Delta: I Really Didn't Want to Capture the Villain!

It's great. After reading this book, now that I'm going to spaceflight, I feel like I have a different feeling for Hudson [you taste it carefully] [you taste it carefully] [you taste it carefully]

It looks so good. When I play games and break my defense, I come back to take a look and my mood suddenly becomes very good.

The teacher's writing is very beautiful [blowing kiss] and the sense of redemption that comes from naming Hudson Green Cucumber [face covering]

The heroine is so awesome. She can do it once and remember it, and she will basically succeed in whatever she does to you. She also has a good attitude, but it's a bit miserable, because even if she is kidnapped and almost raped and then killed, she has to think about whether she will be fired for causing trouble. The system is also amazing. Every time it appears, I feel a sense of schadenfreude. To be honest, it's so miserable that I can't stand it. I worry every day whether I will send it. If I have to suffer like this just because of my oral pleasure, I decided to say from now on that if it can make me XXXXXX, even if it makes me rich overnight, I will

In fact, overall it's pretty good. It can describe the emotional changes of the target. However, the heroine has no obvious changes at all. Her courage remains unchanged, and her character has not calmed down due to several setbacks [face covering]

It's beautiful. The emotional line of falling in love with Hudson is very delicate. As a carnivore, I was so excited when they kissed each other. It was so exciting later on. The heroine also let herself go. It's good to realize that she is horny. Hahaha, the system is really exciting that I have never seen before. It's so refreshing and very good to eat.

Come on, author, your writing is superb! ! ! So divinely delicious! ! ! Immortal product! ! ! [Adoration][Admiration] The author must not give up on this book! ! ! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

Very well written! Looking at it so far, I personally think that Dada has completely written the core of the characters, and portrayed Hudson, Raven, and Gherroth vividly, and they are not OOC at all! Perfectly fits the background, personality and aura of each character! Then there is the heroine. Her growth never happens overnight. The rhythm is gentle and real, and it completely fits her own identity and character (because we are college students in Wanwan). Her character has the timidity and cowardice of ordinary people (in fact, it is not entirely), but her bones are tough and soft, and she does not forcefully cheat or pretend to be cool (because I personally think that it is impossible for the heroine to know everything and be awesome as soon as she travels through time. It is really illogical, so I really like this book!) The emotional description is very delicate!

The heroine is very lively, and the ambiguous relationship with Hudson is so beautiful and delicious! ! ! The heroine is not coy, and the relationship progresses naturally. In addition, the interaction between the system and the heroine is very cute. Hahahaha. I have never played this game, but it is very interesting! ! !

It's really beautiful. I tied it in two nights. I can only say that it's shocking and delicious. Before this, I had never understood any of the background stories or characters of this game. But the author's writing method does not make me feel that there are any barriers to reading. On the contrary, it is precisely because I have not understood any details of the story that I feel it has a different flavor. The story itself is very attractive. There are no complex narratives in the article that are particularly extraneous. Instead, it always sticks to the main line of the narrative. And for me, the progress was also perfectly controlled. If the pace is too fast, it will be difficult for me to sympathize with the emotional narrative of the protagonist in the book, but if it is too slow, I will feel that the whole story will be redundant and boring. Whether the author is narrating the male protagonist or the female protagonist, it will always make my eyes shine. I think the characters written by the author will give me a very charming feeling. He does not tell you the advantages of this character through a straightforward method, but can taste it carefully in the context of the article. Maybe it's because of preconceptions that my love index for the character of Hudson reached its peak in this book. Maybe it's also because of personal xp. In fact, I have always felt that male vulnerability is very attractive to me, so I am more fascinated by him showing just the right vulnerability during an asthma attack. And regarding the warden, I feel that I have not changed in all these years. I have a great impression of the character who is stronger than his inferiority complex, and the contradictions are unified in the output, so I have a great favorable impression. The author's narrative is not too biased in one direction, but the fusion of the two complements each other very well. What Raven said is that if I had to meet someone in real life, I think I would be more interested in such a character, because through his originally crazy outer armor, his inner heart can be seen. I will be attracted by the secret door that I have opened. What it brings me more is a kind of warmth, but it is not the scorching heat of the sun. Instead, it gives me a feeling that on a cold night, the stars hanging alone in the sky are much warmer than the sun. Another thing, I think he doesn't have much of a role at the moment, so I'm not very impressed with him. I'll continue to wait and see. Then finally there is our heroine. In fact, I have always been a heroine. It is the things he reveals in his work that, let alone others, would be attracted to me, even as a reader. I would really find such a character to be very attractive. And most of her performance is based on a very optimistic attitude. I think this is actually rare, because after all, she is a character in the story. She was forced from a familiar world to another world without any relatives. No friends. Her connection with the world is very fragile and thin. And this kind of transformation is very scary, because people are always naturally afraid of unfamiliar things. But I still wish her the courage to follow her own path. I wrote something casually, just my personal opinion. Well, if there is something I can't understand, it's all my own fault. Maybe I had some misunderstandings or omissions when I read it.

It is a rare way to portray the protagonist. The character design is very consistent. It does not apply a flat character template as the protagonist's emotions change. Moreover, the appearance and emotional portrayal of the male and female protagonists are unique and impressive. I am addicted to follow it every day! I hope the author will update four chapters every day! 🥺

Five stars, a very good article among the very few female-channeled novels in Delta. (When I first read it, the writing style was a little uncomfortable, but it got much better later on. The author is so good at writing it for the first time, so strong!) As for the abuse of the protagonist or other issues, there are still those few questions (Do you understand the characters in the world view? Do you have a basic understanding of the subject matter? What kind of mentality do you read this novel with?), Long-form dramas need logic like novels, and various huge forces check and balance each other, driven by their own positions and interests (not to mention this is a war game, if you think the war theme is not dark, you are welcome to play Black Hawk Down alone)... .. In fact, I think the author has been very good at meeting the needs of readers who want to be "enjoyed". In terms of the deepening of the world view later (this is also due to the official plot change and the fragmented plot), the self-evolution is still too fast, and it is written entirely for the purpose of providing pleasure... Of course, creating a more macro-complex and in-depth world view is too demanding for the subject of this novel... All in all, this is an excellent Delta fanfic that is more Mary Su-oriented (the dark reality point has been diluted by various elements) and is suitable for most readers. [Cool]

It's super beautiful [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration] The text is very good, and the characters are also very interesting to me. The author must keep writing it well. I love this book to death [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration]

It's delicious. I think the characters are very vivid and not OOC. It's just not recommended for extreme female protagonists to watch, right? Because the heroine doesn't have a lot of golden fingers and smooth sailing (I love this kind of favor! (՞⸝⸝O̴̶̷̥᷅ ̫ o̴̶̷̥᷅⸝⸝՞)！

Well written and worth reading! This is one of the few delta female channel time travel stories. The characters are not OOC and are flesh and blood. The heroine is also well portrayed. The 1v4 is very interesting. I have been reading this book for a while and I am about to finish it.

[Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration] Okay, it's so delicious. This author is also very good. [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration] It's incoherent. The content of the article is rich and colorful. Hehehehehehehehehe, come on, strive for 100,000 pieces a day [laughing] [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Admiration]

The content is good, and the plot is very consistent with the character settings. The interactions are quite sweet, and the process of slowly falling in love is not stiff. I am also looking forward to the future warden Saeed and Raven. The author has portrayed the characters very vividly. I hope that the heroine can be exposed to both rain and dew. After all, I think it is really sweet. Sweet, sweet! ! ! [Adoration]

I like this book very much. I will catch up on it tomorrow night. I will read this one without reading the other books. The rhythm is good, but the author has a mental problem at the beginning because of the bad reviews, and the writing is unstable later. I hope the author doesn't care about the bad reviews, and there are still people around you. Don't let your writing collapse because of some irrelevant people. In the end, you can just abandon the article if you can't stand it anymore? Don't talk about useless and disgusting people. If you don't like this chapter, just save it and skip it. I'm most annoyed by such bad people.

It's very good to read. After reading Hudson's self-guided tour of Green Cucumber, I'm especially looking forward to how Gherros will be taken down later. I can't get enough of it. I can't get enough. The thing I look forward to most every day is waiting for the author's update! ! ! ! !

I went, it was so good, and the early stages were so funny that I almost turned into maggots laughing in bed. I finished it in one night, and it wasn't enough. Teacher, can you update 500,000 words for us to see? ! !

I don't understand why this book has such a low rating. It must be at least 8.5 Or above in my case. Obviously the plot is so well written, and the heroine is also a flesh-and-blood image, lively, cute and sexy, very lovable The four male protagonists basically have no OOC. Each plot advancement adds some Mary Sue/lucky buffs within a logical range, and the whole flow is smooth. And the cook's stewed meat is super fragrant! Different male protagonists have different styles, and there are many tricks [note] Looking forward to more works from the author!

It's a very good book. I rarely read sweet stories like this one, because most of them are mindless and purely entertaining without any logic at all. I gained some knowledge today. I feel like the author has really been in love, and is a tsundere-type boyfriend/girlfriend.

It must be given a five-star rating. It is the best Delta fanfic I have ever read. The emotions are delicate and real, the characters are very good, and the sour flow of sincere emotions is particularly fascinating. It is beautiful! After watching "Space Fighting", I felt a familiar and special feeling towards Hudson [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] Boss, come on, update, I will follow you

Quickly give it five stars. Although there are still some contradictions, I can say that the future will get better and better, and we are all moving forward. What I said a year ago still seems to me to have many, many, many problems. And my wife really wrote very well. I stayed up all night, and I was so excited that I gawked in bed and made my aunt laugh🤣

Holy shit, it's awesome. I don't understand why the rating is so low. The reason why I have to read Tomato every day when I get back from get off work is because of this book. It's awesome. I rely on the author. Must it be better? I will always follow you.

It's so good, it's really good. It's one of the best Delta fanfics I've ever seen. I like it very much and hope the author will update it more. Please, please, please update it carefully.

The teacher writes very well, the details are very good. What the teacher writes is not the kind of silly and sweet character, but the heroine's thinking is very clear and decisive, which makes people feel like it very much [shy][shy][shy] I highly recommend reading this book, come on, teacher [blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

It's really beautiful and very touching! I think it fits the character very well. I feel sorry for the raven. I feel that it has captured the essence of the story. The heroine is really good and the writing style is also good. I won't pick anything when there is food to eat. As the saying goes, don't beat the cook when you eat. Come on! I'm looking forward to the extra episode, and I'm also looking forward to writing an article next time, so come on! (♡´∀`♡)

Top quality! ! ! The emotions in the back are really great after they warm up, and the front may be a bit frustrating (after all, it's not the first person, so don't bring yourself into it), but I think the overall thinking about the world environment and the different psychology in the early stage are justifiable and reasonable. In fact, it is really good to watch! ! ! Get ready to tie, come on [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

I can't describe how beautiful this book is. You can read it yourself if you want to, but I think this book will definitely be a feast for your eyes. (From a personal perspective of course)😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍