A Mortal Cultivates Immortality, and I Unite Heaven and Man with Swordsmanship and Transform into a Dragon.

It's good-looking. The male protagonist is a pure ascetic who wholeheartedly pursues the Tao. The description of the major sects in it is also very consistent. The sects have their own laws. It's not like other novels written in a third-rate way, with intrigues and intrigues everywhere, and geniuses being framed. The male protagonist's character and the plot are not poisonous. The genius has the style of a genius. The male protagonist is not the only one who excels. The others are also very attractive. I recommend [Blow Kiss]

This is what cultivating immortality is, and the review is very positive. The family helps each other and supports each other. The top sects described in the article are really shocking. The protagonist grows up step by step. It is the first time I read this kind of fairy cultivating article on Tomato, which is not trivial at all. It is well received. What are you doing? [Shocked] Just cut off the female protagonist. Why are you so ambiguous in the back? I don't understand. If there is a female protagonist, there will be a female protagonist. If there is no female protagonist, don't make it fussy. Both sides are not happy. I heard that there will be a plot to give away a girl later, giving away a large amount of resources to a non-relative girl. I really beg you, don't do it. I finally have a good book [I'm about to cry]

It was so well written that I stayed up all night reading it. I personally hate skipping battles, but the author writes about the sect in such a grand and clear way that it makes me feel that if I don't skip a level, the price will drop! Anyway, it suits my taste very well. Come on, author! [Adoration][Love] Let's just write the protagonist honestly. We can't write the emotional line. We don't need to write the family line [vomit]

Divine book! It is truly a sacred book! The third young master of the Tang family was about to cry when he saw it, and Tian Can Tudou was amazed when he saw it! This is the reincarnation of the Four Great Classics, the leader of the literary world in the 21st century! "Holy Ruins"? I lost some of my literary talent in front of it! "Dou Po"? It lacks some connotation! "Zhu Xian"? In front of it, every trace of emotion faded! "Shading the Sky"? In front of it, I lost three points of imagination! "Buddha's Book"? Half of the layout is missing in front of it! This is a once-in-a-century classic of online literature! The greatest literary masterpiece of the 21st century! From Luo Guanzhong, Shi Naian, Wu Chengen, Cao Xueqin, to Kong Mo Laozhuang, Shixian Shisheng, Sansu Jiaxuan; from Qin Emperor Hanwu, Tang Zongzu Songzu, Genghis Khan, to Sakyamuni, Plato, Copernicus, Aristotle - who can read this book and not be amazed?! The author of this book is truly the work of a man of heaven! It has brilliant literary talent and exquisite diction. It inherits the style of the Wei and Jin Dynasties and promotes the charm of the Tang and Song Dynasties. It is profound! It is truly a blessing to read this book in my lifetime! However, after reading this book, a feeling of sadness suddenly emerged: If I never have the chance to see such a masterpiece again in the future, what's the point of my life? What's the point of my life?! Fortunately! I made a prompt decision and put it on my bookshelf! Only then can my restless heart find peace for a moment. But! If the pearls were covered in dust and the world could not see these masterpieces, wouldn't it be so! If the pearls were covered in dust and the world could not see these masterpieces, wouldn't it be a waste of resources and the author's efforts?! After a battle between heaven and man, I finally made up my mind: sacrifice the small self to fulfill the greater self! This book review is dedicated to the world for everyone to appreciate! This book must be read again and again, reaching the sky, and let the world know it! Walking between heaven and earth, the scorching sun and bright moon are the proof: Is this book refreshing enough? One is not enough! Across the rivers and lakes. On the rivers and lakes as evidence: Is this book enjoyable? One is not enough! Standing on the top of the fairy mountain, Qionglou Yuyu echoed: Is the update fast enough? Not enough! Not enough! Far from enough! Not enough chapters! Not enough speed! Not enough content! Not enough at all! [Come on] [Come on] [Come on] [Come on] [Come on]

The logic in the early stage is quite good. There are mortals cultivating immortals and the family's prosperity and unity. I hope that the gradual upgrading of realms, land reclamation and surrounding environment in the early and middle stages will be well described. It will not be like the tomato family novels, which build a foundation and transform into a golden elixir in a few years - and a golden elixir will transform into a Yuan Ying in 10 years. The currency will not collapse. I hope the author will slowly write it according to the development logic of the mortal family flow.

Excellent works are not as good as the quality of this platform. If the author writes well, gets some promotions, and crowdfunds a few good names when testing multiple titles, the results will not be bad. Currently there are only 186 and 187 chapters to count poison points (the sect assigned characters to a group of newcomers in the foundation building stage and qi training stage to destroy a pill-forming sect. The funny thing is that there are obviously many sect elders watching but there are still many casualties. The original words are "Wherever the halo passed, the nearly a thousand Qi Refining disciples in the valley who had no time to leave were like dust that had been wiped away, instantly vaporizing, leaving not even ashes behind. Among the foundation-building monks, the hundreds of foundation-building monks at the front were like paper. They fell without even letting out a scream. A large number of foundation-building monks further away were injured by the shock. They were seriously injured and vomited blood and flew backwards. ") To be honest, this trial was originally very nonsense (in fact, the previous trial was also very nonsense, which was to let a group of Qi-training people use the equipment and formations given by the sect to trap and kill the pill-forming monsters), and arrange such a life-and-death plot. What does it mean? I know the author wants to write something about "cultivation" It feels like you are in a life-or-death situation in the fairy world, and I write something like "the sect has two major exams, which correspond to the sect's two attitudes, one is to protect with all its strength, and the other is to fend for itself." However, the author's plot arrangement and writing skills are not enough, and the trial is written as a cultivation of gu, which is a bit funny to be honest.

I am an old bookworm. I have been reading novels for more than 10 years. I haven't read traditional fairy tales for a long time. But I opened this one accidentally because there were really no good books to read. As a result, Goodfellas' score of 7.3 Is more interesting than most books above 9.0. The protagonist is flesh and blood, not a virgin but not indiscriminately killing. The setting is also reasonable. The sect is really not bad, but the sect is not bad. The setting of the sect is so comfortable that you don't feel like it just revolves around the protagonist. It is really a sect. Whatever you want, you can fight for it yourself. There are no characters deliberately used to slap people in the face. Invisible pretense is also very interesting. Moreover, the supporting characters all have unique personalities, not all of them are the same character. The protagonist really gets stronger step by step, which is very experiential. Kudos to the author for writing well. Remember not to write a plot that slaps you in the face. If the supporting characters are more intelligent, we old bookworms will like it.

The author has currently written chapter 151. The initial plot of this book is still good. I give it an 8.8 Score. From the protagonist's 6th or 7th level of qi training and learning the Four-Yuan Sword, to the plot before joining the Yunzhou Sect, I give it a 6.5 Score. The main reason for the low score of this part of the content is that the plot and story are too streamlined. There are only two types of authors in Tomato. One is that you can only write at a flow level, or use AI to write templates. 95% Of Tomato's works are like this. The other is to be able to write relatively exciting plots. Those explosive articles are basically like this. Of course, for a work that has been read more than 100,000, or even 200,000 to 300,000 times online, even if there are many bad reviews, even if there are many poisonous points, these are not important. There is only one important thing: the plot and story must be wonderful. If there are many poisonous points, or the logic is poor, you can continue to learn and improve. This is not difficult. The difficult thing is how to write a good-looking and attractive novel. This is a talent, and not everyone can have it. I'll give this book 4 stars for now, mainly because I want to see how the plot turns out when the protagonist enters the sect. I may change the star later.

This rating is too low, far from enough. This book definitely has the potential to be rated above nine. From Xiaofang City to one of the world's pinnacle sects, the entire transition is very smooth. The various modifications to the world view are just right. They are not particularly exaggerated but can just fit the readers' fantasy of the world of immortality. Even at the starting point, it is among the best. I don't understand why the score is so low. Maybe the initial time is too long? I hope you have a little more patience. The longer you wait, the greater the surprise you will get when you meet. I believe 90% of people will be satisfied with the next map of Xiaofang City.

Slowly unfolding from the market, a grand world map slowly unfolds in front of us, and it shows us its shock and magnificence from the perspective of a relatively ordinary person. There is a strong sense of immersion, unlike traditional immortality novels, where the story seems to revolve around various sects.

Up to now, the biggest feeling I feel after reading this book is "comfortable". The protagonist, Lin Zhao, was a child of an ordinary small family in time travel. He started out making a living in the market, then hunted monsters in the wilderness and entered a sect. He made his way up step by step all by himself. There is no system, no opportunity that comes to my door inexplicably, and no emotional line. He only focuses on practicing and doing exercises. Watching him slowly become stronger is very immersive. The author is also very serious in writing the setting. The path of Fu Dao sword cultivation, as well as the self-created sword dragon, Guixu skills and subsequent magical powers, it can be seen that he has put a lot of thought into polishing it, and it is not just a random name. There is no industrial saccharine, and there is no brainless slap in the face. It is just a pure mortal cultivating immortality. It is slow but not procrastinating. It is not the kind of cool writing. It is worth watching. Looking forward to the follow-up pill formation and subsequent plots, the author will work hard to update [Blow kiss]

It's chapter 40 now. The plot is good, not mentally retarded, and has a realistic narrative.

Nice! The protagonist is a calm person on the outside and sane on the inside. Mainly depends on talent. The plot is not cliche and relatively stable. There are not too many slaps in the face or ambiguous descriptions. The relationship between the characters is also good, the parents are alive, the family is united, and close friends are made. The following part mainly describes the changes in the techniques, which is quite interesting! I am also very curious whether the protagonist will show the side of Tian. It's super hard to watch! The author has a lot in stock, I hope to see it soon. You must stop updating! I'm curious what the ending will be like.

This is a world controlled by the top cultivation forces, and it is also a relatively fully developed world, where the acquisition of mid-to-high-level resources and outstanding talents is almost entirely in the hands of large sects. The relatively complete development means that "wild" resources are very scarce, and it is almost impossible for casual cultivators to achieve high status by relying on wild adventures, killing monsters and obtaining treasures. The fights and plunders among the monks are governed by the explicit and hidden rules of the powerful forces. It is not feasible for a single guerrilla to kill people and seize treasures indiscriminately like a mortal. Knowing what to do, knowing how to advance and retreat, understanding the rules, and using the rules are the iron rules for monks to advance in this world. Otherwise, even if a peerless genius like Han Li comes, it will be difficult to move forward, because once you break the rules, the "seniors" will not care about bullying you and crushing you to death. This book is very special in the category of self-cultivation. The protagonist is very transcendent and talented. He is not only excellent in the general sense, but also improves himself by constantly understanding the rules and using them. After all, this kind of cultivation world has something in common with the real world. Human beings who evolved from jungle monkeys have completely conquered the wilderness. Game between people is the mainstream of the world. Although natural science determines the upper limit of the whole, sociology determines the growth of individuals in society. This is a very high intention, how high is it? I think it's as high as 9.5 [Laughs]

The writing is quite good, it looks good, it's not bad, but it's just not enough to read. I'm looking forward to the third update of the beast!

The rating is a bit low. This novel currently has at least a 9.5 Rating. There is no pretentiousness or slap in the face, no childishness and low business ethics, the logical reasoning is online, the whole book has a reasonable rhythm, and it is highly recommended.

It's really good, and the logic is very rigorous. It just comforts me when I can't stand reading Xiaobai's articles these days. Although in my opinion it lacks a cool setting, the author's writing style more than makes up for it, making it worth a read. It's really good to read. I hope Tomato can give this kind of author more traffic, otherwise it would be really bad if the book is discontinued.

I have initially read Chapter 111. This book is quite enjoyable. The only thing that the author needs to pay attention to is that there are some problems with punctuation. Maybe he didn't pay attention to it when writing the article for the first time. Since a sentence is divided into lines, it just ends with a full stop. Nowadays, novels basically have two or three lines and one sentence. There are about 5-6 lines in your sentence, separated by commas and a new line, which makes it look weird. The same goes for character dialogues. Just use "" to separate them at the end of a sentence. Don't say "xxxxxx." Xxxxxxx" was a bit of a show. —— The plot, combat, characterization, and game play in this book are all very detailed. After all, it is a novel and we cannot compare how realistic it is. The main thing when reading a novel is to have a sense of immersion, and to have a sense of immersion, there must be some details that are in line with the logic of reality. This book starts with the details of making talismans at the beginning, and then gradually unfolds the thrill of the Qi Lian family's caution but wisdom, and later the thrill of the Qi Lian family's formation of dozens of people to hunt down the foundation-building monsters. It is simply shocking. Then I saw Chapter 111 here, where the protagonist created his own kendo and combined it with Wufu Dao. It was amazing. —— I really read this book to Chapter 111, from the details of the steps and breakthroughs expressed in the talismans; the secret competition between the foundation building forces; the caution and preparation of the protagonist's family when seeking to build the foundation for decades, and the courage to make a desperate move under the perfect preparation plan of united wisdom, which seems to tell the story that opportunities are always reserved for those who are prepared; including the protagonist's early stage of reaching the sixth level of Qi training and the hunt for large sect figures with the demon hunting team, and after the family helped the patriarch hunt the monsters, the portrayal of human nature is very good. —— Except for what I said about the author's handling of the layout of the text, which sometimes affects the completion of reading, this book is definitely a thoughtful and logical masterpiece. Of course, it is still the same sentence. After all, novels cannot require too much real-world feelings. Novels more require the author to portray a relatively real world so that its logic can be more harmonious and detailed. This book does a good job. A highly recommended book, the current score of 7.9 Is definitely low. Going on to see nearly 300 chapters, the Huashen Sect's overall pattern of cultivating disciples, starting from the eclectic methods at the beginning, training tens of thousands of Qi-training monks every ten years, and building thousands of foundations in one round, includes both internal competition and external joint efforts to kill the golden elixir in the early stages. The mission perfectly reflects the structure of the God Transformation Sect, and is also interspersed with the collision of some higher-level concepts of the sect, especially the collision of high-level rules between protecting mortals and the jungle during the exam, as well as the protagonist's own path, which is also an extension of the future. Although the author says this is his first time writing a book, it really fits what I want to write. —— Nowadays, many books are based on the matryoshka model of killing monsters and upgrading, but this book has many highlights and details that have been mentioned before. For example, the sect's own secret realm of Tiangang and Earthly Evil seems to have gathered the mighty power of the world of immortality, combined with realistic industrial thinking, to cultivate low-level resources in batches, which truly demonstrates the productivity of the world of immortality. This is very good, including mortals cultivating immortals. Many cultivators are grabbing this resource and grabbing that resource every day. There has never been the so-called theory of sustainable development. The sect in Yunzhou, the protagonist of this book, has this mindset. Of course, the author also shows other development paths in other states, which is very good. —— I saw some comments scolding people for returning home to be nannies. To be honest, I really doubt that these are just trolls or those who have read too many mindless novels. Being a nanny can be regarded as a better mutual benefit after being trained by the sect and returning to the family area after graduation. Although the elders of the Lin family such as Lin Tianhe are not good at it due to their natural talents, they are clever, tactful and scheming. When the protagonist thinks that the family's rapid development has made him faint, he discovers that the family has "backhand" pitfalls, which fully demonstrates the family's wisdom and resilience, and also illustrates the various nastiness within the family. And the villains outside are not completely brainless, but after some mistakes in vision, the information has been hit by dimensionality reduction, and there are also games such as the tide of monsters. Therefore, after returning to the family, elements such as the fight between the three major sects of the Yunxia Mountains for the golden elixir, the fight between the seventeen big families in the Demon Hunting Team, the detachment in Tianyuanfang City, etc. Should not be portrayed too well. —— In general, as of the latest chapter, the protagonist has already formed a pill and is traveling abroad. At present, the author's exploration of the realm has been arranged to the Nascent Soul Transformation. The writing is very good. I just hope to increase my strength as soon as possible and don't stay too much in the Golden Core, because the current novel is basically invincible in the same realm. Long-term cross-level battles will make readers feel tired and easily collapse the realm. I think the principles and logic of transcending battles arranged in this book are very well explained. At least it is not as empty as the descriptions in other novels. The author will tell you that you can transcend the level because you have begun to understand the Dharma Body and the rules. That is the realm of Nascent Soul and God Transformation. I have explored some of them in advance in Jindan. Of course, I can reach the same realm and even transcend the level. These arrangements are very logical and self-consistent, so I feel that it will not be too empty, nor will I feel overwhelmingly tired too quickly. However, I still think that Yuanying or even God Transformation should be done as soon as possible. After all, I read that the author said that there are more than a dozen realms, and there are many maps in the back. It has taken many chapters to build a solid foundation. Now the Jindan realm is basically invincible in the early stage of Jindan. If you continue to describe the accumulation of energy levels here, I estimate that the realm will easily collapse after a hundred chapters. —— Generally speaking, I will not update my evaluation in the future. The author's writing style of this book is good, the writing is smooth, and the reading experience is very comfortable. The author is also experienced, and the fundamental description of human nature and even the world of immortality is very flavorful. It may satisfy many of my personal desires of writing a book. In addition, the author still has many details on the journey of cultivating immortals, including the description of the realm of skills. He also describes the junior high and late stages of a realm mainly as the accumulation of energy, and then describes the rules and even future laws as more important artistic power, just like Swallowing the Starry Sky. Although it is not the same type of book, the meaning is similar, that is, energy accumulation is one piece, realm understanding is one piece, I am high and low is more about understanding the use of energy in a higher realm. It is not the case that many books with a large world view only describe the surface content in an empty manner. They only have a large framework without a skeleton and cannot support a huge world view. —— Finally, I still hope to have a heroine or Taoist companion. She can be one of the anchor points of human nature. The harmony of yin and yang is the great road. If the author is afraid of writing a romantic drama, it would be better to embellish it. It would be good to deepen the character of Su Qianxue. From an accidental casual acquaintance, the two have gradually become familiar with each other. Looking at the helplessness of the Yuanying old devil, this character will also have the opportunity to have a Yuanying in the future. If the two of them experience some more profound events in the future, their emotions will be sublimated. When the Yuanying's lifespan is very long, they can consider becoming Taoist companions. Thinking about it now, I think the author is pretty good at writing. There may be some people who don't want CP, so the current arrangements are just a taste. But there are also people who want CP. The current description leaves a lot of foreshadowing for what will follow, which is pretty good.

It's very well written. Don't be misled by the bad review above about the heroine. This book is definitely in the first echelon among traditional fantasy and immortal writings. Some people are stunned when they read the book. They scream whenever a woman is around. Don't pay attention.

Shu Shun spoke slowly and calmly. No poison to behold. The emotions between the characters are delicate. However, there are some confusions and conspiracies to the outside world, which are not handled properly. I hope the author will work harder and reach a higher level. Multi-character dialogue voice misalignment. Narrators and dialogue characters have abnormal voices. After changing the map, it was extremely exciting. The author also tried his best to describe the style and structure of the large sects. Sharp!

The latest version has more than 300 chapters. There are no poisonous points, the logic is smooth, and the writing is good. There have been some logical loopholes in the last dozen or so chapters, and after three hundred chapters it has become very weak. A few sentences or dozens of words can be repeated four times in three chapters. After reviewing it, I have abandoned the book and it is not worth reading.

It's okay, there are no forced conflicts to advance the plot, it's all told in a eloquent way.

Not bad, not bad. This writing style is pretty good. I found so many new writings at the starting point that I can't wait to dig out one with three bedrooms and one living room. It's written by a newbie. It's really not easy to find some immortality books that can be read normally. To be honest, there is still room for improvement, like what? For example, if you have so many friends of the protagonist around you, and then you let them all die one by one, what's so interesting about that? What we want to see is the people around the protagonist group. When you grow up, you can even feed back. It's interesting that the protagonists' talents exchange resources. Isn't this what you read when writing family stories? Otherwise, what is the difference between those wailing, murdering and setting fire, or the lone ranger who is chained to the elixir for promotion, walking alone at the so-called peak?

Hey, I fell into the trap too early. I knew I had to wait more than a thousand chapters before reading it [I'm almost crying] [I'm almost crying] [I'm almost crying] It's even more uncomfortable to chase. Is there any book recommendation of the same type? [I'm almost crying][I'm almost crying]

Although the early stage is a little dull, the middle stage and the later stage are very exciting, especially the concept of the Holy Sect and the difficulties and obstacles in the cultivation process are very well written, as well as some other world views and so on. It will be very good.

It's good-looking, there are no obvious logical loopholes, and the world view is great. I also like the character of the protagonist, who is rational but compassionate, high-minded yet down-to-earth, and the author has good writing skills, and sometimes has a light sense of humor, such as the expired elixir of death.

A very good-looking novel. I like it very much. Come on, come on [laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration]

It's much better than some of the 8 or above immortality novels on the platform. The protagonist is not a reckless man, he is ambitious, has goals, and has the ability to act. There is no ambiguous emotional drama that makes people feel uncomfortable. The supporting characters in the article are not villains with facial makeup. For the time being, it doesn't feel like an NPC to me. He is thoughtful and emotional, and there is nothing poisonous about it.

After reading four chapters, I couldn't help but comment. I haven't read much, and aside from the plot and writing, the author is very good at character creation. I can feel that the writing is very smooth, and a few words of dialogue can describe the prototype of the character. It is also a book that can be listed on the list. I will finish it all night tonight and then review it. The author is not suitable for writing big scenes. The expectations at the beginning were gone after the protagonist encountered dampness at the eighth level of Qi training. He is a good character builder, but other aspects are unremarkable. I felt like reading a short article. It is a common problem with tomatoes, and I even suspected that the author had been replaced. However, after joining the Overlord Sect, I felt that my writing was getting better and better, which was outrageous. Come on author. The daily life of parties written by the author is very interesting.

I think this book is very well written [laughs awkwardly] Why is it not rated high? In the early stage, the family cultivated immortality, and after sending it to the sect with the incense and affection left by the family, the sect cultivated immortality. What is the foundation of a top sect? Why are these geniuses better than the wild monks outside? The setting is also very reasonable and feels good.