In the Trial of Destiny, I Take Off with the Country!

From the current chapters, it seems that it is a very good novel with an auxiliary flow of cool writing, and the character design of the protagonist is quite good so far. But it feels a bit awkward when it comes to teammate design. The background mentions that the situation is not good and time is tight. It is necessary to quickly conquer various abyss dungeons to prepare for the integration of reality. It is very reasonable to also arrange for someone to lead the protagonist to upgrade and provide equipment. However, after playing a level 20 dungeon, fixing the team to slow down the game is very contradictory to the background. Shouldn't it be normal to continue to quickly upgrade to the next stage, regroup with new teammates, guide the dungeon of the new stage, and continue to enhance national strength? You can't say that the talents of the teammates at level 20 are the best. The high-level ones are all ordinary people. Except for the protagonist who is the absolute core and enjoys all the resources, it is impossible for others to have this treatment. Then it is more reasonable to cooperate with the corresponding teammates in each new stage. Moreover, the protagonist's current identity should not have the so-called problem of smooth team coordination. He must be able to fit in with various team configurations. Of course, if there are too many characters, it will be more difficult to control them. After all, they all take up space, and it will be harder for readers to remember them. Depending on how the author performs in the future, I still really want to see the author continue writing and finish the book.

Great supporting text. It is also a great read, the writing is also very good, and the description of the battle is also very good. It is a very attractive book. I hope there will be more chapters. Don't rest. Even the donkeys in the production team dare not rest like this.

The group portrait article is quite good and enjoyable. The only drawback is that there are too few chapters. There are only 19 chapters. Can you wake up tomorrow and add a 0 at the end?

The subject matter is very good and I enjoyed watching it. But in the future, can we challenge more and more difficult bosses and the like, and challenge the boss specifically based on the characteristics of the boss? On the contrary, it seems unreasonable to say that the goddess has been focusing on this matter. They are so strong, yet they still survive almost every time. Will one person save the world in the end?

I remember that after I traveled through the world without any risk, I was very happy and sang a song called "The Blood Song of the Three Realms". I was discovered by the "Lord of the Stars" and took me to the "Journey to the Misty" and entered the "Heavens and Worlds". I met the "God of Killing" known as the "Natural Disaster". He sat on the "Throne of the Divine Seal" and wanted to kill me, but was saved by the "Nine Heavens Sword Demon". After they recovered from their injuries, they said goodbye to me. Later, he recommended me to "The Evil King of Another World", and I did "Underworld Special Forces" in "The Unrivaled Tang Sect". There, "Galaxy Emperor" taught me "Swallowing the Starry Sky", and "Qin Emperor" taught me how to play the piano. I was developing Final Intelligence there, and I had Clairvoyant Eyes. When I have nothing to do, "The Magic Chef of Ice and Fire" teaches me how to cook, and "The God of Bacchus" teaches me how to mix wine. The most awesome thing is "Emperor". His old man taught me "Unparalleled in the World" "Peerless Magical Powers", and I followed the path of "Emperor Supreme". Soon after, I trained the "Immortal" Divine Body. Under the "Heaven Realm and Firmament", I used the "Destroy the Sky Map" to defeat the world's best master "The Evil God" and snatched the "Throne of the End of the Dharma". However, the world could not bear my power and the space was shattered. I was sucked into the "Perfect World" and returned to the "Wild Era" Yuan~~~Oh! I am old, and now it is the world of you young people, but young people, you have to update!

The logic is online. The country and the protagonist complement each other. The power of a country is gathered to assist with upgrading. It is very exciting to watch. There is no such bad plot as in ordinary stories where passers-by A, B, and C casually make malicious comments and then get slapped in the face. It is focused on the growth line. Everyone in the protagonist group has their own characteristics and stories. I really like this atmosphere of unity and common growth. I hope it can be maintained. The only drawback is that the pit is too shallow. You can see the latest chapters at once.

I really like this one. I hope there is no heroine. Is it okay to write a side story even if there is a love story? Please! I really like this book.

The breakup and union in the front are very interesting to watch, and the setting is also very good. It has the refreshing feeling of a refreshing novel and the idea of ​​a normal article. The best thing is that the author knows when to skip and when to describe. The characters in it are rare characters with brains in refreshing novels.

It's pretty good, but it has a female protagonist. If you like a female protagonist, you can watch it.

It's good-looking, nothing to say, and I won't overly think that I'm invincible even if I'm hooked. Let's see how the love line is going now. I hope it can be just a comrade-in-arms, or it can gradually come naturally. Don't make progress too fast. After all, it's the main country line. If the relationship is written too much, it will be sweet and greasy, and it won't be too exciting. If it's written too little, there will be no need to find this person.

All I can say is that the author really tried his best. Other authors only have more than 2,000 words per page, but he starts with a minimum of 3,000 words. The highest one can reach more than 8,000 words in one go. It's really fun to watch. As long as the author updates it steadily, I believe this book will have a glorious day. There are not many ratings at the moment, but I believe the lowest rating in the future will be 9.4 Or 9.5. If it doesn't work, 9.3 Is definitely a must. [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Admiration]

The pace of this book is very fast. The content of the first ten chapters can catch up with the 30 chapters of the same type I have read before, and each chapter has a lot of content. Unconsciously, I felt that it should not be just these few chapters. The writing is very strong.

It's very interesting. Different from other routine novels, there is no hidden counter-attack plot. Overall, the pace is very fast. I just don't know if the author can keep up in the future.

It's very enjoyable, and it still has the feelings of family and country, but I don't think it's necessary to have a female protagonist. Of course, if I can write it well, then I'll leave it up to you.

It's really good. The author has something. The first 20 chapters are quite interesting, but the few chapters after awakening the second Wenxin spirit are very satisfying, including "Successful", and they also satisfy my heart as a reader. I have read them all, so little. The author will update soon. You said that your heartbeat was very fast and you went to see your heart. It may be related to the lack of rest and physical condition. I have had it too. I don't know if the author is fat. Haha, please pay more attention to your health.

I have read a lot of fantasy game novels, but there are very few auxiliary novels. This one ranks among the top among the novels I have read. It may be a bit empty in terms of character expression, but the author has paid great attention to the skill building in the book, which is good, come on!

It's a pretty good auxiliary article, but I have some suggestions: For a team article, the other members of the Pangu Team should not just be described on a spiritual level, but the skills and configuration of the team members should also be strengthened. For example, the fixed core skills of the players, rather than the forgotten skills of the players described in the article (replacement of skill configurations in sets), is like a fixed BD in a treasure farming game. Now each member has a super high-limit talent + hidden profession. The protagonist is completely responsible for completing the dungeon, and the role of the team members is not very obvious.

At present, it doesn't seem to be very toxic. If you are the kind of person who feels divine when you see a reversal (that is, you know nothing about foreshadowing and foreshadowing), you may even think it is a purely refreshing article. At least I'm already a little awkward

It's so beautiful, so awesome, the author will update it soon, please work hard to update it!

When I read the introduction at first, I thought it was ordinary, but the result... Well, it was quite unexpected. The protagonist seems to be a young man, but he actually behaves very boldly, and his character gradually changes. It's good. First of all, the character is established, and secondly, the plot. The beginning is still relatively new, but the plot of the Lord of the Mountains: The Sorrow of Civilization is very well written! The plot is fleshed out in an instant. It's definitely acceptable among Xiaobai's cool novels. The writing is also good. I highly recommend it.

This is an urban martial arts novel with explosive settings and grand layout. The author cleverly combines "personal awakening" and "feelings for family and country", and based on Chinese civilization, he constructs a battle epic that coexists with passion and poetry. Its core theme of "turning it over to the state" not only creates dramatic conflicts, but also accurately hits the collective emotions and cultural confidence of current readers.

Very good. Being able to write about so many skills and characteristics, etc., And also being able to write about a thrilling process is very awesome. I hope the author writes more, and I hope the author can produce more novels like this. Please add more, please.

Well, it seems to be okay so far, so I'll rate it in advance.

I hope there will be a single heroine. This is urban martial arts, not a one-person cultivating immortality. It would be too lonely if there is no one.

This book is so cool, it makes me so happy

At present, the author does not look like a novice. The introduction of this skill is very detailed and very domineering.

It's really an auxiliary cool article. At present, the attribute data is a bit lacking. I hope to improve it in the future, let alone eunuchs [laughs]

Why did the rating drop to 7.6? So far it seems to be okay, but I don't think the protagonist's teammates are particularly strong. The strength of teammates needs to be improved.

This new book has relatively few chapters, and is more focused on group portraits. The central idea is similar to repaying China, and it is supplemented by refreshing writing. It does not overwhelm the protagonist and water content, so it is more interesting to read.

It's really great! I feel burned to death!