Let You Make a Reskinned Mobile Game, How About the Entire 3A Masterpiece?

In the early stage, it was a bit redundant💩, including but not limited to "repeated narration of the same plot", "a jealous villain is necessary at the beginning", "a necessary confrontation with the capital of Goose Factory", etc., But it will start to be adjusted later. Don't let newcomers be scared away by readers, keep writing, the writing can be improved, and the writing will get better and better in the future. It is recommended to reduce business wars The plot of the novel is for the readers. What the readers come to see is the game they like is created by the protagonist and shocks others, instead of watching a bunch of capital fighting with the protagonist. This is basically repeated questioning, slap in the face, doubt, slap in the face. Instead of spending a lot of writing on this, it is better to write more about the players' reaction after the game is released. Yes, you don't need to write too many games. It's more important to focus on writing about the response each game brings. You can indeed intersperse plots influenced by capital during the period, but you don't have to write too much. The above is my personal opinion. There are many negative reviews in the comment area, which really hurts self-confidence, but good works are tempered by time. Novel with a score of more than 9 points was criticized in the early stage. It's not impossible, but as long as you come up with your own style and have a complete logical outline, you can get good ratings. Just like what you wrote at the beginning, instead of writing a novel according to a "template", you might as well create a novel like your protagonist and follow your own style. Your writing can support you in writing like this. If you fail, you will have to start another one.

Don't keep repeating similar words [awkward laughter] @ a bag of bell peppers

"Rose embraces all things wantonly and blooms in the four seasons" "𝓡𝓸𝓼𝓮𝓼 𝓮𝓶𝓫𝓻𝓪𝓬𝓮 𝓪𝓵𝓵 𝓽𝓱𝓲𝓷𝓰𝓼 𝔀𝓪𝓷𝓽𝓸𝓷𝓵𝔂 𝓪𝓷𝓭"I start with romance and continue to write about your long journey" "𝑰 𝒃𝒆𝒈𝒊𝒏 𝒘𝒊𝒕𝒉 𝒓𝒐𝒎𝒂𝒏𝒄𝒆 𝒂𝒏𝒅 𝒄𝒐𝒏𝒕𝒊𝒏𝒖𝒆 𝒚𝒐𝒖𝒓 𝒍𝒐𝒏𝒈 𝒋𝒐𝒖𝒓𝒏𝒆𝒚."Then the story of the son of prophecy can only end here." "I will start with romance and continue to write about your long journey."

Come on, it seems like there is no need to recruit people. The protagonist is more pretentious playing games alone than being slapped in the face. Also can you write the plot of peak, repo and other games [shy]

It's essentially a show-off and a slap in the face, as well as most of the business wars, but it can be read as a fun read, and those who can't stand it can leave. Everyone likes different types. For example, some people like more poisonous things, and some people can't stand it, so if you don't like it, please don't hurt it.

It's okay, but there are still some shortcomings. I've read many book reviews and they've been mentioned. Hope the author can improve. Five stars support the author.

It's pretty good. I like it very much. I hope you can continue to work hard in the future.

It's beautiful. I've finished chasing it. I want to continue chasing it. Come on, I believe in you ＞ᴗoಣ

Very interesting article, very interesting to read

Beautiful, no need to say more

Good looking (♥∀♥) author, please give it a try

This book is awesome

This is the first time I read a book with such a small number of 150,000 words. The first few chapters are okay [laughter]

There's not much to say, it just looks good.

So far it's okay, maybe I'm not that picky, so I'll give it five stars first, go for it!