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The plot is pretty good, and it feels like it has a framework. The protagonist also regards the people in this world who are worthy of sincere treatment as close people. When I see Yun Qingqing being treated as a test subject, I feel that there will be a bigger situation in the future.

A very good book, worth reading! ! It tied it all at once. The author's writing style is great, and the flashback writing style is very fairy-like. The character of the protagonist really poked me. Most of the time, he is quite calm and rational, except when encountering "mission" points and accidents with people he cherishes. He has a system but does not rely on it (Bi) (The system is often on standby), he will practice hard, and the protagonist Gong will unconsciously show his concern for Shou when he meets Shou, but his scenes with the two are still a bit less, and the emotional line is still between senior brothers and ambiguity. I wish there were more, I want to 🍬🍬 The other characters are also written very well, and the characters are basically established. However, when I watched the meeting, there were too many descriptions from the younger brother's perspective. Although it was to introduce other characters, his main perspective scenes in those chapters were a bit more than the protagonist, and there was no growth scene for the younger brother. The burden of the massacre of the family felt like it was all on the protagonist. Sometimes he was too impulsive. The younger brother should have grown up in the future. It's tied all of a sudden. I really want to see the follow-up. Can the author surprise me with a sudden update? I really want to know how the protagonist changed from calm and rational in the early stage to "madness" in the later stage, the truth about the massacre and the bloodline issue, the emotional line and growth between the protagonist's attack and suffering, and what the protagonist Yun Qingqing was before he traveled through the book? The book does not seem to describe the experience before traveling through the book. The codename "Qingluan" for the mission should be related to bloodline. I really want to see the follow-up. I am itching to see the follow-up. Big cheers for the author! I'm really looking forward to the follow-up plot development (*σ´∀`)σ

This book is great, highly recommended! ! ! If you don't like this book, don't give it a low score. After all, everyone's enjoyment is different! The protagonist of this book, Yun Qingqing, has a distressing "sense of sobriety in the world." He has a system, but he doesn't have the satisfaction of Long Aotian. There is no traditional leveling up to defeat monsters. This book feels like a web full of calculations and warmth. Especially like a group portrait novel, I feel that none of the characters in the book are tool people! But the protagonist is indeed the group favorite. The plot is full of tension and the characters are flesh and blood. It also has a bit of humor, which makes people's eyes brighter and brighter. Support the author greatly, come on! ! !

This novel is well written, but I don't know why the rating is so low. This time-travel novel is not like other time-travel novels, and it always feels like one person is living the life of another person. "Yun Qingqing" is really living up to Yun Qingqing. Although this article may be longer, it is indeed a novel worth waiting for. I just regret that I have now discovered that I can't read it all at once. The death of the master in battle is considered a climax of the whole novel. I couldn't help but burst into tears when I read the novel all night long (I felt sorry for the protagonist). I hope the author will work hard and not give up because of a temporary low point. Good works are worth fermenting and waiting for, so write the article quickly and hand in all the manuscripts. If the update is too slow, you will lose such a lovely fan like me [Send heart]

It's really beautiful! The feelings are really, really delicate. The more I read the back part, the more I felt sorry for the young couple [I almost cried]. I couldn't help but want to cry when I saw the warm daily scenes depicting daily life in the back. It was so well written! This book is the first one I read when I reopened Yang Persimmon, and it pulled me back into the novel circle without any warning (I had quit before). I really like this kind of long-lasting emotion! The characterization is particularly good! Recommended! I just didn't expect it wasn't over yet, I was saving up.

The description is super delicate, the writing is great, and it is a rare piece of fine grain [sending my heart] that develops the plot around Qing Wei, a serious drama, but a group portrait. Although the memory chapter has been entered very early and has not yet been written, the setting is huge, there are many characters, and the plot is very smooth and reasonable. Just like this, watching the baby Qing Wei fall and fall [face covering], the miserable baby always encounters various disasters. But everyone in the sect is very nice, and the interaction with Senior Brother Jiang is also very loving. For a while, the two of them interacted with each other as if they were a couple [shy] I felt very distressed (°᷄д°᷅) but also super emotional. I felt like I was watching Qingqi gradually transform into the beautiful, strong and miserable person in the introduction. The fighting power has not collapsed, and the supporting characters are all strong and intelligent. The writing style is very spiritual, and the plot has a sense of touch. It is very attractive and can capture the hearts of readers. I am really curious about the subsequent plot development and villain characters. The update speed is amazing. It's so amazing. How can you do it? [Shocked] Come on, I will write it according to your pace. I feel it can become a very good long story about cultivating immortals. I look forward to it [Sending my heart]

This is a book worth recommending. Although it is not finished yet, it makes people unable to stop reading it (it took me an early morning to catch up on the latest chapter, which I can only say is worth it). The application of techniques and language is very accurate, which is very consistent with the novels about cultivating immortals. I guarantee that the correct use of words in this novel exceeds 75% of BL novels about cultivating immortals. It will be worth collecting. The character description is also very good. Each character has its own characteristics. I really like the protagonist. Especially some plots, such as being chased by a man in black robe and running in the opposite direction, really touched me, and many more. The conversations between the characters are also very coherent and not stiff, and the conversations between peers are very lively and beautiful. The plot is very, very, very colorful and interlocking. The mysterious black-robed man, the pavilion master, and the sect leader who just appeared (I have a hard time remembering the name) really attracted me, and I really want to know the follow-up content. I suggest the author to make it more complete and it will kill me [I'm full]

It's very good to watch and I like it, but the memories are a bit long and a bit sharp. Ji Xian, your brother, your senior brother is a very strong, very gentle, and loves you very much. He will not do anything that is not allowed by nature. If you don't see him, he will be so anxious that he will go crazy just to save you. He is really, really, really good and good.

It's so beautiful. I'm so [almost crying]. This is a good sect in the world of immortality. It makes me feel warm when I look at my body [crying]

There are a lot of sad points, the writing is very delicate and beautiful, the image of the young fish and the image of Qingqi are particularly good, there are a lot of foreshadowings, the emotional line is okay, just a little sweeter! Sweeter! Sweeter! Say important things three times, baby Qingyi is suffering too much

The plot is quite good, and each character is fleshed out and quite full. Yun Qingchan's actions despite knowing that he couldn't do anything, and Jiang Juyu's silent protection and support are both touching. There is no over-exaggeration of the protagonist's emotions and appearance. The protagonist's emotional line is clear and clear, flowing slowly and slowly warming up. The details are described very well. There has been a shortage of books recently. I hope the author will update it soon [laughing][laughing]

I really like Help. This is the one that fits my feelings the most since I have read so many novels. Whether it is the pain and despair of Qing Wei's life, or the persistence and reshaping after sobriety, it all gives me a real and appropriate feeling. I can immersively feel the author's emotions, the warmth and warmth of human relationships in the book, and the relationship between the protagonists. The complex, real, rich and full emotions such as interdependence and redemption make me have the illusion of wanting to see their future lives. This kind of cruelty brought by the world is what I like, and the faint but warm emotions between Qingqiang and Juyu really poked me. I hope the author will update it in a clean and tidy way. Come on, come on, look forward to it👀

The contrast between the protagonist and his younger brother is too tragic. The protagonist lives in such a miserable state, either injured or on the road to injury. But my younger brother is like a fool. He has been pampered since childhood [what][what][what][what][what] Okay, I spoke too early. The growth of my younger brother later is also quite heartbreaking. I hope everything will have a happy ending [Sending Hearts]

Really nice to look at. I don't know why the rating is so low, but this book gave me a different feeling, not like the popular Tomato novels. The writing style is very delicate, the picture is strong, the plot is coherent, and I have rarely seen this kind of writing method. He opens the story line of the whole book in the way of memories, but the first line is quite long, about 248 chapters. The changes in Xiao Yu'er's character are not blunt at all, and every change is emotional. It's understandable, from being cautious and running around with his younger brother to being strong and brave, to being flamboyant and wanton, to being careless and careless with a big change in temperament, and finally to the happiness after marriage [crying] Every protagonist is very distinct, just like they really existed. I can only say that wherever they have walked, their footprints can prove it [crying] Xiao Yun Yisheng is also very miserable, but he has a senior brother who loves him, an uncle who trusts him unconditionally, a master who cares about him, a younger brother who is tough-talking and soft-hearted, and classmates who are caring and protective. All I can say is that I burst into tears. The emotional line is very good whether it is family, friendship or love. Is it true that the score is so low? I don't know. Why, I always thought that Xiao would be a villain, but at the wedding, I wished the young couple a happy wedding [crying] The protagonist's journey did not rely on the golden hand mechanism, and the protagonist does not have golden fingers, but relied on the efforts of many people [crying] I can only say that it is very beautiful, forgive my lack of vocabulary. The only thing I have to say is to be careful. Once the author starts writing delicate and sweet things, something big will definitely happen later.

Great work on the update! The writing is very good and smooth. Gong followed Shou quietly to protect him and did not stop him. I really appreciate this.

It's really super pretty! I have read it on Tomato for more than three years, and I think this is the best book to read. I usually follow up on it and then start other new articles after a week or two. This book is what I have been following. The feelings are really super delicate! The plot and story line are also very smooth. The inner thoughts of the young fish are really well written. I personally think it is the best one in the seven years I have read the book, in which a person with a relatively cold personality gradually fell in love with it. Can the author update five times a day? վ‸վHappy New Year, do you have any plans to publish a physical book (✪▽✪)? Whether it is personally signed or specially signed, I am very willing to buy it. I will buy a bookshelf to put on it. It's fine without deleting it. ヘ(_ _ヘ) I haven't written a book review this year, so this book is really super good\(//∇//)\I'm going to take the final exam tomorrow, and I'm still reading it tonight. I feel like if there are hundreds of chapters left, I can keep reading without having to review them. I believe that when I get back from the exam, I'll see another dozen chapters, right?

It's good to watch [Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss] This is my first time watching this type of movie. I don't know if I can finish it (after all, I am a three-minute hot person [shy]). From the current point of view, it should be the main plot. I like the character of the protagonist very much, and the plot setting is also very interesting. After Yun Qingqian came through, she treated her family and friends with real affection, and then the plot became more sour, which I quite liked. Now that I have read the memoirs, I personally don't like to read this kind of memories (such as flashback articles), but this is the first time I read it, and then I felt that a lot of foreshadowing has been laid. The plot is compact and logical. Generally speaking, it is really well written. The author's writing style is also amazing [send heart] fried chicken and look forward to the following content [adoration][adoration][adoration] I'll forget it if I die with a knife [cry][cry][cry][cry]

I have been crying. It is now 4:52 in the morning. I stayed up all night. It is very beautiful, but his life is so painful. It is so painful that I can't stop crying. There is no forced torture, but the development direction of the plot. That's right, very sad. His life is too miserable, and my life is too miserable. I cried like a dog after reading this novel. Woohoo, why does it have to be so beautiful? I kept watching it even if I cried.

A novel with two male protagonists is really the rare chaff in a tomato! It's really good-looking, with both plot and emotional lines very full. The two lines are intertwined with each other. You have to use your brain a little bit when watching it, because the foreshadowing and other things are very shocking. It's a great pure love story, New Year's Eve, Cultivation to Immortality

The description is really delicate. The plot line of this book is greater than the emotional line, but the feeling between the two of them that starts from emotion and stops at reason really pokes me. Qingjie's psychological description is really delicate, from the powerlessness in childhood, to the gentleness and forbearance in childhood, and then to being forced to play a "madman" in the future. As a child, he never stops Qingyi's behavior. When he is misunderstood by everyone, he always believes in him and supports him. It is almost over. I really can't let it go.

Ahhhhh, I finally found a novel that suits my taste. I will update it soon. Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

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It's so beautiful, the writing is superb, and the plot is very smooth.

Come on, author, this is a very good book. Although the plot made me stabbed and snotted while reading it, it was really good! Hope it ends successfully! [KISS][Love]

It's still very good to watch. I could watch it for one night without stopping. The plot is coherent and the writing is good. The level of torture is also quite reasonable. I don't think other reviews have the feeling of torture for the sake of torture. It deserves a higher rating.

A very nice novel ~ I like it so much

Really, really, really highly recommended! ! ! Do not cheat China into entering! ! ! Really pretty! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

It's really beautiful! It's totally top of my mind, woo woo woo, it's sharp, sweet and beautiful.

I haven't read such a long article on Tomato for a long time. Although the memory chapter is a bit long, I didn't feel like I couldn't bear to read it. I actually shed tears at the end while reading it. Qingqi was so bitter. The author must give him a sweet ending [crying]