Beast Control: It's Just a Little Bit More Powerful.

Four stars, it is indeed female-oriented, the overall environment is very friendly, and it is comfortable to watch. The disadvantage is that the information is given too urgently. It is good when writing daily content, but for example, when the heroine's family appears, they are bombarded with a lot of information. Reading it gives me the feeling of talking about betrothal gifts and dowry before even introducing basic information on a blind date. Another thing is that I initially thought that the squad leader was a member in the profile, because the characters described were very similar, and there were many scenes. But it turned out not to be the case. When I asked for a date with a friend, I went to the profile to look for it again and found that the name was wrong [facepalm]. But like me, people who just read the profile normally will not remember the name from the beginning.

The content is very novel, but the writing style needs to be improved. I was in a hurry to write something, and it was all pushed to me, which made me a little dizzy. I didn't even remember the pet beasts clearly. I really couldn't remember which pet beast was which. There were also many names of the heroine's family, which I couldn't remember. It's a bit different from traditional writing, but I quite enjoyed reading it. It's kind of funny and humorous. You can write things less urgently and be more detailed. In this case, it may attract more readers. Great author, keep up the hard work and come on! Looking forward to~❛˓◞˂̵✧

This book is really good to read, and the dialogue between the protagonist and his friends is really funny, which makes people want to put it down😄The author's gifted imagination is also very good