Broken Iron************

This book is really good, especially the story about Lu Bu fighting for Diao Chan and Sun Wukong. Hundreds of people gathered together in the battle, but Xue Baochai was indeed too strong. If Nuoshou hadn't used an outer ring + Noxian guillotine, this wave of M4 six-fold strafing would have killed him. But I am more concerned about what Zhuge Liang said to the 108 monkeys in Huaguoshan, "Young man is proud, don't show off in front of your brother Liang", which shows Zhuge Liang's indignation at the monkeys who knocked him to death with three sticks. All in all, this book has an interesting plot, a clear system, and many foreshadowings. The fighting scenes feel like you are there, and the character descriptions are spot on! . ~Meow

It's good to watch, and the plot is on the happy side. The male protagonist is a fun-loving person but doesn't deliberately seek out fun. At least I haven't found that doing disgusting scenes just for fun is much better than other authors in this regard. (Personal opinion [Thinking]) It is rare in novels that the male protagonist is not stupid and has both IQ and EQ (after all, it is a happy book and there is not so much intrigue, so maybe I overlooked it [laughing]) There are many female protagonists, but the rhythm is well controlled, but I don't know how many to accept (in my personal opinion, she should accept all the famous ones, and don't even think about running away [laughter]) Personally, I don't think there are any poisonous points at the moment, and I hope it will continue to be so in the future (The author will continue to work hard and hope that there will be no knives later, and I don't want to watch a bitter drama. Don't be sweet first and then bitter [crying]) It doesn't work well later on. The author starts to add things from other worlds (Pokémon creatures appear in Iron Breaker). It's not that the writing is bad. I personally feel that if these added things are of no use in the later period, there is no need to describe them too much. Otherwise, it will only make some people feel boring. Those who come for Star Iron may feel that the main plot is slow to advance. When you see Pokémon Those who like Meng will look forward to the appearance of certain Pokémon in the future. If there is no role later, these people will basically lose interest. I personally feel that writing these things that integrate elements from other worlds is better than writing more about daily life and enhancing the relationship with the harem (after all, Pokémon and the iron-melting style of painting really don't match, and it still looks a bit too abstract) And the game part is also a bit watered down. It was okay when I first started reading it, but now I feel really uncomfortable watching it. I waited to read the new story just to see the new plot, but what I ended up waiting for was copy and paste, which feels a bit uncomfortable (so I am going to find a new book and let the author rest for a while before I come back to read it [laughing])

He is a staunch practitioner of the happy destiny and a strong contender in the reproductive destiny [laughing evilly]

Although it has its shortcomings, it's pretty good. The only thing I hope to make is that the Star Dome Railway game is not a turn-based game, but a square world game that reproduces the records of the pioneering journey.

It's beautiful, very beautiful. It reminds me of the novel I read before, but it's a pity that it has been discontinued.

A very interesting book with a lot of laughs and worth recommending

It's very comfortable to watch and very interesting. It's a good Bengtie fanfic that can make people happy.

I admire the first person to study star cores, because he might die One last time, time is starting to speed up "Stardome Train" "Pam" "Happy Man" "Black Marshal" "Black-skinned Big Sister" "Seven days a week holiday" "Star Core Hunter" "Rememberer" "Gushi's card draw" "The Luck of the African Emirates" "Combat Power Expansion" "Tang Da Ren" "No after-sales service" "I mourn for the dead" What followed me to the top of the tree was my desire for seven days off!

I think it's a very interesting novel, but if there are multiple heroines, there are only a few people. I hope there won't be too many specific characters. (Of course, the heroine's pure epileptic confession in the play does not count)

It was a lot of fun, and it made up for some regrets The author xp mostly likes mature older sisters, with such erotic descriptions But I feel that the subsequent games will basically rewrite the things I have experienced before, but the fun is great enough and it is still acceptable. At least it is better than some Suwon plots. Although it is very fun, I feel that it is becoming more and more clumsy later on. It is basically a large barrage plus what I have written before. If it can be updated faster, I may consider upgrading it. Three stars become two stars The author probably got excited after writing it, although I don't know what kind of combat power Arceus is? But judging from the past author's writing, it is estimated that he will start writing a Pokémon anime game with a barrage format. By the way, the author's big hand is starting to work. As long as the author wants to write, the protagonist will be invincible (without a systematic universal patch, where does the protagonist's invincible power come from?) Supplement: Multiple heroine harem (at present, I am very close to the soft matchmaker, Cocolia, hugging each other, Xinova is also a bit like three or four at the moment)

According to unofficial records, Lü Bu rebelled against Ding Yuan because Lü Bu saw Dong Zhuo on the battlefield and saw that he had a good face but an evil heart, and he was very talented. So it was love at first sight and admiration in my heart. After the two met in the temple, they made a private decision for life, and then they decided to kill Ding and surrender to Dong. According to unofficial records, Cao Cao presented the Seven-Star Sword to Dong Zhuo when he was taking a nap. Cao Cao came to see Dong Zhuo and saw his beautiful sleeping posture. Cao Cao fled in shame and never dared to return to Luoyang again. According to unofficial records, eighteen princes were fighting against Dong - all princes coveted Dong Zhuo's beauty, and deeply hated Lu Bu for occupying Dong Zhuo. That's why they joined forces and asked Lu Bu for Dong Zhuo. According to unofficial records, Lü Bu rebelled against Dong Zhuo because Lü Bu had a deep love for Dong Zhuo, but he also hated Dong Zhuo for attracting bees and butterflies and showed mercy at every turn. Because of love, hatred arises, so he resists the pain and rebels. What's more, according to unofficial historical records, the beauty trap is not that Dong Zhuo, Lu Bu and Diao Chan were together, but the story of Bai Xue that Dong Zhuo, Cao Cao and Yuan Shao had to learn...

All eyes, Follow me! Look at me! Look at me! I declare: i am a Padu Bud… Padu … Mei Don't worry... She quickly swept her gaze across Padu's body. Nearly half of the area there was covered with a vague haze, showing an almost chaotic state. Mei ... It's okay. However, these words used to remind Paduo "don't be impatient" actually grabbed the other person's heart. He jerked his body upwards, only to curl up again due to the severe pain. Padu No... No... Padu Ya... Sister Mei... We have to get out of here quickly! Mei Yi followed her frightened gaze and looked sideways. The once sealed mirror had been opened by a clever technique. ——But there was no reflection of the two of them, only a majestic and ominous shadow. Padu There... Is... Is... Padu It's the memory of when Kevin's boss disappeared...! Padu The person who killed Kevin's boss... Is... Is... Padu … Mei … Mei I already understand, Pado. No need to go on… Mei ... Thank you. Padu … Padu Hey... Hehe... I'm the best at this... Padu Then... Let's... Let's leave quickly...? Padu Sister Yayi... Mei Hmm... Mei Don't worry. If you encounter any danger, leave it to me to solve it. Mei Just like before... Okay? Padu OK, OK... Padu Oops, Ya... Sister Mei... It's better not to say such things... Padu People say... They say this is... A... A phrase... What does it mean? Padu It's like I'm really going to die... Don't scare me, how is that possible... Padu I've been... Very lucky... Sister Mei... I... I don't want to die... The weight in my arms disappeared. Disappeared so quickly and completely. For a moment, Mei Yi didn't know how to return her posture to normal. Mei … After a while, he slowly began to move his arms, shaking them in the air, trying to grab something. But not even a palm of cold mist could touch it The book is gone,

The plot is okay and entertaining. It can be seen that the author is working hard to learn and gain experience. He has turned some interesting short videos into texts and written them for everyone. But it is recommended not to do too much, otherwise the protagonist will become a roadside person again. To put it bluntly, fan fiction is to add your own ideas to the plot and come up with a reasonable result [Thinking]

This is not how things work. You should talk to me and cultivate feelings, give me gifts, and then achieve your goals with me on a dark and windy night. In the end, I really like you [cry] [cry]

The author, the protagonist group is waiting for the Erxiang Paradise, can they lead the three Kiana to live through the plot related to Himeko? Will it satisfy Kiana's wish? We are all caring people! [Smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile]

It's very interesting, but the main plot is too little promoted, and it's more about life. I've read almost 60 chapters, and I haven't pushed it to Beloberg. I still prefer the main plot of the invincible flow, but the author also writes very well!

It's really good-looking, just like the sea filled by robins is the sea of ​​imaginary numbers, plus many new cities will have parties together, Namik starts to go crazy, okay, no more crazy, I have seen this before, if you like Invincible and multiple heroines, you can watch it, this is what I watch, believe me.

Not bad, not bad, it's a lot of fun, Jing Yuan even panicked [face covering]

The antimatter army was caused by Kafka and the others [face covering] This can be washed away, invincible [laughing awkwardly] (Chapter 13)

It's not my book! Why did it suddenly disappear (screaming)

It's very interesting. I'm thinking about it. I support it with five stars.

@Ah Boss, why are your books gone?

OK, all the authors have been stabbed in the back, the star core is the product of the same destiny, Nanook is really the scapegoat [laughter]

In fact, it's really okay, except that the main character goes crazy for a long time, which is not like us players. After all, there is an adaptation period, and then he goes crazy. I don't admit that this is a player, but the novel is still very interesting, and I just pushed Ruan Mei. It's okay. Have a good time with your Pokémon

Very nice! Like it very much! Although I personally don't like multiple female protagonists, the male protagonist in this article has a good grasp of the distance between women. There is no female rivalry or brainless love, which did not make me have any negative emotions. Moreover, the male protagonist's character is also good, there is nothing embarrassing. I hope the author will work hard and keep writing [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart] Moreover, Xing and Qiong both scored extra points in this regard! ! ! I particularly like Qiong, and I also like Xing, so neither of them wants to give up. Both of them are extremely satisfied [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss] Why write about Pokémon, and write so much [smile] I don't like the inexplicable addition of this one. I personally don't like Pokémon. I feel that the author is almost going off topic and is always writing water characters. Can I focus on Iron Iron fandom and stop writing about Pokémon and other content? Just mention "the animation has been updated" and "related games will be released", and don't drag the Pokémon world into it. Really, I feel uncomfortable reading these chapters [smile]

If you are not the author, do you think we are perverted 😂😂

Make it by yourself, just an idea and it's gone, so you'll be happy

Why is he dead? I rely on my book!

In three months, I have read two books [crying] I don't dare to read anymore.

Why can't I see it after downloading it?