[Dual female leads + pure love + both untouched]
Everyone knows transmigration is a common occurrence, Lin Youxi tells herself after being killed by a disastrous group meal and transmigrating.
The good news is that she's landed in the cultivation novel she's been reading lately, and she still remembers most of it.
The bad news is that the original owner doesn't survive two chapters, and Lin Youxi has no idea how she meets her end.
The better news is that the story begins twenty years before the protagonist is born, giving her time to prepare and maximize her chances of survival. She joins a sect, cultivates to the Golden Core stage, then heads down the mountain. When you're out in the world, staying alive is what matters most, so she pulls every dirty trick she can.
Then the final villain, her junior sister Zhou Rouxiu, joins the sect. Lin Youxi starts working to hamper the protagonist's growth at every turn while carefully training Zhou Rouxiu day and night.
Just as Lin Youxi thinks everything is getting better, one day her junior sister pins her to the bed, one hand pressed to Lin Youxi's abdomen, her fingertips scorching hot.
Oh no! The sweet little darling she raised is going to eat her alive!
How did the original story's “betray and kill your master” turn into this?
The look and feel is quite good, it doesn't have a girly flavor, and the interaction so far is pretty good. I like Xia Ke Shang. I feel like the junior sister is a bit yandere and has the potential to be cute. She is quite possessive, but the author is going to create a decent protagonist. It's a pity that the junior sister will become a yandere. [Chigua]
It's really good to watch. The main character is really smart and strong. He is very doting on his wife. I look forward to being crushed by my junior sister.
After reading it, I wonder if it would be better to write it longer and arrange some secret realms to gradually reveal foreshadowings one by one. It seems a bit rushed now. Feng Yinquan at the beginning is more like a background board. The map incident in Nanming also seems a bit hasty and blank. If some foreshadowing is arranged here, the ending will not seem too abrupt. There are also many CPs that can be written as extras. Although Feng Yinquan who opened the harem cannot be written in detail, it can also be inserted into the text as a small theater 🤔
It's good to watch. The main character has a good personality and feels good. It gives people a very reliable feeling. However, the relationship line is too slow. They haven't been together for 100 chapters 🤦
Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking
All I can say is that it would be better to put some knives in it. I had been expecting a knife, but it didn't happen. If there were knives, this would be a hit.
This is the most comfortable book I have ever read. A good senior sister is the one who always protects her little junior sister.
It's very interesting, I haven't skipped any chapters, and the updates are quite stable, but why are so few people watching it? 🤔
Very nice, I really like this kind of writing
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