Douluo Dalu: I Refuse to Be Tang San’s Lackey and Marry Qian Renxue

Just say a few words. At first, my curiosity was aroused by a bunch of bad reviews - they said that the first dozen or so chapters were ridiculously poorly written, so I wanted to find out. Even if I was a shi, I wanted to taste it for myself... After actually reading it, the rhythm in the early stages was really messy. Most likely, the author didn't figure out the core idea in the early stage and relied only on the outline, which made the reading very slow. But since the protagonist joined the Wuhun Palace and the Iron Triangle expanded to F4, the plot logic has obviously become smoother, and the author's creative ideas have truly come to fruition, and the quality of subsequent content has straightened up... Generally speaking, the idea is still OK, not very shi [what] [awkward laugh] What really made me completely change my mind was related to Poseidon Island Killing King. As soon as 3599 came out, I changed my mind. Since it is a party of 35, there is one thing that must be given five stars 🥰 🥰 🥰 This part completely broke my preconceptions. I thought it was a common "beat up Tang San" kind of cool fanfic, but I didn't expect that the whole process did not deviate from the core main line of the original work, and only made small adjustments to the details. It respects the framework of the original work and at the same time has its own ingenuity, which is particularly rare. After reading further, I can feel that the author may have regarded the protagonist in the book as a reflection of his own heart just like Tang Jia San Shao created Tang San. The overall three views of the story are very correct, and the core idea is not deviated. Of course, the shortcomings are also obvious. The writing style is indeed very ordinary and lacks explanation. It can be seen that it is more of a hands-on writing, and the written expression does not have many highlights; the battle armor, some weapon settings, and the deterrent significance of nuclear bombs in the book are far greater than the actual combat effect (I really understand 🤔 Is this considered to be a lesson learned from Dou 2? Huo Yuhao became a god in a hurry and left A bunch of mess) but the advantages are also outstanding. The plot ideas in the later period are getting clearer and clearer. At the same time, the author also vaguely connects Dou Yi's Da Ming, Er Ming and Dou Twenty Ferocious Beasts (Emperor Tian, Zi Ji, etc.), And uses the setting of "sleep seal, wake up and restart" to connect, filling some of the gaps in the original series. This is very thoughtful. After all, even the third young master of the Tang family had problems with connection gaps and logical confusion when he wrote Dou Yi and Dou II, so there is no need to be too harsh on the fan authors. There are many excellent works in this kind of fan creations that are as good as the original works. This book is a typical "the more you read, the smoother it becomes" - the early stage is messy, but the later stage gradually gets better, the ideas become more and more clear, the core framework and creativity are worthy of recognition, if the writing is polished, the follow-up potential is great. I look forward to the author's continued efforts 😎 Also, many of the endings have something to say by the author. This one is quite thoughtful and good 🧐

Can you write down the number of chapters? I don't even know which chapter I'm looking at.

It's pretty good, not too exaggerated! Come on, author

Smooth and reasonable connection

So far so good!

Let's take a look and cherish it. I don't know why, Douluo Dalu Book Club was blocked.

It looks good but is not too brainless.