which makes people feel that the existence of the law is ignored. In fact, it is considered a flaw, but it is real. I am also a college student, so everyone has their own opinions on this kind of thing. After all, there are all kinds of birds in the forest. As long as it does not hit the school's obvious interests, in fact, most schools will not take care of it, let alone if it is related. But Hajizu, it's not enough to see whether he can explode continuously [crying]

Nothing to say, it is really good-looking, very different from the usual daily articles, with a new style. The characters in the article are very conspicuous, and you can construct them in your mind at a glance. Even ordinary daily life, through the characters' personalities and inexplicable but philosophical dialogues, it is easy to arouse the interest to continue reading. Don't let the ratings and the number of people delay a good book. I hope the author can write it well and it is expected to be popular. Come on.

Awesome! So awesome! The author's writing style is very good, and the characterization of the characters is very detailed, which can give readers a sense of déjà vu, as if they are not fake characters in the book, but real people in reality. The following is my personal opinion (don't criticize it if you don't like it). This book is very sweet, but it is not the kind of full-sugar milk tea. Although it is sweet, you will inevitably get bored after reading too much. This book is intended to bring the fragrance of scented tea to refresh the mind and leave a sweet taste in the mouth. The description of the group portraits is not redundant but can highlight the vividness of the characters. The two twisted people working together to save each other reminded me of Spring Things and White Night Walk that I had seen before. I give this book 9.7 Points!

It's a pretty good novel, and the writing style is considered to be top-notch in Tomato. It's not as sweet or cloying as other romance novels or it progresses inexplicably fast. The plot is quite reasonable so far, and it doesn't suffer from the literary youth problem. The only shortcoming is that there are too few novels.

It's a very niche style of writing. I didn't know the name of the male protagonist until Chapter 9, and I didn't mention falling in love until almost 200 pictures [face covering]. The language is very interesting. There is nothing that I can't stand. I hope the author can speed up the update.

It's been a long time since I've written a long review. I've read a lot of novels on Tomato, including cool novels, female novels, and horror novels. I taste different flavors every time. But it's more about fun. Generally speaking, this novel does have some interesting points at the beginning, but after reading it slowly, you can actually understand it. The author's writing style is indeed good, very delicate, and fits the slow pace of the book introduction. However, there are emotional scenes of other supporting characters interspersed in the middle. I don't particularly like it. There are too many scenes, because after all, everyone is in a fast-paced era, and all they want to read is the protagonist. Okay, back to the subject, if you want to find a novel with good writing, the protagonist is not mentally retarded, the heroine is not an idiot, and everyone else is pretty normal, you can read it. I have only seen the latest chapter so far, and I don't know what will happen in the future. If the follow-up is too shocking, I will follow up and comment.

This book is about the most overlooked time before love actually happens. It is a delicate state between dependence and self-esteem: each other has become accustomed to the other's existence, but is not qualified to ask for anything; they have reserved a place for each other in their hearts, but they must exercise restraint and maintain propriety. If you take a step closer, you are afraid of appearing to cross the line; if you take a step back, you will inevitably feel lost. And under this restraint, there is also the unspeakable sadness of the male protagonist - the hurt of "some companionship cannot reach the end after all" in the memory. It is precisely because of this that this sudden and funny relationship between "employee" and "school girl" has always had the shadow of being interrupted from the beginning. This is not malice, but reality. In the student days, this kind of relationship is the most real and easiest to miss. It may not have an ending, but it still makes people feel unforgettable when they think about it later.

It's really good. The emotional novel doesn't add so many sweet plots. The only poisonous plot is the student union plot. I feel that the student union is a bit dz-like and a bit serious. Overall, it's a very good book. Please just ask the author not to end it.

It's a masterpiece. The emotions are super delicate. It often makes me let out sharp (silent) explosions. Some people may not be used to it in the early stage. The vicious shaping of the group is too strong but reasonable. But after 5 chapters, the more I read, the better it becomes. It's a masterpiece!

Oops, this book is very good-looking, and it fits the light pure love style very well. Because it is not the type of cool novel, it may not be that attractive at first, but if you keep reading, you will find that this book is really good-looking and very entertaining. Both the male protagonist and the female protagonist have their own stories. Of course, the whole book is not that bland. Female The protagonist has the pain of his original family, and the male protagonist is not much better, but it is really about redeeming each other. The more you look at the back, the more you can see that the two people are really an indispensable part of their lives. Anyway, I think the emotional journey of this book is very well written, not the kind of vigorous, but slow and steady, and full of fun. It is really easy for people to keep reading. And now the rating I read is 8.9, But I feel it can be 9.2 Or 9.4. I have read a lot of romance novels, so I don't say it out of mind, it's a strong benefit.

Generally speaking, it is good-looking. The only major criticism is the narrative method. It is a double-edged sword. It is indeed advanced when used well, and it has a bit of dry humor. But sometimes it goes too far, with more words and less content, which is flashy and pretentious. But the plot is okay. It's really interesting to read as a virtual campus novel, and the characters and emotional development of the male and female protagonists are quite interesting, but you do have to be patient to get into it.

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Currently I have read Chapter 377 in one go. I can only say that I am very comfortable with the author's writing style. I am really surprised to see a book here on Yang Persimmon that is not nonsense and has good logic. I can't even read the book at a glance. Brother Ramen did a great job. Ps: Everyone is updated quickly, I will keep it up

The writing is very delicate, and reading it is like drinking a cup of tea, or there is a kind of fireworks, which makes people feel calm and comfortable. A rare and good book, worth reading. I feel that what the author presented to me is a pleasant movie. I like that every sentence has a very perfect picture feeling, which is very comfortable.

It's awesome. The last time I read it so enthusiastically was my sister Youzi and Rare. Now that I see it, the writing style can be said to be very nb. There is no need for anything else, just nb. Maybe the plot of the student union in the early stage was a bit toxic. To be honest, as an active college student, the impact on the student union is not that big, and I don't think it is worth writing about these plots, but at least it can be read, and It's really sweet, and there's no back-and-forth. Some other novels are too twisted. In the end, if you like it, you just like it. I think the inner emotions of Lao Lu and Yan Yue before they reveal their relationship are really good. The couple of the president and the young master Shen are also very good. I hope the young master's brain will react quickly. In the end, Ramen Teacher, please add another chapter [crying] [crying] [crying]

The author's writing style is very unique, but it does not prevent us from seeing that the author who can write in this style is also a genius. The overall writing is smooth and not laggy, the plot has no surprises, and there is no special emphasis on how the male protagonist will take care of him when he is menstrual period. The story is conveyed in a few simple sentences and is particularly worthy of praise. There are also flaws. Both the male and female protagonists have talked about this. Both parties have met their families and their families have approved it. Let's not talk about home runs. There is not even a kiss. It won't be completely Plato. (Md feels that it is not impossible to have such a divine male and female protagonist and a divine author) Personally, I am still looking forward to the male protagonist's performance in his own field. Currently, he only shows his academic ability and treasure appraisal ability. It would be a pity if the male protagonist's abilities are only used to teach the female protagonist and become a special member of some association. If he can become a fairy couple in this field, it will also be a good talk. Overall, it's worth reading. It's more interesting than most romance novels on Tomato. I spent a whole day reading the current update, and I'm looking forward to the follow-up.

Originally, I saw a previous book review that said the heroine had two ex-boyfriends and had sex with each other, so I read the novel as a moderator. The more I read, the better and better it became. The male and female protagonists are not unclean. It is a rare good book on Tomato.