Naruto: Miss Hanabi Looks at Me so Strangely

Give yourself a five-star rating! This is the second book I have written! The character of the protagonist in this film is relatively mild. I set the protagonist to have grown up in an orphanage in his previous life. He lacks love but loves others. Sounds a little weird, right? In short, it can be seen as a little sun, so the book is not that dark, and I also like a more relaxed style. That's probably all I want to say. If there is anything else I want to say, I will put it in the author's remarks of each chapter. Next, I will introduce this book in detail. First, this novel has no system and is an unsystematic text. Second, the heroine is Hinata Hanabi. She is very beautiful and has a good personality. I will show you a picture at the beginning of each chapter. Third, the Uchiha will not be exterminated. I will add spoilers about the specific ending. Fourth, because the timeline is a bit early, many characters are just children with different personalities, so there may be some OOC, but it's not a big problem. The fifth personality is activated! OK, that's about it. If you have anything you want to ask, @artgeniusxiaodi. This person, this is also my account. He will often be active in the comment area and reply to any questions. The author account usually doesn't read much information. Hey! If you haven't read the book yet, check it out here! When I reviewed it, the book had just reached 200,000 words. I want to mention it here because I saw a few more negative reviews. First, some people say that this book looks like a girl's video. What I want to say is that this book is not a girl's video! Not a female channel! Not a female channel! Second, some people say that it is not like a time traveler, because the protagonist Kong died of illness, has a beginning and an end, and feels that living in the second life is profitable, and does not take everything seriously. Third, some people say that there are too many daily plots. I am sorry for this, because the book is intended to be very long, estimated to be more than one million words, so it is definitely not fast-paced. This will be much better in the Chuunin Exams. Fourth, the character design of the protagonist. Some people think he is too childish and child-like, because it has been many years since he became a child (Shinichi became a child even when he became Conan), but when I say this, I don't mean to express that the protagonist is just a child. The protagonist must be mature, but his ability is to sense the emotions of others. With this ability, he can identify which ones are good and which ones are bad. He avoids those with bad intentions. For good ones, he does not dislike contact and shows his kind side. The fifth personality is activated! Sixth, after a period of time, I will add it again. I have broken some of my defenses. I have done more in the past, which is true, so I have added to the introduction and book reviews, but I still can't avoid getting a negative review. And then I got a bad review today, which is really tiring. Since the female protagonist is Hanabi, the male protagonist should not be too old. If the setting is very old, I won't say whether the readers can stand it or not. I definitely can't stand it. It's too perverted, and the platform does not allow such perversion. He disliked the fact that the protagonist was always too young, but Hanabi was already young, and it was impossible for me to adjust the timeline to the final chapter of the original work. The protagonist would indeed be 18 by then, but there would be no story left to write, only incombustibles. I'm here to write Shippuden, not Boruto.

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Daily writing, quite sweet and pretty. However, there are also shortcomings, that is, the pace of the first few dozen chapters is too slow, or there are too many unnecessary descriptions, so that it looks like the writing style of a female channel. (It may also be because I am a straight man and can't watch so many things that I think are too "warm". I want to see the blood flowing into the mouth of the river!) But it gets better in the later part, there is no such ink as in the front. Overall, it's pretty good. At least it's one of the few serious about writing the female protagonist Hanabi, so it's worth supporting.

Needless to say great! Fragrant, soft and cute fireworks! [Blowing kiss] Needless to say great! Who doesn't like such cute fireworks? Hey [Love] I hope to see more Hanabi novels in the future. Wow Kaka(ヾ(˙❥˙)ﾉ

It's rare to find a novel in which everyone is a normal person, without all kinds of forced conspiracies/pretense/conflicts. The arrival of the protagonist also effectively changes the plot, unlike some novels that directly copy the protagonist from the original work and just see it. It's excellent in every aspect. So far, there are no shortcomings. 10/10 And, please don't be like this, okay? I just turned it over

The main story of Hanabi heroine is very good, there are no outrageous second creations, and unlike most Naruto Machiavellian fan fiction, the characters are relatively simple, and the relationship between the characters is also very good, which is very interesting. The most important thing is, can the author write a book for a lifetime [smile][smile][smile][smile][smile]

Let me give you a true evaluation. The protagonist does not behave like a person from two lives or a time traveler. The protagonist is miserable in the early stage and is a bit deliberate. The character's motivation is wrong. From my 3000-hour bookworm point of view, this book will not last long. However, I was also attracted by the fireworks, and the author's idea is quite good. I still need to work hard to publish a new book.

A high-quality Naruto fanfic, this book is unique among Naruto fans in terms of daily descriptions, but many things before or after the story will be briefly mentioned, giving people the feeling that one moment they are fighting life and death, and the next moment they are like brothers. If you don't mind this skipping description, this book is worth a read. The single heroine Hanabi in this book is very good, a rare heroine, and the yandere is well described and fits the character. If you want to read Naruto's sweet story, this book is worth a try. The battle will not disturb the reading experience. There is no system but there is a prophetic trick, and the growth curve control is okay. There is no brainless trick to control everything. At least there are traces to follow to become stronger. There's no way to put a numerical value on this problem. A common problem with Naruto is that he can't hit those behind him if he's not high, and he's uncomfortable if he's too low. This book is somewhere in the middle and is on the cool side. It's worth a try. If you don't want to read anything other than Naruto, you can leave when there are more than 400 chapters.

It's really good-looking. The character design basically has no OOC. The affinity of the protagonist Sora directly changed the fact that the Uchiha clan was exterminated. Sora's changes to the original work are reasonable and reasonable. The daily life of Hanabi and Sora, Naruto and Hinata is so sweet [like], I hope the author will keep it all the way to the end [please update]

It's a very good book. Although the male protagonist is slightly "knifeed" at the beginning, it also pave the way for the follow-up. The subsequent plots are very beautiful. Wu Dao is basically the "group favorite" in the village. Except for Danzo, Wu Dao is basically Wu Dao. It is also very sweet to be with Hanabi. However, the presence of Hanabi needs to be added later. After all, everyone comes to watch Hanabi [shy]

I recently read a very nice book, which has a unique charm. The book adopts a single heroine setting, and the heroine has a distinct, three-dimensional image and a strong personality. She is brave and tenacious, and never flinches when faced with many difficulties. She relies on her wisdom and perseverance to avoid danger time and time again. Every challenge is an opportunity for her to grow. The storyline revolves around a single female protagonist, with ups and downs and exciting twists. From an ordinary beginning, she has experienced countless twists and tribulations, and the heroine's growth path is full of surprises and accidents. Her story is like a bright star that illuminates the entire story world. The book's depiction of the female protagonist is delicate and nuanced, allowing readers to deeply feel her emotional changes and inner world. Her joys and sorrows, dreams and persistence can all resonate with readers. Highly recommended to everyone, come together to experience the wonderful story brought by the single female protagonist!

The Naruto stories in Tomato are considered to be upper-level and more daily-oriented. The protagonist's character can be seen in the smallest details in the first few chapters. The performance technique is good and worth watching. Hanabi heroines are relatively rare, which is a plus in my case.

The writing is quite good and rigorous, but it just doesn't have too much daily life. This is a ninja world after all, and the protagonist's ability has not yet been developed. Since you think that Naruto will explode because of him, why don't you ask Hiruzen for the sealing technique? The main reason is that the protagonist has no cake to focus on himself. If you plan to write a sweet story, treat it like I didn't say it

It's pretty good to watch. Hanabi has a single heroine. I hope the heroine has more plot. It's boring. It's really boring to be honest.

It's good-looking, with heartwarming daily routines, and exciting fighting scenes. The development of ninjutsu is reasonable and exquisite, and it makes up for the regrets. The most important thing is that the single female protagonist Hanabi [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] has confirmed the relationship between the male and female protagonists, and it's really sweet.

The succubus male protagonist, and then the reading atmosphere is very relaxed (a family atmosphere), because the environment of Konoha is not so dark in the description of this book. Many tragedies in the early stage have changed, and there are many interactions with Hanabi. It looks very sweet. However, the pace in the early stage is a bit slow, so you need to have a little patience to read it. And there is only one female protagonist in Hanabi, so there is not much, so I feel an inexplicable freshness when reading it. All in all, it is a good book.

A very good setting, a rare absence of conspiracy theories, and the protagonist is a pure succubus. So far, except for the fact that the protagonist is sometimes too mature and sometimes too childish, and it feels unbalanced, everything else is good. The interaction with Hanabi is very sweet, and she pays special attention to touching her head. The daily part looks good, and I hope it won't wilt when I need to burn it later.

This is a good fanfic that I have read. The author must update it [laughs][laughs][laughs]

It looks warm and cozy, which is great for everyday life.

It's been a long time since I've watched it. Overall, it's well-written and quite sweet. The relationship between the characters is also very good, which makes up for some of the regrets of the original work. So far, there are no sticking points, but it may be a bit slow to start the main plot.

It's quite bland, the protagonist has a good personality, and I haven't seen any poison points so far (maybe it's because I'm highly resistant to poison)

It seems that the two days have been quite good. The protagonist is simply a succubus, but the previous article is a bit too lengthy and I feel that the protagonist's strength is not expressive. Maybe I have read too many Invincible articles and feel that the protagonist's strength has improved a bit slowly [face covering]

This book is really well written Let me start with what I dislike about this book. 1. The Chunin Examination is missing a lot of plots. 2. The description of the big scene was too short, and the excitement did not explode. This is a problem with the author's writing skills. It is a bit immature, but there is still no big problem with the plot. I also gave it 5 stars. 3 Is daily life and battles. In fan fiction, battles should be at least 50-50 equal to daily life. Only through battle can the preciousness of daily life be reflected. It would be too bland if it were all daily life. Nowadays, there are really too many daily routines, which affects the perception a bit (personal opinion) 4 is due to plot changes. For example, Gaara and Tsunade's bond with Naruto is not as strong as in the original. The author's writing is very warm, but people who have been in warmth will not grow violently. The author has also written before that maturity lies in experience and that you need to experience more. Shiro and Zabuza are even more unmatched. Can you describe it at least? I like the world of Naruto you wrote, not just Sora and Hanabi. This book allowed me to see the feeling of watching Naruto for the first time when I was young. I secretly shed tears when I saw the third generation grandfather died. In fact, there is no need to over-interpret a comic. Naruto will always be the little sun. I really like Naruto. I started watching Naruto when I was less than 10 years old because my brother really spent countless hours with me from childhood to adulthood. Payne stopped reading for a while. I remember that every Thursday when it was updated, I would watch Gaara's resurrection on Tudou. I had seen so much that I really liked Naruto. I liked Naruto very much. The author wrote it very delicately. To be honest, Naruto is something different to me. It is a work that has been integrated into my life. I have read many, many Naruto fanfics. In fact, there are not many that moved me. This review is not to be picky, but I really like this work and want to make it better. Thank you, the author, for bringing us this excellent work. Come on! The above is purely my personal opinion. If you don't agree, you can discuss it, but don't insult me. Thank you.

The writing is pretty good (≧∇≦*) Just don't suck

Especially beautiful. I just want to see the knife! Write me a knife quickly! Knife! Knife! I want to see the knife! The more the merrier! The sharper the knife, the better! Better send me more! What a knife! The more the merrier! The more I look at the knife, the more excited I get! Best to send it to all readers! Want more! The more the merrier! It's better to be all knives!

The writing is not bad, and it changes many tragedies of Naruto. It is more daily life, and the interaction with Hanabi is quite sweet. It is worth recommending in Naruto fan fiction. Give me one more star

The front is very warm, I love watching it, I love watching it

It's almost a daily novel, with very few and almost no fighting scenes. It wasn't until more than 100 chapters that I entered the chunin exam. But the daily writing is very sweet and good for leisure and entertainment viewing. If you are looking for some fighting plots, read the introduction and learn about the protagonist before jumping to the chunin exam.

It's really good. The protagonist's strength improves very quickly. It's really fun to watch.

This book doesn't have any poisonous points, and it is definitely one of the best in fan fiction. The writing is excellent. But after about two or three hundred chapters, Hanabi's plot became less and a bit uncomfortable. Hanabi and other characters were well written without OOC, and the story development in the early stage was too slow. It seemed that the main character in the two hundred chapters was still a fifth year in the academy. In terms of plot, there were many original plots. The writing was okay, but it was difficult for me to accept the plot except for the original Naruto. Generally speaking, it is very suitable for readers who like a slow pace and value love. Come on, author, there are very few heroines who are Hanabi nowadays. .