Falling in Love Is Really Troublesome.

I read the latest chapter from Add to Bookshelf in one go. The emotional line is very nice and the character development is okay, but the connection of the story seems to be a bit jumpy. I felt a little confused while reading [face covering], and many things were not explained clearly (such as the location of the world, for example) Picture distribution, specific levels of strength, system tasks and current progress, many skills given by the points store without seeing the source, etc.), I hope it can be improved later; the narrative feels like it lacks a little climax, there are not many pitfalls, and it can be regarded as a relatively bland daily story. One more thing It didn't take long to watch and it disappeared. Can the prison work be updated a little more? [Laughing]

The writing is very good, unexpectedly good, the first few chapters have some initial clues, and Chapters 40-50 suddenly make me realize it. It broke my expectations step by step, and it didn't feel like a formulaic novel. The turning point came when my interest waned. The turning point came when I was doubtful and convinced. The jokes are relatively fresh, and the best part is that I've never heard them before. The emotional scenes are okay, mainly the character interactions are interesting. I just don't understand the relationship between Xia and the protagonist. It goes away as quickly as it comes. Their attitudes are incomprehensible. I don't know if there will be any explanation later. The sensationalism and humor are well grasped directly, and there is no sense of literary youth or nonsensical feeling [Like] One of the best books I have read recently, definitely worth reading

The setting is novel and the emotional description is very good, but the book is driven by multiple emotional lines at the same time, and the author's writing style cannot control it. It neither highlights the natural progression of love over time, nor shows the true feelings of love at first sight. It seems very messy and the plot is jumpy, relying entirely on the conflicts of multiple female protagonists and the abstract development of the male protagonist. But I really like this book, and I hope the author will update it soon! (The above is my personal opinion, please don't comment if you don't like it)

Overall, it's surprisingly okay. It just needs to be a little more abstract instead of so many heavy things. According to my experience, there won't be any bloody scenes where the hero suddenly wakes up and goes to save people.

Overall it's nice to watch, but I found that the scene changes very quickly from the back. If you don't pay attention, it will feel a bit strange.

Can you add some wisdom to the male protagonist? Just be more humane.

I can tell that some parts are imitating love games, but the writing is quite good [Like][Like][Like]

Good-looking, but a little lacking

Okay, okay, it looks pretty.

If you speed up reading the front and look back, you will find that the author is a genius, if the author is a newcomer.

It's not bad, the male protagonist is the kind of person who has a baseline.

Surprisingly, it's very good. The more you look at it, the better it looks.

Unexpectedly very beautiful

I think it looks okay

So far, the updates have been too slow [grievance]

As the first book, it seems to be well written. It was relatively stable in the early stage, but after changing the map (about 40 chapters later) it became very exciting, but the traffic was not very good, and not many people read it.

Nb, it's pretty good-looking but not very popular. Come on, keep writing [Bird Food Goddess] [Bird Food Goddess]

I originally wanted to give it 5 stars, but I was struck by some parts and got a -1. There were a few times where the plot connection was a bit abrupt, but overall it was good.

Very nice, I agree

Looks great, five stars for support.

It looks light and very comfortable

😋😋😋It's good to watch, I like it if you like it (Qingye Shen and Kujo) Author, please hurry up and code, or recommend me some of the same type

It's beautiful and well written. I've been following up for updates seriously.

It's okay, pretty good, to my taste After all, too few people read it. It's a pity to write such words [almost crying]

It's good to read, but the plot behind it is a bit similar to that of a book next door. The vicious eldest lady, Niu Qingchun, has a pure heroine. The heroine is neither fighting nor grabbing. I wonder if the subsequent plot will be the same as the plot of the novel next door.