Loot, Shoot, and Extract, but in the Middle Ages

It's well written, but the pace is too fast. At present, the five stages of system upgrade are all longer, and there is no problem if you score above 8 points. Author, you should know that the number of words in Tomato is also one of the thresholds for readers to read the book.

The writing is okay, but the bad thing is that the author himself forgets what happened and the settings before writing, but the plot progress is pretty good [awkward laughter] 🍉

The search, attack and retreat system mainly refers to Tarkov and Delta, retaining the skills of Tarkov and the feeling of gold mining in Delta. At the same time, I don't want to release fireballs anytime and anywhere. The technological progress of the world is still stuck in the Middle Ages. Therefore, the upper limit of the magic intensity is the conventional firepower of World War II, and the lower limit is stronger than a lighter. At the same time, releasing magic also requires a high cost to explain why it is not used in industrial production. But the place where bugs often occur is time. I often forget how long something takes, and it never comes back, so be patient 🤦

I can give it 5 stars, but there are still some problems. Where's the pot? Why hasn't the pot come out yet? The altar has come out. There should be medicine in the other world, right? There is no pharmacist profession in so many countries combined? The parts I've seen so far are cult-like. In addition to clothes that are immune to mental attacks, there should also be necklaces and the like. One of the problems with this book is that things break too quickly. After a battle, they basically break into pieces. Everything is disposable. The magic stone that produces magic is disposable. The armor worn on it is disposable. The ring is disposable. If the armor is worn on the body, it must or is basically close to being broken in every battle. In terms of general logic and comfort, it's okay so far. I think the author's status can be added later. For example, I think the author's status can be added later. Adding some mechanical platforms can make drones or magic stone crafts, but the problem of magic stone energy storage still needs to be solved. Up to now, the protagonist does not have a single skill to refine magic power... Magic stones all rely on magic stones. Magic stones are the most advanced level 10 magic. Shooting it out is almost like setting off a firework. Hitting the mark of the evil god is useless. It's so funny.

Overall it's well written, nothing wrong with it. Regarding the two points mentioned in the comment area, let me say that the pace is not called fast, but it is not forced to downgrade. This is an advantage, not a disadvantage. If this book is downgraded and has this poisonous point, to be honest, I will think that it is just a nonsense in the comment area. Some people say it is dull. I think reading this book does not have a certain climax excitement, but this is not called dull. It can only be said that the author still needs to improve. The outline is the bones and the details are the flesh, and the flesh needs to be improved. If you follow the outline, it's really not bland. The equipment is given out, and the equipment is often changed and upgraded frequently. The adventures of fighting monsters and plot battles are also frequent, but it just doesn't look exciting enough.

In terms of plot alone, it's okay, but looking at your character's dialogue, there's no way to substitute it.

1. It's okay, the outline is OK, but the description is a bit bland. 2. The most important thing is that the author can interact and update regularly, which is much better than other authors. 3. This is the first time I gave a gift after seeing an advertisement, mainly because I was afraid that the book would kill me.

Like to watch Newcomers, new books, new plots Very good Watching the pig's feet slowly become stronger Very healing I have a good outlook on life and there are no disgusting plots. I really wish I had such a golden finger I also want to make a crooked mouth🫤

The current score is 5 points and 4. I completely disagree. Who is maliciously lowering the score? I usually rarely comment, but don't let the low score affect the author's update (I don't have to read it). I must give it a full score.

The first dozen or so chapters are a bit confusing, but once the protagonist meets the first steel-scaled bear, things start to get exciting. The only thing I worry about is that the author improves the protagonist's strength too quickly and won't be able to write more later. So far, this book has an 8.5 Rating, which is fine. It's worth looking forward to, I hope the author will stick to it ✊