Peking Opera Cat: Mo Yun Listens to the Trend

One of the few masterpieces among Peking Opera Cat fans. After reading Fifty Folds in a few days, you can clearly see the progress of the author's writing from a bit jerky to smooth and natural. As for the writing style, I personally think it is top-notch among similar novels; the description of emotional lines is very delicate. Although it may be that I prefer implicit emotional expression, the objective level is obviously higher than most similar novels (including some that focus on emotional lines). The description of the environment is a highlight. It can be seen that it is moving away from the stage of piling up rhetoric and is improving towards a direction that can truly "enhance the atmosphere". So far, I have not read a fanfic that is significantly better than this one (no matter in terms of plot, writing style, or fluency). If you know of a work that is comparable to or surpasses this one, please save my book shortage by the way [laughing and crying] Then, I would like to make some personal suggestions: One is when writing, try not to give a "conclusion" directly, but use six descriptions and other methods to let readers accurately feel the picture, atmosphere, or emotion you want to express. For example, I found a sentence recently, "Shenzong Pier is already busy." This is a "conclusion" - because we can't see the concept of "busy". We can only see the stacking of wooden boxes containing goods or luggage, the hurried footsteps of porters, the sweat drops, the various preparations of sailors on the ship before setting sail, the conversations of pedestrians on the dock, the shouts and instructions of workers, the muffled sound of wooden boxes falling to the ground, the smell of the salty sea breeze, and so on. Although this is not a shortcoming, doing it well is the icing on the cake at most, and most online articles have this problem, but I think such an excellent work deserves more careful polishing [laughing] Another way is to use some classical Chinese words when describing scenes, but be sure not to mix them with white and white, otherwise it will look awkward. If you want to write in plain language, pay more attention, or try to use vernacular to achieve the same elegant feeling [laughing] To sum up, it is fresh and clear, the flaws do not hide the good points, it is a five-star good article, and the author will update it quickly [Chigua][Chigua][Chigua]

It looks good, it's cp and it's top quality in Mo Zi Zhong.

It's not too much to give yourself a five-star rating

Five-star encouragement ~ What is the specific setting of this book? Can the introduction be more detailed? No CP? Nantong (no offense intended)? Or with Zi?

No one reads such a beautiful book

It's really good to watch, but it feels a bit too dull and the plot has no sense of ups and downs. But it makes people read

I like this kind of feeling

Very good looking author, cheers

A lot of regrets have been resolved, and the content is rich.

The writing is so good, I feel much better than those who use AI to write books