Love Really Is Such a Hassle

I very much support the novel, but I do have a few small problems. First, the plot has too few ups and downs, and the climax of Toru Watanabe's book basically never stopped. Secondly, there are too few perspectives of the heroines. After breaking up with Xia, she didn't give Xia any perspective at all. In addition, the daily ups and downs are too small. The strength of Watanabe Toru's book is that Liao Liao established the protagonist's self-discipline very well in a few strokes (running in the morning and memorizing words) and then continued to return to the main line. This book obviously did not write well with multiple perspectives. Third, there are too few profile descriptions. In Tetsu Watanabe's Kiyono Rin's The God of Gods, the author used a large number of profile descriptions to show the heroine's different treatment of the male protagonist from other people. It is implicit and heart-warming. However, in this article, it is directly written that Xia believed that she did not like the male protagonist, so she rejected it. In fact, this treatment is inferior in comparison, because she knows it well but does not say it, which is more attractive. However, the male protagonists of the two books are quite different. Before Watanabe Toru evolved, he already had many good qualities, such as self-discipline, calmness, humor but not being out of touch. This book portrays a growth-oriented protagonist. Different people have different opinions on the character, but the former is definitely better in appearance. Especially what kind of male protagonist is created and what happens next. To be honest, the male protagonist in this book is okay in this fantasy world, but he is not excellent and has many flaws. The male protagonist does not understand anything, is a good thief but has no plan, thinks of what is, and has a love brain. He has not created the smoothness of Toru Watanabe at all, and his temptations are hidden in his heart. Overall, it's pretty good. As the author's debut novel, I feel it's good enough. But with more polish, I hope it can surpass Love Game 🥰.

I read the latest chapter from Add to Bookshelf in one go. The emotional line is very nice and the character development is okay, but the connection of the story seems to be a bit jumpy. I felt a little confused while reading 🤦, and many things were not explained clearly (such as the location of the world, for example) Picture distribution, specific levels of strength, system tasks and current progress, many skills given by the points store without seeing the source, etc.), I hope it can be improved later; the narrative feels like it lacks a little climax, there are not many pitfalls, and it can be regarded as a relatively bland daily story. One more thing It didn't take long to watch and it disappeared. Can the prison work be updated a little more? [Laughing]

The writing is very good, unexpectedly good, the first few chapters have some initial clues, and Chapters 40-50 suddenly make me realize it. It broke my expectations step by step, and it didn't feel like a formulaic novel. The turning point came when my interest waned. The turning point came when I was doubtful and convinced. The jokes are relatively fresh, and the best part is that I've never heard them before. The emotional scenes are okay, mainly the character interactions are interesting. I just don't understand the relationship between Xia and the protagonist. It goes away as quickly as it comes. Their attitudes are incomprehensible. I don't know if there will be any explanation later. The sensationalism and humor are well grasped directly, and there is no sense of literary youth or nonsensical feeling 👍 One of the best books I have read recently, definitely worth reading

The setting is novel and the emotional description is very good, but the book is driven by multiple emotional lines at the same time, and the author's writing style cannot control it. It neither highlights the natural progression of love over time, nor shows the true feelings of love at first sight. It seems very messy and the plot is jumpy, relying entirely on the conflicts of multiple female protagonists and the abstract development of the male protagonist. But I really like this book, and I hope the author will update it soon! (The above is my personal opinion, please don't comment if you don't like it)

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Overall it's nice to watch, but I found that the scene changes very quickly from the back. If you don't pay attention, it will feel a bit strange.

Overall, it's surprisingly okay. It just needs to be a little more abstract instead of so many heavy things. According to my experience, there won't be any bloody scenes where the hero suddenly wakes up and goes to save people.

Can you add some wisdom to the male protagonist? Just be more humane.

It's okay. The character's inner drama is rich. It looks like a very good relaxed daily flow and funny systematic text.

When will we write the ending of Brother Cheng? I want to see Brother Cheng's ending for the second time