I Became a Cannon-Fodder Male Zerg in a Zerg Novel

It's very interesting. The author has done a good job, but if you are here for 1v1, please remember to turn off the comments. There are always comments about people criticizing the official match. But I just like to read the comments of the staunch 1v1 official match party... In other words, I am actually here to fight against the lovers. There is also a crematorium in the later stage.

It's tied. The author's writing is really good. I feel that Gong is very charming. Although he is weak, he has his own ideas and courage, and the description of Zerg society is also very realistic. The fact is that even the Male Protection Association protects powerful males. In fact, it is very realistic. As a powerless male, it is equivalent to sending a person who dominates by being a male to prison. For those high-level males, Gong is He is an alien and a traitor, so I want to get rid of him. The writing is very realistic and real. I really like the relationship between Gong and Shou. Although Gong is weak, he is emotionally superior, but he is not emotionless towards Shou. They are all described in some details. Gong loves beauty the most. The author writes it very well. I hope you will stick to your own ideas and ignore other bad remarks, because there are more people who like your writing than those who deliberately speak to hurt you.

Very nice, no poisonous spots. Gong Bao is so pretty and gentle. She is the sick beauty I like. 1 [Blow kiss] Sick beauty, please don't get better. Hey, I'm so bad. Brother Meng is indeed a tough-talking brother in terms of copywriting. I look forward to pursuing the crematorium! ! The fire needs to burn a little longer, but don't forgive casually. It's a pity that it's not the general attack. The red-haired guy named Lei is also very good. He treated Gong Bao well the first time they met, much better than Brother Shou. The current progress is that the treasure hunter is still preparing an escape plan~

Great article, it reads like silky chocolate cake. Already updated. The rhythm is tight, the plot is attractive, the protagonist is very distinctive, and every aspect is on the reader's mind. If the author performs steadily, the final score is estimated to be above 9

It looks good [shy], I should say it's to my liking, I feel like I'm definitely not a newbie, and my writing style is not inferior to other Zerg writers. I really like Junjun's "sweet voice", soft body, and personality. The plot is no longer a drama about a male insect falling in love because of the female insect's appearance. I feel like it's not enough, so keep up the good work and wait for the update [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss].

So pretty! Staying up late finally tied it. The different Zerg writing is of a different type from the Zerg I have read before, which is refreshing! Gong is really gentle. Although the relationship between the two protagonists was not friendly at the beginning, and Shou was too harsh, their emotional line really felt like eating a lemon, with sourness mixed with sweetness. The protagonist's attack is also slowly changing the protagonist's feelings, slowly guiding him to take the initiative to speak⁄(⁄ ⁄•⁄ω⁄•⁄ ⁄)⁄ What a great guiding lover! ! ! !

Damn, Damn, we like you, this book is completely on my xp, just say this, it's so damn cool! In the early stage, the atmosphere between Junjun and Xiaoyou was very stalemate. Each of them was more strict than the other [laughs]. Later, Junjun started fishing and guided Xiaoyou to fall in love. Xiaoyou, a great guiding lover [sends his heart], also got better. It was a straight line, and the progress of a few chapters exceeded the previous dozens of chapters. If Junjun and Xiaoyou get married, Chong Zai will be the MV. P, Zaizai is the best matchmaker in the show. After having Chongzai, the two stopped arguing and hating each other, and began to study pure love. I was particularly touched when I saw this. Junjun and Xiaoyou are both babies who lacked love in childhood. They have individual personalities. In the early stage, they were like two hedgehogs. They unconsciously "pricked" each other and felt uncomfortable in their hearts. They did not dare to show their soft side to each other. , Two twisted little hedgehogs 🦔, I felt miserable when I saw them, but after getting along, they both put away their sharp spines and chose to show each other their soft side. It can be seen that they are trying to change (especially Xiaoyou). They are involved in each other, but their original intention remains the same. Junjun still yearns for freedom, and Xiaoyou's possessiveness towards Junjun has not diminished, but he just doesn't show it. On the bright side, I'm afraid of scaring Junjun (he's here from a man, it feels so good [admiration]). The sourness in the early stage is filtered into the sweetness in the later stage. This kind of emotion is like a roller coaster, exciting, and you can't stop. It's a very fragrant meal. Teacher, can you give Junjun and Xiaoyou a good ending? [I'm about to cry] Finally, I protect the teacher to the death, who scolded me with washing powder, I will not let you go! ! ! ! ! (Jie Jie Jie do it, I won't let you go if I do it👻)

It looks good, it looks good, the plot is good, and the characters are good. It's not the constant plot of love at first sight, the kind of relationship where you pull each other and take advantage of each other. And Junjun is a very charming and gentle baby duck that I want to take away.

Overall, although there are still some minor problems after reading it, such as: the logic of the early plot is somewhat lacking, and the rhythm is not firmly controlled. But these problems are basically invisible after the middle to late stages, which is an obvious progress process for the author. Another thing I like very much is that the author has excellent control over emotional description. The kind of love description that can see the inner pull between the protagonists is something that many authors do not possess. If you like this, I recommend reading this book. As the author's first book, it has flaws and flaws, and I think it deserves five stars for encouragement.

It's very beautiful. I like Chasing Husband Crematorium very much. She's not delicate, very rational and dominant. She feels like she's guiding lovers. She's also very gentle. It's really sensual to feel wet sometimes. The writing is so good that the image of feeling is very three-dimensional in my mind. Every time I see the part that describes feeling, The color of his eyes can be seen in the subtitles (I always like to imagine Gong's golden hair). The author also loves interaction. I always see the author's voice in the comment area hahaha. I like to watch the guided gentle attack x wet mouth and hard chasing husband in the crematorium. Blessed are those who are secretly poked and pulled by the two in the later stage.