Double System: Starting with a Heartbeat Score of Negative One Million

This chapter is an almost perfect example, showing how to simultaneously complete the three major tasks of advancing the plot, shaping the characters, and showing the world structure through a compact scene. It has a tight rhythm, vivid descriptions, a magnificent climax, and leaves endless suspense at the end - how will the trip to the imperial capital unfold? Why are underground organizations so hot on the trail? What's the situation like inside the Bai family? If I have to make one suggestion, it would be that the motivations of the villain's "underground organization" can be further deepened in subsequent chapters. Are they so persistent in "inviting" Bai Ruoxue to leave? In addition to seeking revenge, is it also related to her special "Taiyin Body" or other secrets? This can give the conflict a stronger foundation. All in all, the plot of this chapter is exquisitely designed, the civil and military scenes are well matched, and the main theme is clearly expressed. It is a wonderful piece of content that can firmly capture the reader's mind and make people eager to follow it.

After reading the first 15 chapters, I felt pretty good. It was quite refreshing. Ye Feng, a being who did not exist in the previous life, seemed to help the protagonist grow. The protagonist would also go through various problems and continue to grow. Then this life is equivalent to a parallel world, seemingly mixed with Gao Wu. This will be written slowly, because there are supernatural powers in the rewards. In fact, if there are supernatural powers, I still like the male protagonist or the single male protagonist to control the situation strongly. This book is a bit special. There should be many aspects that need to be written. The difficulty also needs to combine urban daily high martial arts and so on. The author's writing style is also good. This book is the one with the most comments that I have written. To sum it up, it is quite good. I will read the remaining chapters and comment more later. Five stars is not greedy 🤭 Following up on the review, it is clear from Chapter 17 that one component of cultivating immortals (including a reward for cultivating immortals that appeared before) is similar to the recovery of natural energy or spiritual energy. However, considering that the technological era mentioned before is not that deep yet, the martial arts component is not that high. At this rate, I think it is more appropriate to wait until the technological era reaches our time to reach the high martial arts stage, otherwise it will be too fast. I still commented too early. In fact, some of the points I shouldn't have commented so early may have been wrong. I'll explain them in detail to you when I finish them.

I have basically read it once. Judging from the progress of the current update, this novel is not mindless. The combat power system setting is related to the five elements, which is interesting, but it feels not clear and complete enough. Moreover, I feel that the heroine has too many scenes. I hope that our Ye Xun will also have some growth scenes later! This book is getting more and more interesting. The world view is a little slow to lay out, but this feeling of clearing the air is very refreshing. I hope the author will not leave any holes and can solve all the doubts! One more wave of support! Go, go, go!!!

It's a pretty good novel with exciting content. I recommend it 👍👍

The content is rich and exciting and worth reading, 👍👍👍👍 If you are looking for a book with vivid characters and a grand world view, this is An urban supernatural novel with a compact pace and no procrastination, then this book This book may very well be your next one" This is a film that combines "the mystery of the system", "the growth of a strong woman", and "the grand world". A masterpiece of urban supernatural power that combines "world view" and "refreshing rhythm". Follow Follow Bai Ruoxue's footsteps to the imperial capital and witness Ye Xun's counterattack.

The plot is very interesting, it has a sense of déjà vu, and it's nice to watch.

This chapter ends in an atmosphere of intense preparation for exams and surging undercurrents. It interweaves the pressure of senior high school life with the protagonists' emotions and life experience clues, which enhances the tension of the story.

The content is novel and the plot is progressively interesting. I hope the author will continue to update it! 🥰🥰

The advantages of this book are obvious. The plot is relatively compact and has a strong sense of substitution.

The plot is interlocking, the writing is brilliant, and the book is vivid and humorous. The more you read it, the more you love it.