Red Mansion: Beat Qin Keqing at the Beginning

Yes, this book may be more in the starting point style, especially the portrayal of the female characters is very good. Some places can be directly criticized, and they cry when they are together, some are wearing hemp and wearing mourning, some are looking at the portrait of Jia Zhen, one is on a horse, one is painted on the face, one is with a rope, and the feet are not touching the ground. In short, I have not seen repeated characters so far, and the plot logic is also very powerful. I mentioned it casually somewhere before One sentence, it may be of great use later, and the update is also very powerful. It is obvious that the author has read Red Mansions. Many of the words are in the style of the original Red Mansions, and the character dialogues are also interesting. Unlike novices, some Red Mansions may look great at the beginning, but basically fall apart in the back. Either the combat power or the characters are bouncing. This book is very stable at the moment. I hope it can be longer.

Thanks everyone for reading the comments! Bow! In addition, I really did research on the information, and I know some basic historical common sense. I have watched the original novel and TV series many times [face covering] I have written three books on Red Mansions at other stations. I will definitely change everyone's opinions if I can. To put it simply, the author is weak, so don't be so vigorous [face covering] There are free gifts to feed the children, thank you.

The male protagonist has a decisive character and is not too supervising. The driving speed is fast and the plot is exciting and immersive. The character portrayal is not like other fans who flatten out as soon as there are more people in the Red Mansion. The more I watch it, the more energetic I am. At one o'clock and five o'clock, it is super good-looking without a doubt.

It seems pretty good so far. The only pity is that the protagonist's body is not equipped with any physical strength, which is basically zero. I didn't want to read Chapter 55 because the routine was too old and it was impossible for Jia Rong to start slowly. It's not that the Jia family has no enemies. The Jia family's power is in the military. The author arranged for the protagonist to start from Jin Yiwei. Obviously the emperor is naturally close to him and thinks highly of him. However, the protagonist has always thought that the emperor will be liquidated after his death in a few years. He always wants to lean towards the emperor, but the emperor does not accept him, so the protagonist has been tangled here and there. There is basically no garden scene, and there are two concubines, Qin Keqing and Jia Zhen, who come back and forth. Finally, Qingwen comes, but the male god doesn't want her anymore, and she gives up and lets the protagonist sleep with her. The writing about "Outside the Garden" didn't make me feel happy at all, and the drama about "The Garden" didn't make me feel uncomfortable watching it.

Very good, the protagonist relies on intelligence and analysis to make a fortune, and finally does not rely on glass sugar and salt. The war scenes are also very reasonable. The people in the protagonist group die when they want to die. There is no sudden explosion and a happy ending. Real war should be so cruel.

I have to say it's excellent. The memorial service is great, the memorial service will be held. [Laughing evilly] It's worth reading before Chapter 46, but there are a lot of poisonous points later on. I can't stand it anymore.

Among the Red Mansions novels I have read, it is definitely considered to be a high-quality one. The plot is smooth and the protagonist is well-established. I have basically picked up all of Twelve Hairpins so far, and the story is done logically and rhythmically, and the speed is fast. Overall, it is a high-quality work.

It's a very good book. I couldn't read the original Dream of Red Mansions, but here I can recognize some characters and some calligraphy. The author's grasp of the text is exquisite, and the male protagonist is very efficient in promoting people. What is different is that the main theme here is to commemorate the ancestors, which is difficult to see elsewhere.

Although the political ecology in Red Mansion cannot be said to be stable, it is not as sinister as the author describes, right? Princes and ministers are being killed one after another. How can the emperor still hold his position securely? Even emperors with the highest prestige like Zhu Yuanzhang and Li Shimin couldn't do it. The emperor didn't just kill anyone he wanted to kill.

Yes, it is humorous, especially the things in the garden, and the intention is good. For characters who are not girls, generally speaking, how to accept the characters, you have to take the right medicine. The intention is good, although there are a few things that are not well written. The struggle for power and war seem to be slightly inferior at present, mainly because the characters provided by Dream of Red Mansions have very full personality characteristics, while most of them in the court have a bit of a passerby feel. But the point of this book is actually to make up for the regrets in Red Mansions. Otherwise, why would I write about a fan of Red Mansions? In this regard, this book does a good job.

Well written, sexy but not obscene logic. I like it online.

Chapter 148 is well written, but I wish the female character's transformation before and after could be written in more detail and smoothly, so that the look and feel would be better. Later on, the protagonist should become the king on his own, but the corresponding male protagonist will spend more time on his career. It is better to go behind the scenes so that he can have more time to take care of his sisters [Thinking]

The artistic level of the author's writing is very high, and he has created a new method of writing imperial letters that has never been seen before. 🐮Bye. You can just watch the front, the wonderful things are in the back, the memoirs [Like][Like][Like][Laugh][Laugh]

The writing style of Drag Racing Legend is a little bit good, including Lao Deng. It seems that it has basically included all the characters. It is not a big part, and the characters are still good.

It's so cool, rush forward, the regretful author of Dream of Red Mansions comes to make up for it [sneaky laugh][sneaky laugh]

It's really good [laughing evilly] Xue Baochai, the first investment in Tomato that failed, even Aunt Xue didn't let go [laughing evilly]

I think this is a really awesome book. In terms of people's hearts, it can be said to be reversal and reversal, and the thinking logic is far from being comparable to other Dream of Red Mansions fan fiction. It can be said to be a defeat, and there are no cheats to defeat it. In fact, the shortcoming is that there are too many Yuanzi dramas.

This book is a pity. It was written very well before. But maybe the data is not ideal? Or maybe it just came out with low ratings. The author feels a bit broken right now. This book is very good, actually.

Come on, duck, write about the emperor's uncle's big brother That's awesome🍺. Mrs. Wang even got it [laughing evilly] The 40 old a8 set by the author, I think it's okay

The logic is orderly, the writing is fluent, the car drives well, I look forward to it [laughing] [like]

The level is too high, it's a good book, and it's also very funny, especially when persecuting Yingchun [laughing]

This article is well written. The author's writing style is really good and the writing is very reasonable. Listening to books is so popular nowadays. Every time I listen to it, I always have to go back and see what it means. It's not that I don't understand the code words, it's that there are many relationships and why I do this. I hope the characters' psychological thoughts can be explained in more detail.

This book is wonderful, wonderful [admiration]! The taste can only be understood but cannot be expressed in words. Although the first few chapters are a bit dull, the second chapter takes off straight away🛫️, and the writing is also just right [laughing].

This is really the best Red Mansion I have ever read. The small flaw is that the beginning is a little unreasonable. As long as you don't follow the TV series and make up a few actual 30-year-old women into 40 or 50-year-old women, they will be immortals. This is understandable. After all, most of the 12 hairpins are too small, and it is easy to lose the writing.

The low scores are intentional. This book is beautiful, trust me.

The writing is good and the details are good. The Red Mansion is well written.

A good fan novel about Dream of Red Mansions, with clear logic and in line with the original characters. Great support to the author. Five-star praise.

Alas, I can only say that the writing is very unique, that is, every character is not much different from the original work, making people feel that they are living people, not paper characters [laughs]

The author's writing is good, the plot is not brainless, and he understands all the hidden dangers and terms. Let me ask the author what his name is and go read it.

The author's writing is very good, why is the score so low?