I Am a Blacksmith in Novice Village, and All the Players Work for Me

It's very interesting. Carl gave Siren a tombstone, and Siren's soul survived. Siren also protected Carl. They are all good babies (●✿∀✿●) If you like the emotionless drama of the male protagonist, you can watch it. The main reason is that this author is too prolific. He really made me cry to death. I finished it in the morning and even more in the afternoon. I hope every author can learn this spirit.

It's a very novel angle, and the real questions are great when you look at them There is a feeling that I am taming the AI ( ͡°ᴥ ͡° ʋ)( ͡°ᴥ ͡° ʋ)

It's a very novel feeling. I've never seen the protagonist be an NPC in the game before, but they are basically despicable foreigners. This is the first time I've seen the protagonist being an NPC. The writing is great. Come on, author.

The idea is very novel, and the plot of the confrontation between the male protagonist of Novice Village and the game system is also very good, but I don't understand why the previous settings were abandoned after the beginning of S1. It feels like all game NPCs have become creatures from another world, and the male protagonist's direction has changed from exploring his own emotions and the world to exploring technology. So in this worldview, everything in the game world is data. Is the male protagonist awakening to AI, or is he projecting from another world, and uses his big hands to summon the fourth natural disaster? The first part is what I think is novel, but the second part is not that interesting to me, and I feel that the novel is developing towards the latter world view. There are many exciting things I want to see that I haven't written about, such as players discovering that the male protagonist is more than a simple AI program, some special interactions between players and the male protagonist, etc.

The method of writing about the fourth natural disaster has never been seen before, and it is somewhat groundbreaking. Maybe this is the next rising branch. At present, it seems that the context is clear, the emotional descriptions of the characters are detailed, the main and supporting characters are vividly portrayed, and there are not too many lines that make people laugh. Since I have not seen similar articles, the proportion of my own comments is small. In order to prevent the author from stopping updating, I will give it a perfect score.

(Not human-machine) If this book is out of ten, I would give it 9 points. It is a very good online game novel. The novel not only has the excitement of traditional online game novels, but also has unique elements such as will, void, and laws. The aborigines, NPCs, and players have distinctive personalities. However, maybe because the author is not particularly experienced, there are some slightly clichéd plots and fun moments in the article. A little bit, but the flaws are still intact, it's worth watching👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻

1. Innovation is very good, but I feel that the author has not decided how to explain the protagonist's awakening, because currently it can be said that it is an NPC created by the core of the world, and the protagonist is digitized, and the awakening is an accidental factor. 2. The world view is not too strong, just a small part. The foreshadowing is also average, with three job transfer fragments and it ends hastily. 3. There is also a little bit of trouble. It can be seen that the author writes the novel based on emotion. Some parts are repeated two or three times, such as the protagonist's perception of the void and his conjecture about his life experience. The two chapters before and after are almost the same. 4. The beginning is innovative, but the writing skills are still a bit lacking. The novelty and curiosity of the audience are not very high. The story of the first chapter is completed (version update), and it is not particularly big. The shocking event ends with flowers being given to the dead boss, and the world is updated (it has already been described once, so it is not new), so the score is probably quite low at the beginning. Let's get rid of the problem of repetitive lyricism (or the word count) first, this book is still worth reading.

The subject matter is relatively new and creative, and the storyline is good. However, I personally think there are some shortcomings. The details are not handled well. For example, there is no detailed follow-up on the job transfer clues. In addition, the outpost feels like a military outpost of a kingdom, but the scale is quite large, with various divisions. Also, why not just call it Dawn City? Agricultural production is not mentioned, nor is it related to other areas. Some people think that some scenes are not well written. The victory in the void siege should be very epic. The narrative in the book is relatively bland. Overall, this book has more potential.

As a bookworm for more than ten years, I highly recommend this novel. It is very logical and contagious. Friends who click in can look back. The front part is a relatively dull transition, and it gradually begins to exert force. Various foreshadowings and plot layers are endless. If you are a player who loves to play games, you will experience two different perspectives. You will find that we are so invincible in the "eyes" of NPCs. Or in the "eyes" of players, NPCs can communicate independently and would rather believe that they are AI than think that they really have souls! All in all, this is a very good novel. After reading it, this is the author's first book. It's great for a newcomer to write so well. I wish the author every day to be inspired.

Conclusion: I think it's okay. It's a very novel novel, but you can't use the cool introduction of the assembly line as the main text. The main text is about growing up from a data that I don't know anything about, and the strength is a bit average. The focus at the beginning was the forging ability and "genius" in the introduction. After reading it, I found that the content is a bit sparse. Up to now, it is the early and middle stages of the second picture (it feels like there is still a lot of content that has not been added) and it does not match the content in the introduction, so I can't give it a 5⭐️. This is a bit novel, so I give it a 4⭐️. I hope this slow-burning book can survive.

I think it will be a god. There are only a few reviews now, but after reading it, I felt bad at first, because the review I read first had one star, but I have never read this type of book. It is a bit novel and can be said to be a new thing. Of course, other books may have been written about it, but this is indeed the first time I have read this setting. I think it's very good. There has been no innovation in online writing for a long time, or maybe this happened a long time ago, but how should I put it? This book is like the surprise I felt when I read it for the first time, just like a person's first time reading something, and I can't stop. Well... Anyway, I hope people who see my comments can come in and take a look, it's really nice. Of course, it may not look good. This only represents my opinion. I hope to see it first and then evaluate it. I really think this book can be good, or at least a qualified good book.

It's tied, the writing style is very fresh, and the perspective is also very novel, but the protagonist is too frustrated. He is neither an "immortal human" nor an "aboriginal person", and his existence has never been recognized. The pioneers only regard Karl as a powerful NPC master or task trigger, and will not try to understand him at all. The indigenous people have been scrutinizing, guarding and even using Karl. In the original text, all the high-level officials have been in a position of needing Karl but not I agree with Karl's state, and he is so arrogant that the protagonist needs to keep solving problems and getting their approval. Except for Karl's master Gron, who really feels sorry for Karl. Looking at it now, I just feel that being a "pioneer" and a silent "sage" is not comfortable at all. I have never seen such an aggrieved protagonist. However, the author's writing is very good and deserves five stars, but I will not continue to pursue it [grievance]

It's really good to watch. I thought the plot would be so straightforward. I didn't expect that a suspected forged history appeared, causing waves of unknown length. The unknown hidden under the turbid water is scary. Karl's journey, including his so-called skills, are all deliberately guided by fate. If this is true, the plot is really desperate. I hope it can be written to the end. After all, most Tomato authors like to abandon books. It is a very long plot. S0 is ignorant. S1 explores the unknown and uses the rules. As for the later part, I hope the story will be grander. Write a few more seasons and hope it becomes popular. After all, it's really tiring to generate electricity for love.

It has a very real world view. The author is very creative. Basically, there are no special doubts. The logic is also very correct. It is a rare and good book. I hope the author will work hard and update (ง•̀_•́)ง I felt very satisfied. It was the first time I read such a book in one sitting. The logic was particularly clear. It was the first time I encountered a book with this kind of world view, which really shocked me. I hope the author can work hard (ง•̀_•́)ง, as long as it doesn't end badly, he will be a masterpiece. [Top post][top post]

The clear rendering is very good, but can we use less AI modification?

First of all, let me state that there are still some poisonous points. Every time I feel like I'm getting better, I'll give it a little poison. In terms of output, I can give this work an eight and a half points, and give it a full star rating. The setting points are quite attractive to me, but overall there seems to be nothing to praise. Anyway, when the volume is large and the tube is full of poison, I will put it away for a while and then read it again. It can be regarded as stocking up on manuscripts.

The perspective is very novel. The process of an NPC gradually awakening its self-awareness to understand the "world", get to know the "players", and adapt step by step is indeed very interesting. The first disadvantage is that the protagonist is constrained by the reality of a different world in the early stages of the program and in the later stages of the program. He is suppressed for too long and is not so happy when he is released. Second, the game itself feels a bit... Retro and clumsy? Do you feel like the "game" itself is also learning? It can be seen that the world view is not small, I hope the author can come back to it.

This book can be said to be of particularly high quality. I have seen 45 of them so far. If it is a poisonous one, it doesn't matter to me. It's very high quality. I didn't finish it later. I hope the author can maintain such high quality level [crying]

Give it five stars directly. There is no doubt that the reviews are very good. One star must be because of the blacksmith theme, because there are too few, so as to encourage it. There are also a few stars because the protagonist is very kind in my opinion. He will resist the system for the players, and will also conceive an explosion-proof workshop for the players because they can only forge outside.

The protagonist is very good, a person who slowly finds "self", and the writing method is very unique. It is not a real person's time travel, but a "construction from scratch". Different from ordinary NPC writing, "he is a person, not an NPC." Fine

It's a very interesting book. The male protagonist is a real NPC. There is no time travel or anything. The writing style is considered good among Tomatoes. The author's updates are stable and large. If you like this kind of writing, please support it.

The only book in the online game Blacksmith is a real blacksmith. It is neither a time travel nor a system story. The protagonist is really a blacksmith in the online game. He gradually becomes self-aware. It is a very novel story and I have the desire to read it. It is still too short at the moment, but it is still very interesting.

What this kind of game writing needs is a complete and thick worldview, and what it needs is that everything makes sense. Just having empty cool points won't get you far at all.

It's good-looking, not to mention the best in the blacksmith genre, at least it ranks high. If you like this genre, you can read it. I have been an Internet bookworm for five years. I tried it with a bean bag. It is not an AI novel and is non-toxic. You can read it seriously.

I really like reading this book. The content is really novel. Just write it at your own pace. Many readers like to read different content and styles. You can't satisfy everyone, so just write according to your own ideas.

The writing style of this book is really good. In all the updated chapters that I have read, the characters in it are very distinctive, and the emotions are not too sudden. I hope you can work on it. The last time I read a very good book, it has been discontinued. I really don't want to stop updating another book [Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like]

Some places are a bit out of place, and some characters seem to only act on the surface. It would be better if there were deeper reasons for the behavioral habits. Some people are a bit flat. But the plot is novel, the writing is good, the characters are well created, and it feels good.

It's a very good book with great potential. The way it handles players and the world is very smooth and harmonious. It doesn't have the abruptness of an advent flow. The only shortcoming is probably that the values ​​and prices are a bit arbitrary, but I can accept it [shy]

I am really optimistic about this book. He shows in great detail the process of an NPC changing from being ruthless to having emotions, and gradually improving his understanding of himself. It is very suitable for slow reading. If you are impatient, you can consider quitting.

Five-star praise. It is a different kind of natural disaster novel. The protagonist seeks himself and the truth step by step. It is really well written. The overall quality is already high on Tomatoes. Thanks to the recommendation mechanism of Rotten Tomatoes.