Mihawk's Long-Lost White Moonlight

Papaxi sauce is so cute! Author, you must be all!!! Hawkeye can be the main palace, but don't give up on the others - just Modo Modo~ By the way, can we add Sanji? Chivalry is really very charming. (Of course, if it affects the plot and writing, then just ask the author to do it at his own pace)

Could the author just make Hawkeye the male protagonist? If the heroine falls in love with someone else on the road in order to find Hawkeye, then the story will change 😢. I feel like there can be one-liners about the heroine from other people on the road, but the heroine can't really like them. At worst, the ending will be an if line 🥺. Please, the author's book is very beautiful, it must be Hawkeye 😘😘😘 Why hasn't Hawkeye appeared yet? Papasi has so many memories with everyone, so will she choose Hawkeye in the end? [Fear] I didn't dare to look down, for fear that it wouldn't be the ending I wanted.

This is my first attempt at writing a full-length novel. The author still has many shortcomings and immaturities in the narrative rhythm and plot control. I also ask for your tolerance and gentle correction of the shortcomings❤️ I am full of original intentions and will continue to polish and grow slowly~ ps: I am really grateful to the babies who have been silently accompanying me and supporting me. You are so heartwarming and gentle. This article actually didn't intend to achieve much. Chun Chun chased One Piece before and wanted to generate electricity for love. In fact, I almost forgot about the previous plot 🤦, so I added a lot of personal settings. In fact, there were many times when I couldn't write it down and wanted to give up, but every time I read the comments, I couldn't let it go. In short, although the writing is not very good, the author will try his best to persevere [Working on the manuscript][Working on the manuscript] Uh... Finally... If you really can't continue writing, we'll see you in the next one... (Bushi)

Very nice! The author's writing style is delicate and logical, and the writing method used in a pirate fanfic is also very novel. The heroine is three-dimensional, and the emotions gradually change naturally. The content feels very comfortable to read and not abrupt. Ahhhhhhhh! Very pretty! This is truly a hidden gem! Why isn't it popular? The author's reply is also very interesting! 🍅What the hell happened to you! When I read the introduction, I thought it was a tadpole looking for a mother who gave up her pursuit of personality in order to chase Hawkeye. But later on, it turned out that it was not the case. Hawkeye was instead a hook. No spoilers. In short, the heroine was influenced a lot by Hawkeye, and she became who she is now.

This book is really good to read, and the content is quite novel. I am curious about when Hawkeye will meet the heroine. Hehe (he will fall in love with Ace if he doesn't show up! Well, red hair will work, Rosinandi will work, Luo will work too) Help, I feel like everyone can do it ╮(‵▽′)╭

I skipped through it. The advantage is that the writing is good and the characters are not very OOC. The disadvantage is that the rhythm is very weak. It can be said that there is no rhythm. I didn't realize this at first and I was still trying to figure out why the writing was very smooth. However, it was a bit boring to read. After thinking about it carefully, in addition to the plot design being a bit cliche, the biggest reason is that the article has no rhythm. Every plot uses a lot of description. The advantage is that some scenes are well rendered. The disadvantage is that it is like a car traveling at a constant speed, so it is easy to fall asleep while reading. It seems to be the author's first book, I hope it will get better and better in the future!

Such a cute Papaxi, she can look good with anyone, she must be all of them, it hurts my heart to abandon anyone, they are all too embarrassing.

Hmm, the author's writing is very good! It's so natural, and the story is so original, our Pacifica baby is so gentle! In short, this is a rare pirate novel. The author is very lively and feels as gentle as Patsy! The author must persevere! Love you(ღ˘⌣˘ღ)

Oh, ho, ho, ho, ho, ho, ho, super good-looking, super appealing to me, even the amnesia plot is not annoying, all efforts are in vain, and only the knife is issued, but it integrates well with the whole text, making people feel that "the plot should develop like this", it is one of the few pirate otome that I don't hate and think it is well written!

I like it, good-looking, Papasi is such a charming woman