Horror Live Broadcast: My Top List Is All Ex-Girlfriends

I've finished reading it. Overall, it's a pretty good novel (relatively speaking in Tomato). I can see a lot of flavors from other novels in this book (Seize the Body, Transformation Tie Tie, Dungeon Adventure, Underworld Coin), but that doesn't hinder its excellence, but its shortcomings are also obvious. The writing is not precise enough, and it could be written more exciting and logically (this is definitely not qualified if it is a copy flow!), And the characters are not three-dimensional enough. The emotional transition is too sudden and blunt (for example, when the protagonist saves her ex-girlfriend, when she just gets the intelligence tip, you can timely Describe the protagonist's expression and mood. Would a normal man be indifferent if he knew that his ex-girlfriend didn't love him but was taken away from her and suffered a lot? No matter if the author wants the protagonist to save her and the three of them get together, or if he is forced to forget about each other because of his body? In Jianghu, whether the author kills this ex-girlfriend and makes her become the protagonist's eternal regret, there should be no lack of description of the protagonist's mood from getting the truth to saving the ex-girlfriend). Author, you have incorporated too many things and need to be polished. It is a masterpiece at best! By the way, you can go and watch the ghost talk live broadcast room. The author also imitates a super thriller style, but he has found his own way and is very successful. Come on, author! ! !

It involves skin objects, possessions and puppets. When someone dies and gets up again, you don't know who it is. It's a bit overloaded. But the story frame is very interesting. I hope you won't become addicted to it. I'll come back and give it a 9-star review if it turns out to be good.

It looks much better than those high scores, not bad

I saw someone recommending it and thought it was quite cliche, but I didn't expect it to be unexpectedly exciting, compact and not protracted, the plot has ups and downs, the logic is rigorous, and there are no flaws. It's really good!

It feels good. Although the apocalyptic novel written by the author in the second book is not interesting, this one is really good. It seems that you are still suitable for this track. What happens next? Can the ex-girlfriend be rescued? Also, will Lin Weiwei upgrade her skin? Although it is not as evil as other novels, I think the author is still planning something?

It feels quite satisfactory and the logic is basically self-consistent. I haven't seen any OOC issues yet, so I'll give it a try. At least when I watched it, the words and sentences were quite fluent, and the plot didn't stretch my shoulders.

I have nothing to do at home during the Chinese New Year, so I lay on the bed and read a novel. Not to mention it is quite good. I read it. I just read the first few, so take your time and see if the later ones are still so attractive [please read carefully]

This book will definitely become a masterpiece. Whether it is the structure or the details, it is the best book I have read in the past few years. Of course, I love this kind of subject matter, and I hope you will like it too!

The writing is really good, the details are full, and there are wonderful things everywhere. I love it so much. Keep going! [Adoration][Adoration][Admiration]

The author is really talented in writing, the scenes are described with a sense of pictures, and the characters are vivid. One person has thousands of faces, and his wisdom can be seen in every inch.

I have been writing for so long, so I would like to give myself a rating to encourage myself. I am not in a position to say that I am good at writing, but I am indeed updating it on time. I will see where I can make changes if I have nothing to do. I am working hard with the hope that everyone will see a good story. The good news is that the English version of my niche novel was actually captured by the Internet. The bad news is that after the English literal translation, I wrote this thing and Waiguoren said it was artificial intelligence. I (｡ò ∀ ó｡) rub →_→.

The more you watch, the more enjoyable it becomes, it's fun [Blow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Flow a kiss]

It feels pretty good! It's a bit of a dark fantasy. After reading it this time, I feel that the story is quite compact. Not bad, not bad

The emotions are well captured, the characters are three-dimensional and vivid, and the plot is unparalleledly stunning. A great book!

The characters are very three-dimensional, down to earth, with incredible IQ and EQ, basically no flaws, eight stars!

It's full of visuals, and I can't say enough good things about this book!

After seven or eight chapters, it gets better and better, and the plot progresses layer by layer. The writing is really awesome!

The story begins with a down-and-out detective with a short story. After receiving a commission and discovering something strange about his ex-girlfriend, he enters the realm of terror. After being tricked, he regretfully abandons his original body and takes over the female body whose consciousness has been erased, and embarks on the road of adventure. The writing style is acceptable and the plot has ups and downs. It is a good article worth reading.

The plot is explosive. I admire the writing and conception. Highly recommended!

This article must be praised, the writing style and details are quite amazing, all kinds of amazing, very interesting and good article

Quite a novel plot, IQ online, Ness.

A masterpiece, it requires some patience, the characters, plot, and twists are all top-notch, a great work!

Author, you are lying. I have lost my brain and I can't understand it at all. [Aggrieved] But it looks okay, at least there's nothing sinister about it. [Rolls eyes] [Blows kisses] [Eats melon]

Hehe, I found the treasure article again!

I like the writing style very much

Uh-huh, it's very strong😋Please🥺It's more important for you three to live a good life than anything else

It's good to watch, and the plot logic is on point in the tomato calculation.

The plot is very exciting

I rarely rate Red Persimmon's books. I feel that the author's writing style is quite good. I urge you to update [Thoughts]

Very nice! I look forward to the next updates from the author. I will always support the author. Come on!