Back in My Youth, I Used Immortal Arts to Overturn My Past Life

I have read nearly 300 chapters, and the general content is that on the eve of the marriage, the male protagonist discovered that his fiancée was a scumbag, brought his father to the house to argue, was beaten to death by the other party, and killed five members of the other party's family. After surrendering, he was sentenced to death, was reborn in the world of immortality and became a tree, was discovered by the boss and took him away to practice. When he ascended, he chose to lose his cultivation and return to the earth. Then there are some ordinary rural life (building a house, celebrating the New Year, attending funerals, etc.), Hiding one's identity and starting a company (mixed with some cool points: using one's ability to deal with opponents and powerful people), and falling in love with the school beauty (the emotional line of the first female character is well written). Looking further down, it seems to have the meaning of a harem. In order to renew his relationship with Bai Yueguang in his previous life, the male protagonist deliberately failed in the high school entrance examination and entered a second-class high school. The female lead is really well portrayed, and she captures the feeling of a young girl's love and the ignorant love of youth. As a result, now I have to find Bai Yueguang again. I personally can't accept it, so I won't read further. Overall, it's well written, and it's worth reading. It's almost time to reach the latest chapter, so I won't update any more.

It's good to make up for regrets after rebirth and experience all kinds of things in the world of mortals. The protagonist's personality has also changed a lot after experiencing the world of immortality. The highest goodness is like water and the virtues carry everything, and I have a little feeling of it. The most important thing is that I like the way the author handles the relationship between characters. It is a feeling, how to put it, dealing with contradictions in a smooth, positive and rational way, but with a human touch. Many authors like to intensify conflicts. Sometimes I feel so angry that I feel tight in my chest. In contrast, I really like the author's writing method. It's good to let nature take its course.

It's good so far, but the author spends almost 6 pictures in the opening chapter describing the cuckold story of the protagonist. If you don't read the rest, it will only leave the impression that the protagonist is a loser. Deducted one star for a bad first impression at the beginning. The one at the back is quite nice. The plot development is too slow and boring, especially on campus. Inexplicably, he helped a female supporting character and a male supporting character, and kept describing their daily lives. I'm still in junior high and can't imagine how many plots like this there are.

It's rare to find top quality tomatoes!!! It is completely different from the grassroots X atmosphere exuded in books of the same type. The story is told in a straightforward manner, and you can see between the lines that the author's writing skills are quite good. It would be even better if it could reach a million words or more. Come on, don't stop updating! Alas, lingering in junior high school is really a bit watery. No matter how powerful your writing skills are, you can't withstand such a mess. Are you going to write more than 5 million words in high school and college? There are too many restrictions in middle and high school, the story is not easy to develop, and it is not refreshing enough. No matter how you write it, it is a bit like child's play.

I read it in one go without any pause. This is the novel writing ability I want to express to everyone. Even if the plot and story are as cliche, the author's writing ability makes up for this shortcoming. Nowadays, Tomato's mainstream novels seem to be a very novel theme story to attract the audience, but they have forgotten that if they don't have the most basic writing ability to write novels, no matter how novel the story is, it will just be like a shooting star across the night sky, fleeting. The author has now shown us his writing ability. In my scoring system, it is enough to get a five-star recommendation.

In this fast-paced era, this kind of slow-burning novel about cultivating immortality with rich emotions is eye-catching. There are no repetitive routines. The writing is sophisticated and the killing is decisive. It can make people make up for the regrets they had while studying. I hope the author will continue to write [heartfelt] Especially when the protagonist comes back from a thousand years of practice and has everything under control, the indifference of the invisible 13, and Gou Dao, wow! I simply have my heart [admired]. I think this is what it should feel like to return to Earth after cultivating your mind for such a long time!

The writing is good at the beginning, it's really good. I'm still reading the rest. I don't know whether the author is stable or not. To be honest, his strength is not like that of a tomato. There are too many tomatoes for elementary school students to write (did you eat it? I ate it. What did you eat? Name of the dish? Is it delicious? Etc.). At last, it is not an elementary school student's composition. I have more than 10 pictures at the beginning. I must recommend it.

I give it a good review. It is a rare masterpiece from Tomato. The characters are described very delicately and the plot is not draggy. This subject matter also touched me deeply and reminded me of my childhood, my grandma, and my junior high school and high school student career. Not to mention noble words, it is really well written.

Good-looking, really good-looking! The writing style is really unique in Tomato. The honest character at the beginning may dissuade some people, because it is a reflection of the reality of most people, and they can't do anything. It makes everyone who is used to reading cool articles feel uncomfortable 🤦. But after this period, when I entered the cultivation of immortality and returned to the past, it started to look good. I used money to make it better. Some readers may think that Lu Ying's family should shut up, but it is not a solution to let them know that the male protagonist is a rich man whom they cannot afford to offend. It can also improve Lu Ying's status in the family (although not much). After all, accepting people is merciless. Come on, author, keep writing, I'm optimistic about you [Code]

The theme is that an immortal enters the city, but there is no plot of pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger. The protagonist does not talk much, and the plot is not protracted. The plot is advanced by relying on the protagonist's actions and the dialogue of others. It not only loses the worldly atmosphere, but also has the indifferent characteristics of the protagonist as an immortal. It can be regarded as a very different style of "The Immortal in the City". If you are short of books, you can read it.