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Where is your heroine and your emotional line? No, buddy, please see if what you are writing now is related to your profile. Do you know if it is wrong?

Well written. Also, the protagonist just has some talent, but he can't become an immortal immediately. Also, not all the immortal cultivators are good people. Isn't it normal for the weak to prey on the strong? Besides, isn't this more in line with the world of immortality? If you like to read cool articles, go find one yourself, why are there so many things?

Immortal product, absolute immortal product, the author's writing style is very good, and unlike other Lily cultivation novels, this book writes out the characteristics of the weak and the strong in the world of immortality, and every part has a reverse. The heroine is not invincible at the beginning. She grows up slowly and has a high IQ. The two heroines who appear have their own characteristics. Xiao Gu is cold and cold, and Ayan is lively and gentle (unfortunately, Ayan was tortured into muteness). Highly recommended (I want to see Xiaoyu and Ayan's posts)

It can be very refreshing and not very frustrating. There are not many good people in the world of immortality. Moreover, if you are still in the Hehuan Sect, you will have moments of frustration. But when you have the strength, you will go back and take revenge. You must avenge yourself, so it didn't take too long.

The author has written this book quite well. The quality is quite good. Except for the description of the realm where he becomes a god and becomes a Mahayana Golden Immortal, I feel that it is a bit unaccustomed to it. In other places, there are only some small details at most. The overall writing is very good\^O^/

It looks very good, so as for the follow-up of Saint, I really hope that Saint will be one of the harems. Will this be a multi-heroine or a single one?

I think it's pretty good. The protagonist and her childhood sweetheart are such a pitiful couple [crying] [crazy]. I feel a little sad when I see them. I hope there will be more love interactions between them. Well, Senior Sister Gu is also a very good person [staring] [staring]. I hope the author will write more about this book [thinking]

Visually, except for the protagonist group, all members are evil. The book looks okay and is a good way to pass the time.

The quality of the book is very high, the plot is relatively compact, it describes the cultivation of immortals by the weak and the strong, and the heroine is also very decisive in killing.

It's good to read, but the multi-female protagonist storyline hasn't been opened yet, so I don't dare to support the book because I'm afraid the author won't be able to support it.

The writing is very realistic. Cruelty is the foundation of the world of cultivation. The heroine is very strong and smart. Come on, author.

The writing is quite good, why are there so few comments?

It's well written, but it's a male-oriented novel? When I saw the 1,000th chapter, I still wondered if I had clicked on the wrong book, but I think the author wanted to write a grand world, and these 1,800 chapters are just the tip of the iceberg. I persisted in watching it because of the decisiveness and tenacity of the heroine, and the plot is compact and exciting. Later I forgot that the protagonist was traveling through the book. Maybe I should wait until it reaches 2 million words before reading this book properly?

The plot is compact and not procrastinating

Looks good, the plot is very attractive

I don't know what to say, but it just looks good.

Nice! I still pay more attention to the plot [laughing]

It's very beautiful and interesting. If it can be written in its current state, it will definitely be a divine article. Why didn't we meet at the starting point? The heat is definitely higher than here

At present, it seems that it is an absolutely high-end work. If you follow this feeling and finish it, it will feel like it is at least a semi-masterpiece.

Not bad, my favorite type

I feel quite like it. Not bad, not bad. Come on, author!

It's pretty good. The author writes about human nature very well. I feel like the author should have already started working. Come on! [Cool]

The text is very good, the narrative logic is clear, Xiancao

Very nice! The writing is flesh-and-blood, and I like the portrayal of the character Qingqing!

This book is pretty good, and the plot settings are quite good.

This book is so beautiful! ! The author is great! ! It would be even better if it was the main attack! ! !