Zerg: the Cannon Fodder Male Worm Is Targeted by the Crazy Major General

It's very interesting. The author has done a good job, but if you are here for 1v1, please remember to turn off the comments. There are always comments about people criticizing the official match. But I just like to read the comments of the staunch 1v1 official match party... In other words, I am actually here to fight against the lovers. There is also a crematorium in the later stage.

It's tied. The author's writing is really good. I feel that Gong is very charming. Although he is weak, he has his own ideas and courage, and the description of Zerg society is also very realistic. The fact is that even the Male Protection Association protects powerful males. In fact, it is very realistic. As a powerless male, it is equivalent to sending a person who dominates by being a male to prison. For those high-level males, Gong is He is an alien and a traitor, so I want to get rid of him. The writing is very realistic and real. I really like the relationship between Gong and Shou. Although Gong is weak, he is emotionally superior, but he is not emotionless towards Shou. They are all described in some details. Gong loves beauty the most. The author writes it very well. I hope you will stick to your own ideas and ignore other bad remarks, because there are more people who like your writing than those who deliberately speak to hurt you.

Very nice, no poisonous spots. Gong Bao is so pretty and gentle. She is the sick beauty I like. 1 [Blow kiss] Sick beauty, please don't get better. Hey, I'm so bad. Brother Meng is indeed a tough-talking brother in terms of copywriting. I look forward to pursuing the crematorium! ! The fire needs to burn a little longer, but don't forgive casually. It's a pity that it's not the general attack. The red-haired guy named Lei is also very good. He treated Gong Bao well the first time they met, much better than Brother Shou. The current progress is that the treasure hunter is still preparing an escape plan~

Great article, it reads like silky chocolate cake. Already updated. The rhythm is tight, the plot is attractive, the protagonist is very distinctive, and every aspect is on the reader's mind. If the author performs steadily, the final score is estimated to be above 9

It looks good [shy], I should say it's to my liking, I feel like I'm definitely not a newbie, and my writing style is not inferior to other Zerg writers. I really like Junjun's "sweet voice", soft body, and personality. The plot is no longer a drama about a male insect falling in love because of the female insect's appearance. I feel like it's not enough, so keep up the good work and wait for the update [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss].

So pretty! Staying up late finally tied it. The different Zerg writing is of a different type from the Zerg I have read before, which is refreshing! Gong is really gentle. Although the relationship between the two protagonists was not friendly at the beginning, and Shou was too harsh, their emotional line really felt like eating a lemon, with sourness mixed with sweetness. The protagonist's attack is also slowly changing the protagonist's feelings, slowly guiding him to take the initiative to speak⁄(⁄ ⁄•⁄ω⁄•⁄ ⁄)⁄ What a great guiding lover! ! ! !

Damn, Damn, we like you, this book is completely on my xp, just say this, it's so damn cool! In the early stage, the atmosphere between Junjun and Xiaoyou was very stalemate. Each of them was more strict than the other [laughs]. Later, Junjun started fishing and guided Xiaoyou to fall in love. Xiaoyou, a great guiding lover [sends his heart], also got better. It was a straight line, and the progress of a few chapters exceeded the previous dozens of chapters. If Junjun and Xiaoyou get married, Chong Zai will be the MV. P, Zaizai is the best matchmaker in the show. After having Chongzai, the two stopped arguing and hating each other, and began to study pure love. I was particularly touched when I saw this. Junjun and Xiaoyou are both babies who lacked love in childhood. They have individual personalities. In the early stage, they were like two hedgehogs. They unconsciously "pricked" each other and felt uncomfortable in their hearts. They did not dare to show their soft side to each other. , Two twisted little hedgehogs 🦔, I felt miserable when I saw them, but after getting along, they both put away their sharp spines and chose to show each other their soft side. It can be seen that they are trying to change (especially Xiaoyou). They are involved in each other, but their original intention remains the same. Junjun still yearns for freedom, and Xiaoyou's possessiveness towards Junjun has not diminished, but he just doesn't show it. On the bright side, I'm afraid of scaring Junjun (he's here from a man, it feels so good [admiration]). The sourness in the early stage is filtered into the sweetness in the later stage. This kind of emotion is like a roller coaster, exciting, and you can't stop. It's a very fragrant meal. Teacher, can you give Junjun and Xiaoyou a good ending? [I'm about to cry] Finally, I protect the teacher to the death, who scolded me with washing powder, I will not let you go! ! ! ! ! (Jie Jie Jie do it, I won't let you go if I do it👻)

It looks good, it looks good, the plot is good, and the characters are good. It's not the constant plot of love at first sight, the kind of relationship where you pull each other and take advantage of each other. And Junjun is a very charming and gentle baby duck that I want to take away.

Overall, although there are still some minor problems after reading it, such as: the logic of the early plot is somewhat lacking, and the rhythm is not firmly controlled. But these problems are basically invisible after the middle to late stages, which is an obvious progress process for the author. Another thing I like very much is that the author has excellent control over emotional description. The kind of love description that can see the inner pull between the protagonists is something that many authors do not possess. If you like this, I recommend reading this book. As the author's first book, it has flaws and flaws, and I think it deserves five stars for encouragement.

It's very beautiful. I like Chasing Husband Crematorium very much. She's not delicate, very rational and dominant. She feels like she's guiding lovers. She's also very gentle. It's really sensual to feel wet sometimes. The writing is so good that the image of feeling is very three-dimensional in my mind. Every time I see the part that describes feeling, The color of his eyes can be seen in the subtitles (I always like to imagine Gong's golden hair). The author also loves interaction. I always see the author's voice in the comment area hahaha. I like to watch the guided gentle attack x wet mouth and hard chasing husband in the crematorium. Blessed are those who are secretly poked and pulled by the two in the later stage.

It's a sin, it's equal, but I didn't give it a good review. Junjun is really very gentle, and he is even more gentle with children. Moreover, he is not the kind of person who will change his mind casually for any reason. I have seen a lot of people who long for freedom after time travel, and then Shou will give up once he has children. But Gong is different. He will not give up freedom for this reason. He is really great at guiding lovers. He is gentle and sickly and beautiful in the early stage. I really love it. Later he becomes stronger. I fell in love with him even more, and the character design of Shou is also very good. In the early stage, he was unscrupulous because he lacked the pheromones of male insects. Later, after he realized that he likes to attack, although he was tough-talking, he did things silently. In the last few chapters, he also changed his words. I'm very restrained, I won't say anything that can easily hurt others, and I listen to Gong's words very much, just like a puppy. In the end, the teacher dares to update 100 chapters at once. It scares me to death. I will follow you to the death [Send my heart] [Send my heart]

It's really, really good-looking. Each insect's personality and characteristics are very distinct, and the plot is also great. It really impressed me. Oh my, I haven't seen such an interesting article in a long time. Does anyone understand? Does anyone understand? This is really beautiful, why doesn't anyone see it? Why isn't anyone watching? I don't allow it! ! ! This book can definitely get a score of 9. Or above. Believe me, it has great potential. The author must keep writing it. It is really good! ! ! ! !

I have read a lot of Zerg novels, and 80% of them are very confusing. This one is one of the few that is better written, and the emotional descriptions are more natural. Except for the use of video threats at the beginning to bring the two people into contact, which is a bit outrageous, the rest is relatively good. Finally, the protagonist has other things to do besides falling in love. At least he has friends. I read other Zerg novels. This novel is generally smooth and is considered top-notch among Zerg novels.

It's a good read. I haven't read many Zerg books, but this one is really the top one I've read. The characters are all very good. After one o'clock, I opened my eyes and saw it now. It turns out that it is a serial.

I have read a lot of Zerg books, and this one is very unique. The characters of the two characters are both good. Except for the two protagonists, the characters of the characters are all well done. How can I put it, everyone has their own highlights. I was very happy with the character design of the protagonist Shou, who is so cute. The protagonist Gong is more gentle, not only gentle, but also guiding. They are a perfect match. I'm curious. Isn't your attitude towards the attacker when you are unfamiliar with the attack in the early stage abnormal? Why are so many people talking about it, especially when someone wants to make a separate episode for someone? It's weird, isn't it? Is it because the early introduction didn't mention who the protagonist is? But looking at your typing, it's obvious who the protagonist is and why he's knocked off a bunch of people. Moreover, you always type in the early stages for the author to change. However, after reading later, there are fewer such comments.

The portrayal of Xiaoji is really good. Xiaoji is particularly charming. Because there were intermittent updates during the update process, and the update cycle is a bit long, I am not very impressed with the plot. I only remember that Xiaoji is strong, beautiful, smart and gentle. . A little cute sometimes. . When facing female insects, Xiaoji has a very guiding attitude, no matter it's about feelings or anything else. . In the end, Xiaoji asked for the proposal first. . Regarding the female insect, the better portrayal is the fascination, dependence and surrender to the male insect. . The overall emotional line tends to be more like a beauty xun dog. It can also be said to be a one-way redemption. There is a lot of pulling in the early stage, but as the process speeds up in the later stage, the double arrows become thicker. . Among the many Zerg articles on Tomato, this article talks about the loyalty, possessiveness and aggression of female insects towards males. Although the description of female insects is not very good, it can be considered strong, and there is a certain difference in body shape and height. In this regard, it is better than many Zerg articles. . Well, most of them are considered normal ships. There are also descriptions of ships that are strong enough to coagulate female insects. There is a section in the middle where the description makes the female insects a bit fragile. . Xiaoji shouldn't be considered a heartthrob. Some of the insects might have some designs on him, and the rest is just a normal description of the friendship line. A supporting character liked him but he was politely rejected without expressing it. . Well, overall it's okay. Xiao Ji's charm value is really high. I can give it five stars.

It's a decent Zerg story. What's rare is that Xiong Bao is so indifferent, but surprisingly it's more realistic. The male protagonist is very gentle, but the last few dozen chapters are a bit boring. My favorite character in the whole story is the robot bug Ball, which is so cute.

Junjun is the most gentle protagonist I have ever seen. He is not as hot as the sun, but like warm water, he is tolerant of the friends around him. No one would not want to make friends with him. Making friends with him will give you a feeling of spring breeze and make people feel at ease. I couldn't get gentleness attack before, but this article made me understand the charm of gentleness. In the plot, Junjun and Yulilea are together, which gives people a very sense of security. There is nothing they can't do when they join forces. In the later stage, Urilea is a puppy who listens to Junjun, and she is super invincible and well matched. It's very beautiful. The writing and plot are very stable from beginning to end. I put a lot of effort into it. I love you [laughs] Didn't watch the extra story, Lei gave birth to a son

It's a very nice book written by Zerg. I rarely read this type of book. This is the second one I've read. I really like the book in front of it. I saw the author said he stopped reading for a while, which really made me feel sad. For such a good book, why do you say that the author doesn't love the characters in the book? The plot is really poignant to me. Both parties are quite stubborn and have some paranoid feelings. In fact, to say that Ji Zhuojun doesn't love Yu is because he didn't look at their relationship in depth because He is S-class, and S-class males are the target of public criticism. The main planet is not a very stable and peaceful place. He is very tired, and he needs to go through a lot of things. He wants to be in a place that is very similar to the earth, and he wants to settle down in his original hometown, but it doesn't work. He has a child, and he has feelings for someone. He is responsible. I am very interested in the follow-up plot, but it is a bit sad. I hope you can give some candy. It is very good. Recommended. Come on, don't listen to those people's nonsense.

Why is Baby Gong so cute? It is my destiny to follow serials, but I am willing! The baby is so cute. His mouth is as hard as a knife and I really want to pry it open. Write quickly, write quickly, write quickly, write quickly. I will always stare at the author and teacher! Help me. I really want to watch it. Woooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo

Very silky, the main character is like a little cake aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa aaaaaaaaaaaaaa as does the character is like a cute character and the character design is attractive when writing this book with love for the characters in the book and a love for the characters in the book and not to fall in love with the protagonists in love with the author.

Very good-looking, I hope it will be more popular [Shy][Shy][Shy] I originally thought that being tough-mouthed is similar to a tsundere, but now I find that Yu Lai really can't speak. [Hold face] He treated Jun Bao so much in the early stage, I hope the crematorium can be a little longer later. Besides

It's a home-invasion-like love, the author himself said it makes me laugh. If you watch the pull, you can get into it. In the early stage, the attack is not very friendly, but the attack and control can be watched, and you are still very fond of it. Now the plot has begun to chase the husband and get pregnant. It's good, keep following it #^_^#

Those who watch the cp remember to read the comment. Some want to dismantle the cp, and some want to conquer the harem. The problem with the author's writing may be that it's not very "fluent" and sometimes he doesn't know what he's writing. The emotional scenes were very comfortable, and it was a delicious cp. The sub-CP is also good. In fact, this pair mainly promotes the plot. They don't have many scenes but they are very tasteful. The plot is very compact, and it is rare for a plot of several hundred thousand words to be so exciting. Although the writing skills are a bit lacking, which drags it down a bit. Overall, the flaws outweigh the flaws. It's so delicious, I can't wait to meet you at the flower market.

Very delicate feelings, Xiaoyou's prejudice gave them a bad start. To make the subsequent development too close seems deliberate, and to make the subsequent development too distant and particularly unwilling. If Xiao You had known that he was now cautious and hesitant to even express concern, he would have been reluctant to treat Xiao Rui so badly at that time [Sending my heart][Sending my heart][Sending my heart] They all felt that this beginning was disgraceful. No matter what outsiders thought, they subconsciously avoided it, and the sincerity behind this disgraceful beginning was also hidden bit by bit. In the end, they couldn't tell whether it was the estrus period or whether you really had some inexplicable connection. But what is fake is still fake after all. He cannot keep a person who is about to leave. Neither a bug nor an apology can do it, but sincerity can, provided that someone sees it and believes it. (Ma'am, don't be in a hurry, let's take your time, I will always wait for you. I really like this book!)

It's nice to read, the writing is smooth, and the plot advances reasonably without being cliché. The author writes Xiaoji very charmingly, which makes Xiaoji's micro-heartthrob attributes very reasonable and not at all obtrusive. At the same time, Xiaoya's character design has not collapsed, it is really attractive, and the tough talk is well implemented. I look forward to the contrast between Xiaoya and Xiaoji in the future. This is really one of the few articles I've seen that made my eyes light up. Come on, author, don't be fooled, I'm very optimistic about you [Admiration]

I usually read the entire book before rating it, but I couldn't help myself halfway through this book. Xiao Ji and Xiao You used each other in the beginning, but Xiao Ji has a gentler personality, while Xiao You is hard-spoken and soft-hearted, but his sincerity towards Xiao Ji cannot be denied because of Xiao You's personality. Every time something happens to Xiao Ji, Xiao You is always on the front line. Although the beginning of the two of them is a bit abnormal, you must give them time to get to know each other and fall in love. If you like to read the story of the two protagonists falling in love at first sight at the beginning, then you don't need to click on this book. The early part of this book is very boring and sour. The article is very interesting, but I can't stand the people in the comment area who read and tear apart the official characters while reading. It really affects people's mood. The key author wrote a warning at the beginning =_=

Originally, I had just read the introduction to this book and saw that it was an unfinished story. I wanted to wait until it was finished before reading it, but I saw the author's explanation and then read the long review that the author mentioned. Then I thought about reading it first to see if there were any surprises of mine, but I ended up tying it up after reading it (*ﾟ_っﾟ)ﾉﾞ Generally speaking, I don't think it's as serious as what he said. Maybe it's because I've seen a lot more exaggerated movies than this, so I think the two protagonists are very good at fighting each other, especially Gong, who is so good at fishing (๑‾ ꇴ ‾๑) It's just that the author updates too little, only one update a day, and now it's even. I have to wait for some later ꒦ິ^꒦ິ. I should have waited until the end to read it. Why did it end after a short time of raising it? Zaizai, whom I had been waiting for for a long time, didn't show up (；′⌒`)

I just realized that I have been following the update for so long and I haven't rated it yet. The feeling is still different from the past. I was relatively passive when I started to attack and was pinned down. Later I finally left and used my original name and identity. After some experiences, I reunited again. The ups and downs in the middle are normal. Generally speaking, it is very good. I still look forward to them officially being together [Adoration]

Just because I don't speak doesn't mean I'm not watching. It's so beautiful. Who knows! It's a pity that the update stopped for three months from January to April. If the update hadn't been stopped during that period, more than 200 chapters would have been updated. I was so angry that I wanted to beat up the person who wrote the long review. The main text is finished, and I feel empty, because I have to go through the book drought that I don't know when it will end. No matter what, Ji You 99 acridine!