Mingchao, It Turns Out You Are Not a Time Traveler

Very good Ah Piao. When I think about the heroine even if she abandons herself after returning to Earth, Ah Piao can anchor her back and I can't help but hum.

It feels very good, the character design follows the game very well, the heroine can also be seen to be in love with the beautiful girl, and sometimes she is very motherly or wifely and has a delicate and sensitive heart. For example, when she took Wei Shen to attend the encore to meet her mother, and it can be seen that she was a little clumsy at the beginning entirely because she was not familiar with Solaris, but her sensitivity has obviously improved by the time she got to Li Naxi Tower. And I think the part where Jin Kuo and Coletta act together is very essential, because this time there are two people around Piao, which is in line with the original principle of Coletta taking risks first and then getting rewarded. The heroine saw it directly, and did not expose it, but made it clear that both parties trusted each other by walking with Coletta. The original plot is really more, but the Chaoyuan plot is really good. I think it is normal that some of the companion stars are not included. After all, it feels very inconsistent for the companion stars of Chun and Changli to have a third non-female woman participate [laughing] And it can be seen that the composition of the author is really complex. I think it is good that there is no system. It is really more in line with the world view and more immersive. The small interaction between the heroine and Piao is also very interesting. It is a pity that the bathroom picture cannot be seen clearly, it is obviously a sugar-coating plot. [Cover face]

It's very good-looking. It was originally because Ming Chao's performance was good, and I had pictures in my mind. The author also wrote very pictures, and the author accurately grasped Ah Piao's character design, and the small interactions between them also enriched the characters. Now not many people watch it because Ming Chao's plot can be solved more by Ah Piao, and there is not much effort to change. And now Ming Chao is only 2.7, The plot is still small, and there is still a lot of content that has not been explained in detail, so the creation difficulty is also high, but I hope the author will not I'm discouraged. It's better to say that the fanfic people are here to see how to change the plot of the original work, or to pick up female characters in the game, but because most of the female characters in Mingchao are really picked up by others, no one will read it. From this point of view, Mingchao's plot is There is not much room for creation in fan fiction, so I just write about the male character [laughing], and the female perspective. People don't have a high impression of the female protagonist as much as the other female characters in the game, so it's not easy to write it well, not to mention that the male protagonist in the plot is the male protagonist Yasashi. It's not easy to confess directly, so I can only write about my companions, but because of Ah Piao's identity, the heroine's identity must be special [laughing]. Overall, the author is full of sincerity, and it's very interesting. Come on!

Overall, it looks pretty good, but I'm actually not very optimistic about the heroine and Ah Piao. From 1.1 To 2.7, I will find that Lao Piao treats characters with blue elements very differently. An Bao, Kati, and Yuno, these three blue characters, are different from others. 2 .7 Is a blue character to help Ah Piao, and now that Ming Chao is the screenwriter of Zhanshuang, it is not surprising that something happened that made Ah Piao need to be restarted again. The commander of Zhanshuang next door has died several times. Of course, the above are all personal opinions, don't criticize if you don't like it.

Ming Chao only made an account but didn't play it. I finished the first part and skipped the second half, mainly looking for the scenes where the heroine and Piao get along. However, it seems that the bond between the heroine and Piao is not as good as the others. After all, the relationship is gone. There is still some interest in the beginning, but it feels like the relationship has returned in the later part, but they get along with each other tacitly, but there is a feeling of companionship. If you follow the game, hahaha, it will be really long, and the long road to pursue Piao. It feels very difficult to go from being a tacit partner to a partner who supports each other, because there have been many similar positions in the past, but if it is just for this period of the heroine's life, it can really be considered. The heroine feels that she is satisfied with the companionship, so it is actually good to forget about it. But I still want to see some cool perspectives. But I feel like it will be a bit cruel after watching it. Maybe it's because I feel a little bit like I have a crush on someone, or it means that falling in love with someone is quite torturous. And every incident has an ambiguous partner. Haji, you guys, sometimes it would be better to be happy. Cut the mess with a sharp knife. Come on come on!

This is the first time I've seen Mingchao's second creation from the perspective of a female protagonist. Although there are some problems with the narrative, I still support it and don't be pigeonholed.

It's a good idea to use the original sentence of the game🥰

Each task has a beautiful name. Ming Chao is very careful in this regard, or uses sentences from some classic books such as Coletta. "If on a Rainy Night, a Family" is a modification of Calvino's "If on a Winter Night, a Traveler". It is not only romantic but can also hide the unspeakable feelings of the characters in the plot. This kind of metaphor is really beautiful. So what kind of name should the protagonist's companion mission have? Abba Abba!

I really want to see them together. (❁´◡`❁)*✲ﾟ*

It's a good book. Even if you haven't played Mingchao, it doesn't affect your reading. I hope there can be more interaction between the drifter and the heroine. I like Tiantian. I hope the author can keep reading [Sending Hearts]

By the way, how will the heroine and Ah Piao deal with their identities in the later stage? Should they be lovers or partners?

It's also surprisingly good-looking. Come on, author!

It is a very, very rare combination of a male protagonist and a female protagonist. There are many parts of the plot that are original. It is recommended that those who have played it just pick the difference parts to read, otherwise it may be very boring. I watched it for a week before I finished the 1.0 Plot, but the interaction between the male and female protagonists is too satisfying. This is what I want to watch.

By the way, is the protagonist CP a drifter?[Thinking][Thinking]

Will there be a male character in the future who can make Piao feel in danger? I've been pushing the plot a lot lately, and I hope Kuro will release a plot replay in the future, but sometimes I can't even catch the plot.

Oh my God, the first time I took on the role was not the protagonist, but a drifter. I really went crazy playing Mingchao [face covering]

I laughed to death. When I read the postscript, I realized that this book has not been rated yet. [I learned] to give it a rating. It's very interesting. Using a female protagonist has changed a lot of the regrettable aspects of the game.

It's good to watch. There should be more plots between Ah Piao and the heroine! I want to eat sweet candy!

A very good Mingchao fanfic. It is a niche treasure book.

Seriously waiting for updates

Okay, very good book

After reading it, I just want to say: Ah Piao, you are really guilty [laughing]!

The quality is surprisingly good

Haokan, very important to cloud players

I want to watch the protagonist give out sweets 😭

I rejoice in the book you wrote

How can I put it this way? I have never played Mingchao. I think the plot and the ambiguity of the heroine's initiative are quite interesting.

It's been a long time since I read Tomato. This is the first time I've rated a book. It's very good. The author must not be a eunuch. [Blowing kiss]

Awesome, very awesome

The writing is quite good, but why is the rating so low?