Mushoku Tensei: The Tale of Old Rudy

It's very well written. I read it in one breath. I felt like my heart was being pressed by a stone and I couldn't breathe. I like Alice very much, so I specially found a fan who only has Alice. You, the author, wrote so well about the feeling of powerlessness, hard-won happiness, and the daily life. It's heartwarming, the entanglement between Alice and the protagonist, and the description of the characters' psychology and emotions are really excellent. It's a pity that the IP is not popular due to the lack of job. The old Rudy you wrote is really too miserable. I really need to find the original work to balance it. After reading it, I felt very thoughtful.

I haven't read the original novel, but I think this piece is just like the original author's Old Rudy story. It's really fascinating and interlocking. If the author wrote it himself, I would give it high praise.

I gave it a "fairly good" rating. If the whole book can be read smoothly in one sitting, it will still be a pretty good reading experience. Some of the scenes are impressive, but they are not "unforgettable in a lifetime". The climax of the book can be said to be interesting. It made me cry out from time to time, but it was also reasonable. It was enjoyable at the time. There are also some "golden sentences" in the book. I have good writing skills, and I can see progress in the later stages. I was disappointed with a lot of omitted content in the early stage, which also shows that the author was "in a hurry" at the time, but the author does have "deep love" and can write millions of words (you will be successful in anything you do). I look forward to the next work. (By the way, do you have a tendency to abuse Aisha? I, a cook of Aisha, really can't stand it 😢 😢)

Can the author give Ai Xia a better ending? The final battle is very good. But I always feel that the Demon Continent chapter I'm watching so far is a bit painful for pain's sake. (I feel like I haven't felt any better after seeing Rudy in pain) I hope the story ends better. Although Rudy's story is destined to be sad. But wouldn't it be nice to have some hope left in despair?

This is the first non-job fan I have seen that has the same skills as the original work. I even feel that his writing is better than the original work, and many plots have been improved. And, it's all within reason. It's your time relationship, it's a bit difficult to understand, but my current words probably belong to it. It seems like there are three timelines, and then the author made up a perfect timeline where the second timeline is false. That's about it, and the second timeline is a supplement to the other two timelines in the original work. All in all, this is the most exciting novel I have read after a year of book drought. I hope it becomes popular.

The writing is really good, and I can tell that someone has good skills, but it's a bit too depressing.

I'm sorry, I've read too many sweet articles, and when I saw this, my eyes darkened, but I wanted to read on. What's next, author? Why is there still a participation list? Aren't they all dead? That's not the case, right? No way? Right?

Please let the author answer the question. Why can't I understand what happened later? When Old Rudy turned on the time magic, shouldn't it start when Rudy entered the basement? Now what I understand is that Old Rudy's soul traveled through Rudy's body, at the cost of losing his memory and then repeating the reincarnation.

It's so well written. Although it's a little dark, it's definitely a masterpiece. It's at least better than 85% of Tomato's novels.

, Alas, my feeling after watching more than half of it, when the bonds between different family members are broken, all communication and words seem pale and feeble, which is also the key to how easily humans and gods can interfere. The depressive atmosphere in the first and middle stages is getting bigger and bigger, and it is a battle that cannot be won. One point is deducted because Boss Long's behavior is very strange. Although he is not omniscient, there is so much information available [🐉's inaction: Rudy's family philosophy and 🐉's numbness are offset, the abnormal variables Rudy and 🐉 are hopelessly offset in this reincarnation, but the gods and humans gathered the world's top combat forces just to encircle and suppress one person, 🐉Something should be done no matter what.] In this situation, with hundreds of reincarnations, the dual quotient is extremely high but numb, it is impossible to ignore this point. The behavior I made feels OOC, but the ability to affect the overall situation is too great. It is excusable for the author to seal it. It is a bit poisonous but okay 🥺.