The Original Journey: Starting from the Totem Warrior

It's pretty good to watch, and it has logic. The most important thing is that the tribe is really united and simple, without even jealousy. The protagonist's personality is also good, and there aren't as many exaggerated adjectives as AI. Why don't you watch it?

Uh. The original version of an ancient fantasy novel? [Thinking] When in danger, teammates are sacrificed, the protagonist is waiting for death, the system is cheated, and when opportunities are obtained [makes faces] Can you please stop it, give it to me? In addition, the advantages are original themes, good-looking, good writing style, and the descriptions are more attractive, but the only problem is the storyline.

It looks good, and the details are well handled. For example, the place names will describe why they were named, such as the Valley of the Beast's Roar, the Sleeping Place, and other place names. The bow making will also describe how many times it failed to make a crude bow. Unlike similar works, it is a compound recurve bow that feels very easy. The plot is not very high and the storyline may be slow, but so far it has the potential to be the best!

It's a rare novel with a wild theme, and it doesn't make civilization as advanced as a plug-in all of a sudden. It's just that there are too few updates.

There are many places where modern language is used. It feels like the protagonist is not traveling through an era of pure barbarian tribes with extraordinary power, but traveling to another era of barbaric tribes with extraordinary power that has no government but has developed and degraded technology.

The old bookworm said it was pretty good. I read a book of the same type a long time ago. The main character is the Yanhuang tribe. I forgot what the name is. I really like this type. I hope it will be well written and carefully crafted. Good works will be seen. If nothing else, it is at least a book that can be added to the bookshelf in Tomato to savor. Come on!

Although it is an AI text, the quality is good and the settings are very complete. The AI ​​text is not necessarily worse than the real person writing. It is just that the AI ​​writing is more verbose and watery, but it updates quickly [laughing and crying]

It's a pretty good barbaric novel, but the author should update it soon. This is enough for anyone to read.

The structure of the story is very good, and it is quite exciting to watch.

I have to urge the author to update. I have already read half of it. It is the best original novel I have read so far.

Give yourself a five-star rating and support yourself [laughing]

I've watched a third of it so far. It feels pretty good, but there is no such thing as a one-and-done system. , Slowly developed. Very suitable for my taste. .

I'll go, it's not enough. A very good subject. I hope that the author will be more alert when eating and sleeping, and when he has nothing to do, he will also update 100,000 words a day, okay? Author Baobao[shy][shy][shy]

The advantages of the book "Primitive Journey: Starting from the Totem Warrior" are mainly reflected in the following aspects: The novel subject matter satisfies the fantasy of male readers: the novel is based on the core setting of "primitive tribe + beast taming". The protagonist starts as a totem warrior and gradually tames the beasts and establishes his power. This setting of "riding a dinosaur and controlling a giant beast" is extremely visually impactful and immersive, and is especially in line with male readers' fantasies of power, conquest and adventure. The details are handled well and the world view is solidly constructed: the author carefully carves out details such as place names, tribal culture, and totem systems. For example, place names such as "Beast Roaring Valley" and "Sleeping Place" are not randomly named, but are linked to the geographical environment or legendary background, which enhances the immersion of the world. At the same time, the promotion mechanism of totem warriors, blood sacrifice rituals, tribal division of labor and other settings are also relatively complete, allowing readers to clearly understand the operating logic of this primitive world. The rhythm is tight and the excitement is intensive: As a time-travel + system flow novel, the protagonist Lin Yao quickly obtains "system cheats" after falling off the cliff, and grows rapidly through sacrifices, battles, animal taming, etc., And the plot progresses without delay. Readers can continue to feel the thrill of "fighting monsters and upgrading, conquering mythical beasts, and crushing opponents", which is in line with the "fast-paced, strong feedback" reading habits of online novels. Character creation has memorable points: the protagonist Lin Yao, as a top outdoor expert, has extremely strong survivability and tactical thinking. In the primitive world, he does not rely on brute force but relies on the combination of wisdom and systems to overcome problems. Supporting characters, such as tribal leaders and enemy warriors, also have their own personalities. Some characters even have "contrasting cuteness" or "dark" qualities, which adds to the dramatic tension of the story. The serialization is stable and updates are guaranteed: the book has been updated continuously for 297 days, with a word count of 1.409 Million, which shows that the author's creative status is stable, and readers do not have to worry about "interrupted updates" or "unfinished work". For the update party, this is a very important bonus. - High ratings and popularity, word-of-mouth verification: the rating of 7.1 Is above average on the Tomato novel platform, and the data of 30,000 people reading it also shows that it has a broad audience base. Popular book reviews mentioned many times that it is "good-looking", "detailed well" and "I like the theme of animal taming", further confirming its popularity among the target readership.

It's okay, the writing is okay

The pace is a bit slow, but luckily I kept reading. I feel like the author's world view has been fully developed, and I hope he can maintain it in the future.

Overall, it's quite comfortable to read. It's a slow-burning book. You have to work hard to read the rest.

Personally I think it looks great, keep it up!

Come on, write more than 3 million words

There are too few wild themes. I personally think it is very interesting. I hope the author will continue writing.

I finally saw a normal primitive survival book again, rather than the kind of modern stuff that is casually created by a brainless system or its own database.

I've read more than 300 chapters and it feels pretty good [like]

Looks good, worth recommending

Very well written, looking forward to the follow-up

Not bad, worth watching.

It's also very interesting to watch, the plot develops well, and I feel it

As of Chapter 54, the writing is very good. I look forward to the next plot. I have read more than 250 chapters, and the pace is a bit slow. As of 250, I have not yet awakened as a witch, and I am still 12 years old. It seems to be a super long novel, and the overall style is more combat-oriented. Daily infrastructure is slightly interspersed in it. It is not a system for the time being, and it is a fragment that can be done according to what is missing. The protagonist integrates very quickly, but the modern writing style is like watching a modern military survival in the wild. Someone died in a hunting conflict. The description of emotions is really long, and the brotherhood of life and death in the military theme is instantly hallucinated. There is a supporting role in Gu. I love this role. Can't the author let him grow up a little? His character design is carefree. He always questions the protagonist's infrastructure, especially the food, and prevents explanations. He is doubtful and makes others laugh. He has so many things when the people on the background board are convinced of the protagonist and never ask any questions. , The key point is that it takes a long time to describe, and I am tired of reading it. In the end, the main character will basically say that this food is for the wizard, and Gu suddenly realizes and says, yes, yes, yes, three times. I carefully thought about this dialogue, which has appeared three times, and there is no progress at all. In the end, the protagonist is full of emotions, a warm and patient person towards his own people. I heard that the author is considering plots with multiple female protagonists in the future. I saw the author's description of the appearance of the female character Xiaoyi, and the three lines about the violet blue eyes that can never be separated. I think it is prudent. It is a bit boring to be honest. Overall, it is a good presentation of the wild world. Come on.

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

Come on keep updating

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