Disciple, How Many Good Masters Do You Have?

These two protagonists are a perfect match. Shou was ignored and neglected by Gao in her previous life, and she only dared to be jealous and hurt the favored person instead of the instigator [laugh] After being reborn, she was entangled by Gao. Just saying that she had a grudge from her previous life and could not accept the attack did not affect the love for Gao in Shou's heart at all [laugh] And this attack, Shou was obviously caught by that person to cover up the truth about him becoming a demon, and then Shou defended Gong's reputation by saying that he seduced the master and was hunted down. How could Shou not be able to protect Shou if he was so powerful? [Rolls eyes] He destroyed it with his own hands. Because of Shou's cultivation, he protected Shou and bore the heaviest punishment for him, and then Shou was extremely moved. Gong also said that Shou's life was his, and he felt very speechless... Why should he force Shou to love him, or should he abolish Shou's cultivation... It's just my personal opinion, because I am a very narrow-minded person, so if the grievances caused by attacking were to happen to me, I would definitely hate him to death. I feel that the punishment for attacking and blocking is what he deserves. At least he is right in this aspect [smile] I gave it a four-point rating because after reading dozens of chapters, the author's writing is very good, and it's a new book. I didn't want negative reviews to dampen the score, but I feel uncomfortable giving it a five-point rating [cover face][cover face][cover face]

It looks good. I look forward to the follow-up. There is a big difference in attack between the past life and this life. I am curious about how it developed like that in the past life [Thoughts]

I clicked in casually to read it. I didn't expect it to be so good. The big title and a lot of the content almost made me laugh. I don't mind reading the novel, as long as it's good, anything will do. The daily life of the shameless master and the little old-fashioned apprentice completely touched my heart. It's my cup of tea anyway.

It looks good, it looks good, it looks good, it looks good, it looks good, it looks good, I really like the character Yun Shen 😍 Can it be he? Please please please please please please please please please please. That's it - when Yun Shen was eating and dirty, I didn't want to watch it, and then Be, and I didn't want to watch it either. I just felt that eating the heart was a bit inexplicable (but it wasn't malicious, it was just that I suddenly didn't want to watch it), but it was pretty good-looking, and the front part was very sweet.

Greatly updated by the author. The content is very interesting. Fast pace! No procrastination. Don't be cruel. Dear author, can you give me some information later? Light snow strengthens. I hope he's not a weak point. I have my own ability to protect my memories. I hope the past life chapter won't be too cruel. The summary is sad but a little funny. Yes, yes, please don't give me amnesia jokes or stand-in jokes. I really can't accept it. The previous story is very exciting. I hope the subsequent stories will be equally exciting. Come on! [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss] The more I read, the more I felt like it was going to be. The author told me it was he! [Almost crying] [Almost crying]

Hee hee (♡˙˙♡), we love this kind of food, it's a little bit eccentric and very sweet [laughs]

To be honest, I didn't understand what it was about... But the author's writing style is really good and great. Lou Jianxue experienced such strong resentment and hatred, not being able to ask for anything, and being separated from love, but looking back, she realized that everything was false. Just when I saw it, I felt that the world view suddenly became very grand. The Yunshen, Qingyan, and Jin that we know are just part of Lou Guanxue, or the evil destiny that Si Jun has experienced. He still needs to continue reincarnation to wash away his sins. But the fly in the ointment is that the protagonist is on the run all the way hahaha. He escaped this time but was caught the next time. To be honest, I was a little angry when I watched it. I always felt that Lou Jianxue has always been an action person. Since he has determined that this matter needs to be done, he will step forward without hesitation. Whether he went to find Master Yun Shen and entered the demon world alone, or returned to the place where he had been expelled to bury his corpse and was caught, there was a feeling that he was very smart, but not that smart. But regarding the career line, such as the war, Lou Jianxue's own subjective thinking can actually be put into more consideration? All in all, the writing of this article is very good, and it can be seen that the basic skills are very solid. However, there is still a long way to go in terms of the harmony of the logic in the book and the tempering of the protagonist himself.

I was short of books at night, so I thought of looking around. I think it's still very new. In the type of cultivating immortals, the main character is usually the senior brother, and the attacker is the junior brother. It's rare to see this kind of pairing, but just because many of them are senior brothers, I found it very interesting when I saw it. I personally don't like forced love in captivity. I have avoided it when I read articles before. This time I wanted to try a different type. I didn't expect it to be accepted quite well. It may also be related to the author's great narrative ability. I feel that it is quite good. From the character of Yun Shen in the appearance, I feel that it is not He cultivates ruthlessness, and in the latest plot, Yun Shen's mother said that Yun Shen would kill his father. In the previous plot, before Yun Shen took the small building to inspect, there was also a plot about Yun Shen's father, and it was still very embarrassing, because his father is now in a situation where Yun Shen is imprisoned and tortured. , And there is also an explanation for Yun Shen's gray hair. Although some of the protagonists have problems expressing love because of their different ways of doing things, fortunately, Yun Shen suddenly realized it this time. In short, it is very good. Yun Shen and Xiaolou must have a good [sending heart] [sending heart] [sending heart]

It's quite good, but the description of how his master fell in love with him was a bit vague at the beginning. Everything else was okay. The love and affection between master and disciple was quite good.

It's pretty good-looking, but I hope it's he [sending my heart]

The tumultuous and sweet master-disciple tug, I did this "bloody" thing! I thought it was a cliché at the beginning, but I didn't expect that the more I read, the more complicated it becomes: the master is cold on the surface, but in fact he is clearly crazy, crazy and sober; the reborn disciple wants to escape with the shadow of his past life, but is locked tightly by the master's paranoid possessiveness. The two people's "he escapes and the other chases" pull is sad and sweet, and every chapter made me laugh and enjoy it~ The most rare thing is the details: the writing is so delicate that one can taste the emotional dislocation between the two people - the apprentice is afraid of repeating the same mistakes, and hides caution in false confessions; the master's possessiveness is wrapped in the gentleness of secretly clearing obstacles. The only small regret is that the foreshadowing of Master's affection is a little vague, but the interaction is too good to hold up!

I really like the original title and cover. I'm a little regretful that there's no extra story. But I'm very happy that Yun Shen and Jian Xue are together in the end. Because the data is relatively poor, the teacher's writing may be a bit too hasty. I can feel that the teacher is trying his best to meet our requirements, but the platform does not provide traffic, which makes the teacher a little depressed. The content is very interesting. I hope that all colleagues will not poke the author's pain points or make extreme remarks when commenting. My impression of the content of the book is that it is generally written according to the introduction, but the details are a little different. The teacher worked very hard to fill in the previous pitfalls, and described the contradictions in the protagonist's emotional line very vividly, like a young couple, very cute. I hope the teacher can be happy every day and follow his own wishes [Love]

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking. Never be, be he

The author's writing is very good, the writing style is super good [Adoration] In my opinion, the author's writing style can be ranked in the top three [Adoration] and the plot is also very novel, I have never encountered it before, the character creation is also great, he looks like a real person, the middle part always makes me sad I'm crying, but it finally gets sweet later [crying] So this novel is really good to read. I have a small request. After finishing the main text, can you write a sweet side story about Xiaolou and Yun Shen? It's just Xiaolou and Yun Shen, not Xiaolou and Qingyan [crying] Please, please [crying]

The writing is excellent. Originally, I was so short on reading that I only occasionally read fanfics, but this original piece is really great. It broke the feeling of master and disciple that I had read before, and the inner struggle was very in place. Later, the whole process of whether Yun Shen, Jin and Qing Yan could not distinguish between each other was heart-wrenching, but inexplicably true. The story may be a little bloody and confusing in some places, but he really describes the protagonist's entire psychological growth very well. Although this book may not be biased towards the general public, it is really delicious if you take a bite of it among the niche audience.

It's beautiful, I think it's better than most of the articles in Tomato. The characters are very good, the characters are not thin, the plot is not brainless, and the relationship between the protagonists is also sincere. It's delicious, so delicious, and there's a bit of human contradiction in it. It's super fragrant.

Good-looking [sending heart] [sending heart] [sending heart] [sending heart] [sending heart] I wish Master and Lou Jianxue to be together forever, without the pain of three lives, and always be happy [sending heart] [sending heart] [sending heart] [sending heart]

Recently, I have been looking for a book with the theme of cultivating immortals. I accidentally turned to this introduction and thought this one was very special. I had never seen anything like this before, so I clicked in and read it. It is really good-looking. I have never seen this kind of theme of cultivating immortals.

The words in it are very interesting, and there are many classic sentences. It is really beautiful. At the end, it felt like it jumped out of my cognition and became very profound. It is so beautiful😈😈😈😈

When he escapes, he chases him, and he cannot fly without wings. Hehehehe, let's go to the crematorium for chasing my wife. However, Master, work hard to get your wife.

I'm still a little bit upset. This is the most distressing article I've ever read. I almost cried a lot tonight [crying][crying][crying][crying] Even a knife and a knife can't save it (I don't think I represent the general public)

I think it's pretty cool. It may look like he's abandoning his past life experiences and getting back together, but if you look closely, I personally feel that his past life and this life are not the same person. He attacks the strong and returns to the strong, but there are beings stronger than him. I didn't understand why he had to abolish his cultivation. Later, it seems quite unrealistic to think about so many people fighting one by one. The latter part I think is a bit sadistic and makes me feel a little uncomfortable watching it. Of course, this is just my personal opinion.

What else was said. Five points is a big deal. I'll give it too. It's well written and the characters are well developed. The content of the article really makes me love and hate it. How can you make me cry like this and love like this. I want to follow you for the rest of my life, author Da Da.

How can I put it, after reading it, I feel very regretful and melancholy. The two protagonists will not have inexplicable conflicts, and then the illogical sadomasochism begins. Moreover, many of the words written in big letters by the author make people feel and understand. The emotional processing is also a long-term process. It is not a love at first sight plot. Anyway, I think it is good [Sending Hearts]

You can be very good, but I don't know now that I'm seeing this place. I just haven't figured out what it means to be this master in my previous life, but I feel that there must be some misunderstanding in it.

I really like this book. I read it as soon as I saw the tweets. The plot and emotional line are also very good. I hope you won't get stuck and get a steady stream of inspiration. Merry Christmas! I love you so much [love]

The writing is good, the emotional lines are very delicate, not impatient at all, it just goes with the flow. The teacher's portrayal of the characters is also very good. It looks good and looks good.

It's really beautiful! The author writes really well and the characters are well created! Everyone is very vivid and makes people feel distressed. The plot made me feel sad, but it is really good to watch, but I don't know why the rating is not very high. I think the author's writing style is also very good! The emotions are so delicately written! Xiaolou's firm stand when facing his emotional awakening; Yun Shen's love for Xiaolou; Jin's past; Qing Yan's persistence in love. I won't say anything fancy, but this book is really highly recommended! It's really beautiful! [Almost crying] [Almost crying] Xiaolou is really sober, Qingyan is so cute, and I respect Xiaolou very much. I think Xiaoyu is also very good... Everyone has a mouth, so there won't be any inexplicable conflicts or misunderstandings. It's a really nice book! I wish the author a better book as he writes more! Getting more and more popular!

Who did Lou Jianxue fall in love with in the end, Yun Shen, Demon Lord, Qing Yan? The sad thing is that he didn't even invite him. Maybe it's because Yun Zao paid more. I prefer him. I feel sorry for him. I hope the author will finish it as soon as possible [Blowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss]

I don't know how to evaluate it, but it's very good-looking. If you click on it and read it, you will definitely have the same feeling as me. The author's writing is very good, the logic is clear, and the emotions are very good. However, I haven't finished reading it yet. Many people hope that the author will do it, but I would rather read He. Anyway, it is very good-looking.