Delta Force: I Really Didn’t Mean to Win Over the Villain!

It's great. After reading this book, now that I'm going to spaceflight, I feel like I have a different feeling for Hudson [you taste it carefully] [you taste it carefully] [you taste it carefully]

It looks so good. When I play games and break my defense, I come back to take a look and my mood suddenly becomes very good.

The teacher's writing is very beautiful 😘 and the sense of redemption that comes from naming Hudson Green Cucumber 🤦

The heroine is so awesome. She can do it once and remember it, and she will basically succeed in whatever she does to you. She also has a good attitude, but it's a bit miserable, because even if she is kidnapped and almost raped and then killed, she has to think about whether she will be fired for causing trouble. The system is also amazing. Every time it appears, I feel a sense of schadenfreude. To be honest, it's so miserable that I can't stand it. I worry every day whether I will send it. If I have to suffer like this just because of my oral pleasure, I decided to say from now on that if it can make me XXXXXX, even if it makes me rich overnight, I will

It's beautiful. The emotional line of falling in love with Hudson is very delicate. As a carnivore, I was so excited when they kissed each other. It was so exciting later on. The heroine also let herself go. It's good to realize that she is horny. Hahaha, the system is really exciting that I have never seen before. It's so refreshing and very good to eat.

In fact, overall it's pretty good. It can describe the emotional changes of the target. However, the heroine has no obvious changes at all. Her courage remains unchanged, and her character has not calmed down due to several setbacks 🤦

Come on, author, your writing is superb!!! So divinely delicious!!! Immortal product!!! 🥰[Admiration] The author must not give up on this book!!! 💕💕💕

Very well written! Looking at it so far, I personally think that Dada has completely written the core of the characters, and portrayed Hudson, Raven, and Gherroth vividly, and they are not OOC at all! Perfectly fits the background, personality and aura of each character! Then there is the heroine. Her growth never happens overnight. The rhythm is gentle and real, and it completely fits her own identity and character (because we are college students in Wanwan). Her character has the timidity and cowardice of ordinary people (in fact, it is not entirely), but her bones are tough and soft, and she does not forcefully cheat or pretend to be cool (because I personally think that it is impossible for the heroine to know everything and be awesome as soon as she travels through time. It is really illogical, so I really like this book!) The emotional description is very delicate!

The heroine is very lively, and the ambiguous relationship with Hudson is so beautiful and delicious!!! The heroine is not coy, and the relationship progresses naturally. In addition, the interaction between the system and the heroine is very cute. Hahahaha. I have never played this game, but it is very interesting!!!

Five stars, a very good article among the very few female-channeled novels in Delta. (When I first read it, the writing style was a little uncomfortable, but it got much better later on. The author is so good at writing it for the first time, so strong!) As for the abuse of the protagonist or other issues, there are still those few questions (Do you understand the characters in the world view? Do you have a basic understanding of the subject matter? What kind of mentality do you read this novel with?), Long-form dramas need logic like novels, and various huge forces check and balance each other, driven by their own positions and interests (not to mention this is a war game, if you think the war theme is not dark, you are welcome to play Black Hawk Down alone)... .. In fact, I think the author has been very good at meeting the needs of readers who want to be "enjoyed". In terms of the deepening of the world view later (this is also due to the official plot change and the fragmented plot), the self-evolution is still too fast, and it is written entirely for the purpose of providing pleasure... Of course, creating a more macro-complex and in-depth world view is too demanding for the subject of this novel... All in all, this is an excellent Delta fanfic that is more Mary Su-oriented (the dark reality point has been diluted by various elements) and is suitable for most readers. 😎