[Double heroines + pure love + double cleanliness]
As we all know, time travel is very common. Lin Youxi comforted herself after being killed by a single player.
The good news is that when I entered the novel about cultivating immortals that I was reading recently, my memory was still clear.
The bad news is that the original owner only lived for less than two chapters, and it's not even clear how he ended up offline.
The better news is that now it's twenty years before the main character is born, so she has time to prepare herself to survive as much as possible. To join the sect, first cultivate to the golden elixir and then go down the mountain. When you go out, the most important thing is to save your life, so you use all kinds of dirty tricks.
Until the villain junior sister finally became a disciple, Lin Youxi began to preemptively hinder the protagonist's development while carefully training Zhou Rouxiu day and night.
Just when Lin Youxi thought everything was getting better and better, one day the junior sister pressed her down on the bed, pressing her lower abdomen with her left hand and her fingertips became hot.
Done! The little cotton-padded jacket she raised wants to eat people!
Why did the deception of teachers and ancestors in the original work develop like this!
Reader comments
The look and feel is quite good, it doesn't have a girly flavor, and the interaction so far is pretty good. I like Xia Ke Shang. I feel like the junior sister is a bit yandere and has the potential to be cute. She is quite possessive, but the author is going to create a decent protagonist. It's a pity that the junior sister will become a yandere. [Chigua]
It's really good to watch. The main character is really smart and strong. He is very doting on his wife. I look forward to being crushed by my junior sister.
After reading it, I wonder if it would be better to write it longer and arrange some secret realms to gradually reveal foreshadowings one by one. It seems a bit rushed now. Feng Yinquan at the beginning is more like a background board. The map incident in Nanming also seems a bit hasty and blank. If some foreshadowing is arranged here, the ending will not seem too abrupt. There are also many CPs that can be written as extras. Although Feng Yinquan who opened the harem cannot be written in detail, it can also be inserted into the text as a small theater [Thinking]
It's good to watch. The main character has a good personality and feels good. It gives people a very reliable feeling. However, the relationship line is too slow. They haven't been together for 100 chapters [face covering]
Come on, come on, it's really beautiful
Very nice, I really like this kind of writing
Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking
Help every dream of life and death
Okay, good, good, well written.
This kind of healing text makes me feel relaxed physically and mentally [laugh][laugh][laugh]
It's very interesting, I haven't skipped any chapters, and the updates are quite stable, but why are so few people watching it? [Thinking]
This is the most comfortable book I have ever read. A good senior sister is the one who always protects her little junior sister.
All I can say is that it would be better to put some knives in it. I had been expecting a knife, but it didn't happen. If there were knives, this would be a hit.
The look and feel is quite good, it doesn't have a girly flavor, and the interaction so far is pretty good. I like Xia Ke Shang. I feel like the junior sister is a bit yandere and has the potential to be cute. She is quite possessive, but the author is going to create a decent protagonist. It's a pity that the junior sister will become a yandere. [Chigua]
It's really good to watch. The main character is really smart and strong. He is very doting on his wife. I look forward to being crushed by my junior sister.
After reading it, I wonder if it would be better to write it longer and arrange some secret realms to gradually reveal foreshadowings one by one. It seems a bit rushed now. Feng Yinquan at the beginning is more like a background board. The map incident in Nanming also seems a bit hasty and blank. If some foreshadowing is arranged here, the ending will not seem too abrupt. There are also many CPs that can be written as extras. Although Feng Yinquan who opened the harem cannot be written in detail, it can also be inserted into the text as a small theater [Thinking]
It's good to watch. The main character has a good personality and feels good. It gives people a very reliable feeling. However, the relationship line is too slow. They haven't been together for 100 chapters [face covering]
Come on, come on, it's really beautiful
Very nice, I really like this kind of writing
Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking
Help every dream of life and death
Okay, good, good, well written.
This kind of healing text makes me feel relaxed physically and mentally [laugh][laugh][laugh]
It's very interesting, I haven't skipped any chapters, and the updates are quite stable, but why are so few people watching it? [Thinking]
This is the most comfortable book I have ever read. A good senior sister is the one who always protects her little junior sister.
All I can say is that it would be better to put some knives in it. I had been expecting a knife, but it didn't happen. If there were knives, this would be a hit.