The Male Protagonist of Kuaiwen Is Attracted to the Female Co-Star Again

Very good. The writing style is very good. It is much better than those in which the heroine is delicate, soft, fragrant, sweet and waxy. I actually wonder why the heroine is written like that and the heroine is not a baby. I also like cute and cute heroines, but I have only seen one or two movies that can really make the heroine stupid, silly and sweet. Most of them are stupid and incompetent.

Finally, he is a cultured and capable author! But in the first chapter, the heroine has a feeling of high defense and low defense. I was really attracted to the heroine in the early stage. There is a saying that I like the heroine before the hero. She is cool, capable, and her fishing style is completely my cup of tea. She directly picks up the male protagonist, which makes me excited. As a result, I later become shy and want to suck on the heroine. When the male protagonist pays attention to this kind of vocabulary, to be honest, I hate the male protagonist to death [crazy]. It is undeniable that the male protagonist later impresses the female protagonist with his sincerity, but the female protagonist gives us the feeling of being dominated by her in the early stage. It cannot be changed, and there is an independent and rational good friend who is unhappy because of the change of the man [crazy] On the second plane, I saw it was a bit messy at the back.

The writing is so good! The relationship between the male and female protagonists is really heartwarming! Detach from the world and clear away emotions at the best of times. I prefer to live my whole life in a small world. The male protagonist is really good. Shimizu Fumi, I didn't sleep at all ꒦ິ^꒦ິ

The writing is good. The first world is okay. The heroine is ambitious, but I don't know what supports her ambition (this refers to the same thing as the original male protagonist) because the initial mission in the first world is not like that. The second world feels like the author writes about whatever he dreams about. Maybe he wants to write a grand and more in-depth story, but something is missing. It is directly reflected in the heroine. It is confusing. I feel that I am not half immersed. Secondly, after the favorability score of 100 in the first world, the heroine left directly. In my opinion, it is a be.

The writing style is pretty good for Tomato, and it seems to have a good sense of immersion. It was the hostess who gave me the feeling that I was sitting firmly on the Diaoyutai and changing my heart for sincerity. The first world is pretty good, and the heroine is very three-dimensional. In the second world multi-line guide, I feel that the heroine is not very smoothly portrayed, but the profile of the hero's mother is very good. Is it possible to follow a single line in the future and then the female protagonist coincidentally and the male protagonist deliberately complete multiple parallel lines, and maximize the strategy value from the secret love but not being able to do so? The heroine just needs to choose the one she likes to get close to and continue to shine.

I feel like the author is from the literature department, haha. The writing style and logic are very good, and the story is also very novel. I like this kind of long-flowing narrative, but it can be a bit confusing to intersperse some literary jargon from time to time. Of course, this can be considered a characteristic [laughs]

After reading the first story, it can be seen that Da Da Da has his own thoughts when telling stories, thinking about love, and many movies and novels. Da Da Da is not only writing stories, but also expressing his views on the world. His writing style is also very mature. The heroine is also gradually growing up. She also learns how to love while conquering others. The only thing that I feel a bit regretful about is the quotation part, such as Yitian Slaying the Dragon. There are many quotations from the original text. I feel that they could be more concise and concise. There are too many repeated quotations. My personal preference is that I prefer my own ideas and explanations to quotations~

Look forward to it, the emotional description is very delicate, the characters are normal, and your brain will not be lost due to love. I always believe that novels are worlds of different dimensions, and characters cannot be characters, and they will not go exactly according to plan. The attacker must give his sincerity to get the sincerity, and this book fits it very well. The first world is ok, the second world... The main body can see it, but the details are incomplete. I have a suggestion, maybe some scenes after marriage or some interactions between them in middle age/old age (no intention of having a baby), because at the end of the world, it feels like the prince and the princess are happily together, like a perfect imperfection, oh, and there would be more intimate scenes [shy] The ending is a bit sudden, the third world... How should I put it, I don't like the drama of saving the world, why should I save the world after being treated as an experimental subject? The heroine is willing to die for her love, and the others will become extinct. The ending is not clean 🙂 Overall, it's three stars

The author's writing style is really good. Especially among the novels I have read in recent years, especially those with this theme, they are really good. Especially in the second world, the description of the daily life of the heroine and her family will not make people feel that their lives are too divorced from reality, and it also reflects that the author has certain literary skills. If this article did not increase or decrease in favorability from time to time, I would not think that it is a fast-travel article. I haven't started reading the last post of Apocalypse yet, but I think just based on what I've seen, it totally deserves a five-star rating. (So ​​I don't quite understand why this rating is so low...)

It looks good, but there are too few. The author should work hard to update it~ I have read many articles of this type, and finally found one that is logical, thoughtful, and informative. Tears QAQ No need to throw your mind away It's not a loss if you invest in shares, really! If you tell lies, I will have eight sons! Why can't the author update ten chapters a day? It must be possible!

I found a book by chance. I thought it would be the same as the novels I had read, but the contrast was full. The teacher wrote it so well, it gave me a different feeling! ! ! ! [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

The author's writing style is very good and has a literary flair, but it doesn't match the title. He prefers a long-flowing style. I really like the description of the heroine and her father in the second world. The author's writing style in this aspect is really attractive enough for me, and it makes people feel at ease with the pace of life.

The writing is so vivid, everyday but not vulgar. The section describing the Luan tree particularly attracted me. The section where the heroine is in the sea of ​​roses is also very vital. Please pick up a pen and keep writing. It's really great!

The subject matter is interesting, the details are in place, the logical thinking is also very rigorous, and it is also good-looking. I look forward to the author updating it every day, and I will keep chasing the ending of Dapeng [smile][smile][smile]

I give the author a big thumbs up. I have finished reading the first small world. It is different from the fast-travel world I have seen before. The only flaw is a little logical problem. I hope the author will get better and better as he writes more.

The plot of the story is delicate and moving, very interesting to watch, please come on💪[Blow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Flow a kiss]

This is a novel with some literary background. The author's writing style is very good, and there are many movies that can be seen. Finally, it is no longer a plain text▄█▀█●

The writing style is very good. I have only seen the first two units. I think they are very good and worthy of five stars. The creation of men and women is wonderful hahahaha. It also contains some easy-to-understand principles, but it is too short. Looking forward to new works.

The second story is well written, but it's a bit off. It's not like a quick travel story. It can be read as a standalone book.

I feel okay haha, I quite like it

It feels quite taxing, but you can also learn some principles of doing things, which is very good

At the beginning, I thought that the heroine was the boss of the quick penetration department who had retired, but it turned out that she was not, and she would fall into confusion about her self-worth. Regarding the development of the relationship between the male and female protagonists, I still hope that the female protagonist can handle it with ease, rather than being manipulated by a 30-year-old innocent boy like the male protagonist. But the author's writing is very good. It's been a long time since I've seen such a powerful flower of the high mountains. It's not just superficial. It's still very nice.

I'm really convinced that the writing is good and the plot is good, but not many people read it in Western countries. . Author, write quickly, write quickly, write quickly!

I only watched the first world and hehe it was very well written. I will continue to follow if my character setting is explored in the next world! [Sending Hearts]

It looks good. It's different from the usual fast-traveling style. The author also added a lot of his own thoughts. It's very interesting. That pulling feeling is so cool! Ahhhhhhhhh the charm between mature men and mature women

As Dada said, it can really be read as a unit article. The most outstanding thing is the second plane, which ranks high in my heart! Four out of five stars for the second plane! Both the male and female protagonists look like real people with flesh and blood, and the characters are three-dimensional and not thin. One star is left for the first face~ Tiantian's routine is still very fragrant~

The score is completely underestimated. It is obvious that there is some skill and logic in it, and it only gets such a low score. The content is also very detailed and flowing, thank you very much

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

Love watching and looking forward to the next one

It's not bad [face covering] but the comments about how some people are so violent are so weird emmn