Transmigrating as Liu Xie: Seizing Power from the Start

Everything I have written so far is very good. I rely on the system to break through in difficult situations, and I can also use strategies. But I have one suggestion: never write that distilled wine tastes good! This is a very huge poisonous point! No one thinks that baijiu is delicious. It's just a workplace rule that everyone has to drink baijiu, so we can only brag about it. The ancients loved to drink rice wine and rice wine, women drank fruit wine, and some people drank sweet wine! But absolutely no one likes to drink liquor. The ancients drank it because of its sweet taste. Why do they say that it is a white wine? Because at that time, drinking was really like drinking sugar water. You would like drinking sugar water, but would you like drinking bitter melon juice? So don't write that distilled wine is delicious, but you can write that distilled wine can heal the wounded and win over people's hearts!

The description of the characters is close to reality and consistent with their status. The cheats given by the system are also reasonable, and the various promotions and loyalty are also reliable. At present, there is no trend of collapse. If you keep it up, it will be a good product!

As far as my personal opinion is concerned, the entire book is definitely a masterpiece. The author's writing style is exquisite, the story is vivid and vivid, and the actions and logic of each character in the novel are relatively reasonable. The language description is well-founded and philosophical. Moreover, the author has been updating continuously for more than two hundred days, hoping that it will not be unfinished or eunuch. As for some people giving it low ratings, I don't know the reason. Maybe some people have read too many stallion stories and can't walk when they see a woman. This kind of just-enough feeling of pleasure can make people want to stop, come on, author! What a book, what a book!

I'm almost finished reading it, and some parts are really annoying. This may be why the rating is not high. But if you look at it rationally and look at the overall situation, it's actually very good overall. I read it and listened to it in a few days. It's pretty good.

Currently four stars, the writing is pretty good, he is resourceful, resourceful, and not brainless. Although he has a system, the failure is not too harsh. It is acceptable and I hope to keep it.

Quick update. It's been a long time since I stayed up late reading a novel. Those who come after you should appreciate it carefully.

Big cheers for the author, the writing is super good.

I have a very detailed understanding of historical figures, the characters are vividly depicted, and the writing is very logical and super beautiful. The more I watch it, the more I love it. It connects the front and back and catches my heart.

The historical description is comprehensive and the layout is grand and detailed.

Not bad, just a little age-inappropriate, not a big problem