The Fat Kid of the Akimichi Clan

View comments up to the latest chapter 182 Overall, I would give this Naruto fanfic five stars, although in my opinion there are some shortcomings in a few descriptions or specific plot developments. And unlike many other clichéd Naruto fanfics, many turning points are regrettable in the end, and there is no clichéd rewriting of the fate of the characters. For example, Minato Kushina is still sacrificed, and Obito and Lin have the same ending, but in terms of overall logic, it is more self-explanatory and more real. An ordinary member of the Akimichi family does have limited growth in such a tight time. He cannot be invincible at the beginning like other system novels, and it is a brainless novel. Therefore, some endings are unavoidable, but I did my best to do my best as a "prophet" who knows the development of the story. In addition, in terms of the characters involved so far, whether it is the indecision of the third generation or the upper class represented by Danzo Mito Kamenbu, including all races, everyone's character design is the same as in the Naruto anime in my impression. There is no out of character, no OOC, which makes people feel immersed. Finally, I would like to thank the author for allowing Naruto to have a better childhood in this parallel world. I will continue to follow the updates 😘

Great, I think the narrative is very realistic, not cheating, not invincible, the weakness and inability of a family member in the face of politics and war are vividly portrayed, and the bond with family and friends is not top-notch, but it has its own characteristics and is not streamlined.

First of all, this book only has a score of 6.5, Which is too low! According to the 🍅 system's cool writing style, it will definitely not be 9 points, but it shouldn't be only 6 points or so. Just talking about the three families of Zhu, Deer and Die planning to bury three generations, this book can score 8.5 Points. Secondly, many readers have cited several unreasonable settings in the article, but who stipulates that fan fiction cannot have its own settings? And I think the setting in the article conforms to the logic of the book. Finally, let me talk about a few passages in this book that I think are worth pursuing (I won't spoil the specific content). The first one is that the protagonist and family members fight against Kyuubi. The second one is the entire process from the genocide of Uchiha to the burial of three generations (from the accumulation of conflicts to the deepening of conflicts, and finally the outbreak of conflicts). The third author has not updated it yet, but I hope it is Pain who attacks Konoha for the same reason as the first point on the Night of the Nine-Tails, a group portrait, everyone is working hard to protect their home. The fourth point is the same as the third point. The author has not updated it, but I guess it may be the fourth war.

At present, I have reached more than 290 chapters. Let's talk about it briefly. The character creation is more realistic, and the plot is also logical. The author's plot is not too big, so the protagonist is often deflated, but it is more in line with the impression of a child of a normal family. Before I read it, I noticed some comments saying that the plot has not changed. I think, this is not a good article. It is already good to do what is in the article when the protagonist's abilities are limited. Ps: I don't know if it's because of the new book or the rating, but the battle plot is a bit bloody, and this one is a bit heavy-handed. However, the descriptions are quite good, including the daily descriptions. All in all, just put it on my bookshelf and let it languish for a while 😏. I'm really looking forward to the plot in the future. I don't like Cavan for personal reasons. I like to read it all at once, so it's not that the writing is bad. Good luck to the author ❤️

The book is very good, but what I want to read is to change the tragedy, not to know that the tragedy is going to happen but to be powerless to face it.

I want to read a cool story about Kaishinka, a 5-year-old Jonin, a 7-year-old Kage, a 9-year-old Super Kage, and a 10-year-old Six Paths go out smoothly and go straight forward. This is a rare Naruto book in Tomato. Maybe it is more suitable to appear on QD, because the writing style has the flavor of those books back then. Overall, it has some minor flaws, but it's generally very good, and among the fanfics written from the Akimichi family's point of view, this one ranks among the best.

It's okay, you can take a look at it to pass the time. I just finished reading the latest chapter and it feels really good. The main character takes the secret medicine and fights Danzo well written here.

If you like to read Naruto stories that are reasonable and not plug-ins, you can try it. The daily life of youth in the early stage can be your own thing when you grow up, but if you like to read cool stories, don't read it. You are a slow-burning Naruto story, and it can't be saved by any tragedy. This book also has some reasonable complements to some Naruto plots. It is a good book (remember if you like cool stories, don't read it! Don't read it! Don't read it! Say important things three times)

It's pretty good, why hasn't anyone seen it?

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