It's Just a Marriage of Convenience

Oh my god, it's so well-written that it only scored 6.5. It's a super nice little sweet story. The heroine is so cute and has a very interesting soul. This kind of character completely stepped on my point. The hero is not a traditional cold-faced boss, not greasy at all, and can secretly eat. The snacks have a touch of cuteness. From the description, I can imagine the sweet daily life of the young couple. It is simply the happy life of the little cake and her husband. The relationship progresses quite quickly, but it is not abrupt. It is sweet anyway. The author Baobao, please write 💕

The male and female protagonists really made me laugh!!! My wife is so pretty! How come these two of my mom are so cute! Both the male and female protagonists have mouths, and the male protagonist is not a boring boss! He actually eats snacks secretly! And in order to stay in shape, I only dare to eat small packets! Help is so cute!! Not to mention the heroine's baby! Super strong sense of insensitivity! The male protagonist is already jealous and starts to hint, the female protagonist is right, he just cares about me! Hahahahahahahahahahaha it's so fun! Who researched these two gadgets? [Full] More updates! Oh, big!!!! One update of ten chapters and eight chapters scares me [please update]

Marriage first, love later. Ning Ning is so cute. She wears beautiful clothes and says nice things. She lives a very real and sober life. The heroine's baby is really good. Mr. Zhou is the kind of straight man, hahaha. He loves to be jealous but at the same time he respects the heroine. The long-term story is worth reading. It's not easy to write an article. It's even harder to persevere. Please support me. Keep up the good work [Blow kiss]

It's good-looking. Both the male and female protagonists are so cute. I made my aunt laugh when I watched it. It's so cute. Ning Ning is so cute. The male protagonist is also very cute. The male protagonist is a gentleman and respects the female protagonist. Anyway, it's very good-looking. Come on, author, don't stop updating [send my heart] [send my heart] [send my heart] [send my heart] [send my heart] I was actually flipped by the author, I feel so happy 🤤🤤🤤

There is a lot of room for improvement, but it is already very good, at least around 7:00. I still feel that the writing is rusty in the first few chapters, and the connection between the fragments is not too smooth. I am used to reading quickly, so this problem is still more prominent in my opinion. However, it is much better later on. The emotional transition is a little flat. I like to read this kind of thing, but it may be better if it is more tortuous and less plain. The control of subtle emotions is very good, and the characters are vividly drawn. This is the most prominent and special advantage, which must be maintained. It is obvious that I did not pay too much attention when writing supporting characters. Many of the supporting characters in the story are not very coherent, like a fixed NPC. However, as a pure sweet novel, I can ignore this. You may need to pay more attention to the degree of the plot. I read your new book yesterday. Both books have such small problems. For example, many readers of the new book raised a suspected female rivalry plot. I can see that you did not mean it. The story also tends to describe the feminism side, but the degree is not well controlled. In this book, it can also be seen that some plots are overwritten, such as forums. In my opinion, it is quite cumbersome. There is also the appearance of the supporting character CP, which does not feel like a bonus to the story and character of the protagonist. The appearance of the male protagonist's friends and the female protagonist's family has no written role. It is a bit like a parallel line with the protagonist. Many times, I feel that the supporting characters are immediately fleshed out and immediately enriched the protagonist's character setting, but it stops abruptly. There is a lack of deep talk between the protagonists that can shock the readers' hearts. However, the sentence is still very well written. The protagonist's agility is fully described. This is a very special point that no one else has. As a sweet article, it is undoubtedly successful in making readers feel sweet. It just lacks a feeling that makes the story world huge and full. What readers see now is the agility between the male and female protagonists. There is no strong connection with the outside world and the story world. It lacks the composition of the worldview. Keep up the good work. Another point is that there is a chapter where the male and female protagonists attend a banquet and the NPC makes a pornographic statement about the female protagonist. Maybe you want to express something sideways, such as highlighting the character of the male protagonist and highlighting the disgust of ordinary men in the NPC. However, this sentence itself will naturally make readers uncomfortable because it is a sentence without consequences. The NPC said it without taking the risks and consequences.

The pace is okay and the progress is pretty fast hehe (✿‿) Not bad, not bad. Marriage first, love later, pure and sweet. The male protagonist is not the kind of boss who always has a cold face. Both of them are interesting souls that collide with each other. They hit it off [note] [note] [note] We will do things together that we have never done before. If you have any questions, just ask.

I found a good story by accident. It is a sweet story that flows smoothly. The female protagonist is very cute and the male protagonist has a cute human-machine feeling. After the two communicate with each other, their relationship develops quickly. There is no competition or misunderstanding. In short, it is highly recommended.

It's super good-looking, and I really like the characters of the male and female protagonists💕. I read another novel by the author which is also about marriage. I was running out of books, but I finally found two good ones and read them all night long. I just can't find the author's positive follow-up 🥺

It's a long-running story about first marrying and then falling in love. The plot is quite smooth, but you have to pay a little attention to whether you write the sentences completely. Hey, the little humor from time to time is very interesting. There is no bloody situation. Five-star praise. Thank you very much.

It's really beautiful. Please come and see it. It's a sweet post with no misunderstandings in the whole process. It's super sweet and super sweet. There's no abuse in the whole process. There's only candy and a car. [Send my heart] [Send my heart]