[Double strong x unlimited flow x crazy batch x beauty x cunning love brain]
[Crazy criticism of paranoid players - the incarnation of rules, the cool and beautiful boss suffers]
I am the ultimate boss of the dungeon, Shen Mo.
Players, just consumables that need to be cleared.
Until, I met Xie Yuan——
Number one in the player rankings, he is also the craziest lunatic who haunts me.
He ignored my rules of death and extended an invitation to spend the rest of his life with me in my realm of terror.
"You clear me and I pursue you, that's fair."
I activated the highest authority to chase him, but he became more and more excited: "Baby, you finally only look at me."
I tried to reason with him: "I am the rule, I have no heart."
But he tore off the shackles of the world and embraced me in his arms, his voice hoarse and crazy:
"Then let me make love to you, rule number one."
Reader comments
So far, I have read Song of Dolls, and it's okay. I feel that the description is very good. Although I can't say that the description is exquisite, at least it is smooth and not too sloppy. I feel that it is up to standard for newcomers. But in terms of plot, the emotions are a bit fast, and there is a very strange feeling. I feel that writing Xie Yuan deliberately stepped on the edge of the rules. Shen Mocai didn't have any trouble and lacked initiative. We can write about Xie Yuan doing something and Shen Mo was forced to correct it. We can't deal with Xie Yuan. Instead of relying entirely on Shen Mo's soft heart, let Xie Yuan slowly integrate into Shen Mo's life like this. Later, it would be reasonable to write about Shen Mo's soft heart when Xie Yuan really does something that cannot be resolved. [Chigua][Chigua] The above personal opinions are just suggestions and evaluations. I hope the author will write better and better (maybe what I say will be confusing, my logic is not very good)
Ahem, cough, give yourself one
From the current point of view, it looks very good [love]
Very, very good-looking, at least it pokes fun at me
Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking
After following the updates for a while, I finally have time to write a long review.
Let me talk about the writing first. The whole novel feels quite comfortable to read. The author has his own little ingenuity. He does not just fixate on one main perspective. One copy focuses on describing the psychology of one protagonist, and the next copy may focus on describing the psychology of another protagonist. I feel good about this arrangement. It does not seem confusing, and even seems detailed and appropriate to a certain extent, which helps to construct the character image.
As for the characters, there is no need to say much about the two protagonists. A possessive big dog and a manager who is cold on the outside and soft on the inside. The interaction is still very sweet. The big dog is enthusiastic and the manager is reserved. The intimate interaction should be a one-sided "bullying" (?). As for Xiao Bingcube, why are you so angry at being teased every day (?), Can you stand still [laughing and crying] But I feel that the character of Shen Mo as a manager is very novel and interesting, and it is a highlight. Then the supporting characters are somewhat flattened, and their function is to promote the progress of the dungeon + light bulb. It depends on whether the author wants to integrate a few main supporting characters in the future. We will wait and see. The overall character creation is quite satisfactory.
As for the plot, the entire story is based on the infinite flow dungeon. Each copy is relatively short compared to other infinite flow dungeons. But for me personally, I can't really understand the overly complicated infinite flow dungeons😅, and the horror atmosphere of this novel is not heavy. This level is just right for me, so feel free to read it. Overall, the dungeon plot and the emotional line are about half and half, and the candy is enough to eat. So far, the overt lines I have seen are ongoing, and the dark lines are the plans of the system. The villain's malicious intent is not clear. Currently, I only see the minions. Let's see how the author arranges it next [Learned]
All in all, I can enjoy this little sweet story with ease. I wonder if the protagonists will have more interactive forms in the future, and whether the background will not just be in the copy. It can be seen from this novel that the author is a relatively good new author, and I believe he will be even better and more brilliant in the future [Learned]
Very nice looking
Everything else I saw was okay although I didn't like it a little bit. Anyway, I enjoyed it
So far, I have read Song of Dolls, and it's okay. I feel that the description is very good. Although I can't say that the description is exquisite, at least it is smooth and not too sloppy. I feel that it is up to standard for newcomers. But in terms of plot, the emotions are a bit fast, and there is a very strange feeling. I feel that writing Xie Yuan deliberately stepped on the edge of the rules. Shen Mocai didn't have any trouble and lacked initiative. We can write about Xie Yuan doing something and Shen Mo was forced to correct it. We can't deal with Xie Yuan. Instead of relying entirely on Shen Mo's soft heart, let Xie Yuan slowly integrate into Shen Mo's life like this. Later, it would be reasonable to write about Shen Mo's soft heart when Xie Yuan really does something that cannot be resolved. [Chigua][Chigua] The above personal opinions are just suggestions and evaluations. I hope the author will write better and better (maybe what I say will be confusing, my logic is not very good)
Ahem, cough, give yourself one
From the current point of view, it looks very good [love]
Very, very good-looking, at least it pokes fun at me
Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking After following the updates for a while, I finally have time to write a long review. Let me talk about the writing first. The whole novel feels quite comfortable to read. The author has his own little ingenuity. He does not just fixate on one main perspective. One copy focuses on describing the psychology of one protagonist, and the next copy may focus on describing the psychology of another protagonist. I feel good about this arrangement. It does not seem confusing, and even seems detailed and appropriate to a certain extent, which helps to construct the character image. As for the characters, there is no need to say much about the two protagonists. A possessive big dog and a manager who is cold on the outside and soft on the inside. The interaction is still very sweet. The big dog is enthusiastic and the manager is reserved. The intimate interaction should be a one-sided "bullying" (?). As for Xiao Bingcube, why are you so angry at being teased every day (?), Can you stand still [laughing and crying] But I feel that the character of Shen Mo as a manager is very novel and interesting, and it is a highlight. Then the supporting characters are somewhat flattened, and their function is to promote the progress of the dungeon + light bulb. It depends on whether the author wants to integrate a few main supporting characters in the future. We will wait and see. The overall character creation is quite satisfactory. As for the plot, the entire story is based on the infinite flow dungeon. Each copy is relatively short compared to other infinite flow dungeons. But for me personally, I can't really understand the overly complicated infinite flow dungeons😅, and the horror atmosphere of this novel is not heavy. This level is just right for me, so feel free to read it. Overall, the dungeon plot and the emotional line are about half and half, and the candy is enough to eat. So far, the overt lines I have seen are ongoing, and the dark lines are the plans of the system. The villain's malicious intent is not clear. Currently, I only see the minions. Let's see how the author arranges it next [Learned] All in all, I can enjoy this little sweet story with ease. I wonder if the protagonists will have more interactive forms in the future, and whether the background will not just be in the copy. It can be seen from this novel that the author is a relatively good new author, and I believe he will be even better and more brilliant in the future [Learned]
Very nice looking
Everything else I saw was okay although I didn't like it a little bit. Anyway, I enjoyed it