Ye Luoli: a Little Bit of Magic Girl Shock

It's really good-looking, the subject matter is really great, the sparks created by the collision between the despair of the magic circle and the nonsensicalness of Ye Luoli's fairy tale are really delicious. I don't ask the author to make more updates, but I just ask the author not to stop updating and become a eunuch, and don't take it off the shelves. I really like it, and I'm really looking forward to the follow-up plot. The author must stick to it ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh 🌟❤️❤️❤️🌹❤️❤️❤️🌟 (↑My special mark expresses my love and blessings, don't misunderstand me) Needless to say, it tastes natural and delicious if it matches the taste.

The protagonist has a strong sense of fragmentation, and the description of the protagonist group is not OOC at all. Apart from being a little smarter, although Wang Mo has some emotions such as jealousy, he is still kind-hearted. That little mirror is really cute. It accompanies the protagonist calmly and sometimes gives a little comfort. Oh my gosh, I'm so touched by the little mirror. Come to the little mirror and give me a kiss. It's so cute. Don't miss it. And that Xiaoye, when she started describing it, I felt it was like the kind of book where you get stabbed in the back at the end, but now it feels pretty good, it brings warmth to the protagonist, it's beautiful, it's really nice. Author, can you suddenly update a few hundred chapters? Shocked us. [Laugh]

Among all the novels of the same type that I have read, this one can be said to be a masterpiece so far. Other novels of the same type are either poor in writing, or they are very interesting in the beginning but the ending in the back is too grand to be read. The typical one is the one where Wen Qian becomes a magical girl because she becomes a god. The world view in the back is too big and confusing, but this one does not have this problem so far. , I feel that the author has well described the suffering and inner struggle that magical girls have to face, as well as the complex inner feelings of the protagonist group who can obtain a powerful force without any effort. There is one thing in the middle that I think is particularly well described, which is when Wang Mo faces the protagonist without being absorbed and the power is still so strong. , The writing style is very good, there is no problem with the segmentation, and there is not too much description of the environment, so the summary is very good-looking Finally, to sum up: the protagonist is neither a Virgin nor a saint. It feels a bit like Chaotic Neutral. She will do whatever it takes to survive and is willing to pay any price. But she still has a soft heart. I feel that this character is very nice and the author writes it very well. As long as the author is not unfinished and not too censorious, I will continue to follow up. [Sending Hearts]

It's very delicious, and it writes the despair of a magical girl in a very profound way, but the Yiye Luoli warriors are all so stupid. The following text, Jianpeng's performance made me angry and cured my corn syndrome. Wang Mo said in surprise: "Xiyao! Why are you looking like this?! Your hair is a mess, your face is as pale as paper, and your clothes seem... Torn in several places? Are you in danger?" In Chen Sisi's eyes: Lin Xiyao's appearance... Was too abnormal. She always paid attention to her appearance, but she was so embarrassed at the moment, and there was still a kind of... Panic and exhaustion in her eyes that she couldn't completely hide? Where did she go just now? Jianpeng: Wow! Is classmate Xiyao fighting with someone? It looks like he was seriously injured!

Come on, big daddy, the rice is very fragrant! ! This is my favorite type among the Ye Luoli fanfics (,,>᎑<,,), great collaboration! ദ്ദി˶>ω<)✧[Blow a kiss]

Good-looking... The despair that almost crushes people and the face of death (on the eve of Witch Night), Lin Lin and Xiaoye's peaceful daily relationship are heartbreaking😭😭😭If fate points to such a future...😭😭😭

I think it's ok, the idea is very clear, and the teacher wrote it very well. Does the teacher plan to write about being a half-witch? [Thinking] I'm following up on this review. It's so well written. At first, I thought the teacher would become a half-witch like the Magic Chronicles. I was curious about what the heroine would think when she knew that the gems became pure after half-witch transformation.

The subject matter is very novel. It's the first time I've seen a magical girl and Ye Luoli's Fairy Dream written together. The psychological description of the heroine is also very good. Well, I can sum it up in one sentence. It's very interesting.

I read Ye Luoli, and when I saw this fantasy connection, I could feel the despair of the magical girl, and I hope the author can connect it well later. And for the ending of the heroine, I hope it is not death. And judging from the genre of the magical girl written by the author, well, it is generally sad and desperate. I want a more novel ending. (Why does the little greedy cat want both (￣▽￣)~*)

This is the first time I hope that an author does not understand the core tragedy of the magic circle so thoroughly (╥ω╥`) It is not OOC at all. This is the most novel subject I have ever seen, and the teacher who writes it the best. I love it. Please watch it\(//∇//)\

This book is really delicious and stands out [Sending my heart] Everything is very logical, there is no inexplicable heartthrob, no inexplicable love at first sight or stupidity, and the characters have no OC, and I think the author's writing is very in line with my taste, that is, the protagonist group also has a bad side, no one is perfect, it is very real [Love]

Super pretty! I also like the subject matter! The protagonist feels very broken! The subject matter is very novel. The combination of Magic Circle and Ye Luoli really creates sparks. The author's writing style is also good. I'm addicted to read it!

Very nice! The subject matter is novel and the writing is good

Recommended masterpiece. The subject matter is rare and the writing is very good.

This is what ordinary magical girls should be like [Admiration] [I'm about to cry] The author really showed the tragic core of Magic Circle very well [Cry] The protagonist was very happy from the beginning to the despair when he gradually learned that he had to pay a price to survive [Cry] [Cry] [Cry] This is what this timeline is like [What]

Nice. Nice. The writing is good. The theme of Magic Yuan and Ye Luoli is very novel together! (๑•̀ㅁ•́ฅ)

Super good-looking😚😚😚The plot is novel and the writing is top-notch😋Every adjective is very appropriate, it feels like you can imagine the picture just by looking at the words😘

Beautiful and well written

It looks good and the writing is also very good.

Beautiful, very beautiful

It's so cruel, I really cried

First give a five-star review and support.

The writing is really great. The two little bitter gourds, Xiyao and Xiaoye, made me cry to death. [Crying] Da Da's description is so delicate. I will follow Da Da throughout my life. [Blow kiss]

The description is very good. I haven't read the first chapter, but I can see that the author's writing style is very clear. I like it and it is also very novel::ೖ(⑅σ̑ᴗσ̑)ೖ::

It was delicious! Looking forward to the follow-up!

Immortal product, fairy product among immortal products, I want to know what Xiaoye looks like?

Nice! The author's writing is very good

The teacher's cooking is delicious [laughs]

Super pretty! The writing is very good! ! ! ! ! [Sending Hearts]

Needless to say, it must be five stars.