Playing Real People in Nooks and Crannies with a Passerby Heroine

Thoughts after viewing 1. This book is not like a traditional harem novel, but more like a female rivalry novel (so far I have only gotten Megumi's first kiss) 2. (Micro Green) The protagonist is very powerful. After joining Midoriya's team, even though he conquered three female protagonists and took control of the team, he still plays with Midoriya all the time. Midoriya can still enjoy some of the benefits of the female protagonist, including swimsuit photos, cosplay, and multiplayer games. 3. It is slow to develop, the world view is too monotonous, and the supporting characters are too few. The scenes are mainly played by five people. The combined scenes of all other supporting characters cannot compare to Midoriya. 4. There are some other minor problems, but they do not affect reading. My rating is average, better than most fans. I hope the author can accumulate more writing experience and write better and better. Above.

It's obvious that it was edited by AI, but there's probably no problem with the plot. Some of the small details are a bit contradictory. But the biggest problem is the plot of going to the beach, which also involves An Yilun. When the heroine was giving benefits to the protagonist, An Yilun would sit next to the protagonist and follow him, and even took a camera to help take pictures. If you can accept this part of the plot, then there is no big problem and you can continue reading this book.

It's great. I love watching it. This male protagonist is a legendary corner. I'm just worried that the plot will develop too fast and there won't be much to watch.

It's good-looking, and the male protagonist is a top-notch hexagonal warrior with high IQ and EQ. Moreover, the writing ideas are also smooth, the writing style is good, and the plot guide for the heroine is progressing quickly, which also fully satisfied my fantasy of a love harem comedy as an otaku. A good book worth reading, at least so far. [Laughing evilly][OK]

Overall it's pretty good, all the characters are quite realistic. Including Akiron, the portrayal is quite realistic, without deliberately criticizing him. It really depicts Akironya's sense of giantness, cowardice and his enthusiasm which can be regarded as his strengths. It's just that this time there is a better male protagonist so that the female protagonists will not be put down by Akironya. The plot is a bit rough at the beginning, but the writing and pacing are very interesting. You can eat what you need to eat later. It is not nourishing the stomach, but maybe because the author gave Sage Hui a very high proportion, even Xia Laofei was eaten. Before Sage Hui was eaten, the male protagonists still favored Sage Hui. Overall, it seems that they are holding water, but the proportion is Sage Hui > Xia Laofei > Ying can't > passerby rock? [What most people think is toxic in the comment area] Many people think that the previous Akiron also has too much plot presence, including co-photographs and the like. Then I went back to Anyi in a swimsuit to take pictures of Yingbu and it was described as being exposed. The main thing is that some campus scenes use An Yiron to highlight the protagonist's excellent plot. After all, the protagonist's character and several heroines do need Ani's daydream to match him. After about 84 chapters, An Yiron suddenly stopped appearing. It was quite subtle. If I really feel that it can't be tolerated, why not write a few words to let him make a mistake and send him away, or write that he thinks he is not worthy of this circle and decides to further his studies and quits, etc.? It was quite subtle that this lack of explanation suddenly disappeared, it felt a bit like Taiga was calling a three-person team. In fact, I personally think it's a little bit that Xia Laofei and Ying Buwei wear high-cut cheongsams and cat girl outfits to operate there in order to sell games. The main reason is that the reality of the cosplay circle that is full of pheasants makes me ptsd. I can only say that the two-dimensional world is different. There is also something about Xia Laofei walking twenty minutes to the protagonist's house in his coat and underwear late at night, and letting Saint Hui go home alone in the middle of the night. . . The main thing is to think about the reality of public security abroad. . . It's okay, this is the second dimension, it's different. The overall character portrayal is restored to the point. The protagonist is a powerful and charming "strong man", and the rhythm of the plot is also quite good. I would give 4 stars for the payment at the end, but I can give 5 stars here. It must be that after more than 80 chapters, he realized that the audience did not like the addition of Aki Ronya in the team. Some readers felt that he was uncomfortable with everything. In addition, the character of the cousin has a natural affection for An Yi at the beginning. If you want to describe the character carefully and increase your favorability with the protagonist, you will definitely have to "slap" An Yi Ronya in the face. But if you don't accept it, you will definitely be said to be giving away your daughter. If you accept it, the initial interaction with An Yi Ronya will definitely dissuade a group of people. So the author may not be able to force a cerebral palsy plot on An Yi and make him leave the game permanently. Think this is too cruel? Or is it simply a matter of anger and feeling that since you all can't agree, I won't write about him, which is a bit of a show-off? In short, the current group @owner An Yiron has also disappeared inexplicably. Suddenly no one knows about him at everyone's graduation party. This is clearly proof that the two characters are compared to the female protagonists. Anyone can think it is reasonable to choose the male protagonist. But now suddenly one person is directly banned from participating [laughing and crying]. Can there be a short plot to completely "cruel" the reasonable exit? This whole thing is a bit like a strange rule. Suddenly, this clown disappeared without any memory or words.

If you are more concerned about sensitive green, please read Chapter 28 before reading.

This is the kind of youth novel that I hope for in my heart. The protagonist has a clear and measured goal, and always maintains a vague distance. The interaction with the heroines also has the hazy feeling in the novel of friends who are more than lovers but not satisfied. Moreover, the irrelevant part of making money is treated as vague as possible. It reads quite smoothly. Teacher, please don't interrupt the update. You have a strong sense of propriety in articles with multiple female protagonists, and the content will not be criticized. From now on, my free gifts will be yours. I hope you won't interrupt the update, and don't continue to follow the trend, Oonigai.

The writing is really good, but I still don't like to read it too slowly, it's a waste of time, but what the comment section talks about is green, awesome, etc. The mentality should be read in novels. It shows one's desire to control. Treating people as private objects, one's own, and others cannot take a look at them. And the stereotypes are also very serious. Wherever I heard it, from other people's mouths, I just thought so, but everything has two sides, you have to look at it from a holistic perspective, if you only think of one person individually That's what people are like, that should be wrong. Besides, cuckoldism, you don't understand this concept at all and you dare to use it. It's a pure exaggeration. After all, you have read it on Tomato. You don't need to understand so much, just use the biggest word to describe it. The author's writing skills are very good, as can be seen from the fact that he dared to write An Yilun together, but he misjudged the reader's mental state. Han Xin is purified, and Tomato is like this. If it is well written, it will either be unpopular to death, or it will be praised too highly.

I have read Chapter 37 so far, and it can be said that I have read the most comfortable chapter in the manga. It may also be because I have never watched the anime [laughing] because I have seen many people complaining about Aki's existence, but I don't have much dislike for him. In this article, he is just the mascot of the club, without the intrigue or ridicule of other fans, and it is more of a warm style.

It's pretty good, but please mark it before writing. The author has changed Yinglili and Shiyu's character design will be better. Because the two authors had character inconsistencies when they first started writing. Maybe you can consider adding extras or memories to describe the reasons for the changes.

It's definitely a vest. Putting aside the plot, the writing is simply great [Chigua]

Not bad. The rhythm is very good. It's a masterpiece. I have to say that when you write a harem novel, if you catch one heroine writing about other heroines, there is almost no role for you to write a harem novel.

After one hundred days of continuous updates, this book has also come to an end. It's a very good fanfic of a random heroine. There are no long chapters, no sour plot, and the plot is not sloppy. The character of the protagonist is also perfect. The depiction of the four emotional lines is enviable. The ending is also a gratifying HE. Maybe Hyunjin Yu's story has come to an end, but the story of each of us is not over yet.

The author's writing style really amazed me, and the smoothness of the plot is amazing. I enjoyed the reading process very much, and I sincerely hope that the author can update more and bring us more exciting content.

It's still okay. It's great that Tomato can produce a doujin with a passerby heroine that makes me feel comfortable. There is only a slight problem in chapter 28. It's fine in other rooms, but this is a bit outrageous. Other than that, it's normal for Midori to take group photos, but Midori is just a tool.

I read in the comments section that it was said that I was green, and I also read it. There was a little problem with the seaside accommodation in the early stage, but the impact was really not big. When I took the photo, I didn't mention taking pictures of my underwear. Personally, I felt that it was really okay. It was not self-green. Maybe I didn't pay too close attention? Currently watching Christmas clips The author handles the emotional line and character creation very well, and the writing is very good. He is really making progress. The gap between the early and middle stages is obvious. It is more interesting to read, and the description of emotions and environment is more delicate. All in all, I think it's pretty good, with no bad spots or flaws.

It's great. I read the review of the book. It's true that these people have a strong desire to control. It's amazing to see Zilule in a swimsuit or something. At that time, I just liked it. [Laughing and crying] [Laughing and crying] I really treat the heroine as my private property. It feels like it's almost over, which is so uncomfortable.

It's okay, but the readers are kept hanging by Cun Zhi again and again in close contact. It's not suitable to favor a certain female protagonist in a story with multiple female protagonists (Hui, it's not that I don't like this character, but the protagonist is too biased towards her)

It's so good, this is the first time I've read it in one go. I can't express myself well, I can only say it's so beautiful [send my heart][send my heart][send my heart][send my heart][adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration]

Very well written. The emotions of the heroines are very delicate. Especially Shiyu and Megumi. But Yinglili is still on the roadside. [Cover face]

This kind of smooth plot, this kind of sophisticated writing style, what kind of old guy is reincarnated?

It's awesome. Judging from the chapters I've read so far, it's very addictive.

His writing skills are very strong and he is so popular. It's awesome.

Very well written, one star less because An Yilun is still a bit annoying

I read Chapter 23, and I was really impressed by the protagonist's series of balance operations. Is the author going to write about a harem or a single woman?

It's beautiful and tastes so good [blowing kiss]

Well, it's pretty cool, but it feels like there aren't many people around. Where were the people at the beginning? Please post more comments, everyone.

I feel like the author's writing skills are good, and it has that flavor [shy]

Overall, it's pretty good. After all, there are very few good articles on similar topics in Tomato.

The male protagonist is really a master of galgame, his EQ and IQ are too high [shy]