Gentle Senior Brother Must Be Possessive

I have read the entire article. It is indeed a sweet article. It can be seen that the author has only just written the article. The full text is simple, direct, and easy to understand. The relationship between the male and female protagonists is a long-lasting relationship, but when I saw the male and female protagonists traveling together later, I felt that a lot of it was the male protagonist who solved the problems and the female protagonist worshiped her. It was a conventional love model in which the male is stronger. After watching too much, it felt too bland and boring! Moreover, when the heroine and the male lead first experienced together and later worked together to explore the secret realm, they felt that the character and description of the male lead were more attractive. At that time, I also lamented that it was a shame that my senior brother was the male lead. If the second male lead was the male lead, it would be a different story. Of course, this is just my personal opinion. Maybe many people like the male protagonist who is so meticulous! Finally, the author is really amazing at being able to write so many words and construct a complete novel system, so I still gave it a pretty good review. I hope the author will continue to work hard in the next article and write more and more brilliantly!

Advantages: Generally speaking, this novel is really well written, the characters of the male and female protagonists are also quite good, and the supporting characters in it also have their own characteristics. The emotional lines between the male and female protagonists are also well written, and the other characters in the sect are also very distinct, without any kind of exclusion/female competition. Disadvantages: From Chapter 101 to Chapter 107, I personally feel that there may be some problems with the characters of the two protagonists. The female protagonist has also experienced so many things, but in these chapters, she cannot distinguish human nature. The male protagonist clearly sees what is going on here, and does not explain it to the female protagonist, just watching the female protagonist in a daze. I think it might be better if these chapters are removed (?) Summary: However, chapters 108 and later have become normal, so this novel is still very interesting and has potential, and the rating is not very low. Okay, these are my thoughts, please give it a thumbs up, author! =⩌⩊⩌=

Looks good! The author's writing style is very good. I have rarely seen this kind of fairy tale setting. The cultivation in it is very interesting. The male and female protagonists experience and gain enlightenment. Their feelings are also natural and natural. It's rare that it doesn't feel like industrial saccharine. The tone of this book is very warm and daily, but the author describes some of the grand scenes of battles, experiences, and confrontations with thunder and calamity very well, and it is very visual. The setting of the story is clever. The male and female protagonists are very sweet. I am already tired from going to school. It is really comfortable to read some sweet stories to relieve my stress. I don't like to watch the misunderstandings of repeated torture, and I also don't like to watch various female and male partners competing with each other. The author's big name Yan Jueming should be regarded as the second male lead, but this male lead did not insist on stalking the female lead. He also sent blessings when he learned that the male and female protagonists became Taoist couples. In the end, he held a little boy. Was he his disciple? Anyway, it feels like Yan Jueming has looked away and is ready to pursue his own path. Therefore, the author's writing is very interesting to me, and it is finished, making it even better to follow. I'm looking forward to the author's next new book, and I'll keep following the series. Please support me! [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

This is a relatively unique book about cultivating immortals. There is no long treasure hunt in secret realms, nor intrigues among sect disciples. The whole article is full of warmth. The spirit rabbit clan, master, senior sister, deputy leader, elders, etc. Are all top-notch rabbits and people. Entering the world to practice, comprehend the great road, do good deeds and accumulate virtue, and ascend to godhood. Compared with the upgrading cultivation that focuses more on improving one's own strength, here it is more focused on understanding the suffering of all living beings. Whether it is ordinary people or little gods, it has its highlights.

The writing is very good, and the male protagonist is as gentle as jade, which is really my cup of tea! Since the heroine entered the world, both the hero and the friends around her have been super gentle and kind to the heroine. It feels like this fairy world is a perfect world, and it has always been gentle to the heroine. The male protagonist has been subconsciously conniving and doting on the female protagonist from the beginning, and he soon came to his senses after he understood his own feelings! If you like it, don't avoid it! Always guarding the heroine, super sweet. Help [crying] [crying] Can you all go and see it [Adoration] [Admiration] [Admiration]

It's super good-looking, the heroine is ignorant and naive, smart and cute, the hero looks gentle, but has a sense of distance towards others, everything changes when he meets the heroine, the magic of love, hehe [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][adoration][adoration][adoration]

I have read so many Tomato novels, and this is the first time I have seen such a heartwarming article. It looks good, there are no intrigues or vicious supporting characters, everyone is sincere and lively. Although there are not many conflicting points, it makes people want to continue reading. Sometimes I have read too many intrigues and intrigues, and it is so happy to read such a sweet novel! ! I hope the author writes a new book! !

I think the writing is very good, the content is delicate, it is very comfortable to read, and it feels moisturizing and silent. It looks much better than some that score over 9 points, but the fact that it only scores 7.0 Is too surprising. Fortunately, I was not misled by the rating. I read a few chapters and the more I read, the more I want to read it. Thank you to the author. I look forward to your next work [Sending my heart]

There are not too many ups and downs. It is indeed as the author said, very warm, and the relationship between the male and female protagonists is very simple. And you can see the heroine's step-by-step change from the initial ignorance. You can read it when you are short of books. It's quite comfortable, and there's not that much intrigue.

An ideal little sweet article! ! ! This is my first time writing a book review just to recommend this treasure! ! ! The rhythm is brisk, the plot is super healing, the emotional expression is delicate and not abrupt, and it has a light sense of high-end [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration]

The beginning of this book is quite exciting. It can be seen that the relationship between them is flowing slowly and slowly! The heroine is like an elf in the forest, melting the gentle mentality of the hero. They are complementary and can promote each other's progress! And the heroine is not weak. She has great benevolence and kindness, which means that the road ahead is destined to be extremely difficult and dangerous, but fortunately, they are with each other and tide over the difficulties together ૮₍◜ෆ◝.₎ა

I really like this article. I was watching a TV series and suddenly wanted to find a meal replacement article for my senior brother and sister. I accidentally found this article. It was written in a long and smooth way, without any abuse or knife. Bits and pieces of family, friendship and love emerged in the text. The love between Qingqing and the senior brother also came naturally. Senior brother eats it. It's so cute when I'm jealous, haha. It's true that the rose I raised will be taken care of for the rest of my life. I like it. I also like the rest of the supporting characters. There is no absolute villain in the article. This world of immortality is really about benefiting the people and adding merit. Thank you author for your hard work. I look forward to the next book~~

Brother, I love you so much! It was love at first sight, I don't know yet hahahahahahahahaha. In the end, I didn't understand my feelings until I got jealous. It was hard for people to avoid you when they first revealed their feelings. No wonder you are inseparable from them after you get together. It's a great year! New Year's Eve!

The story unfolds gently and compactly. From the heartbeat of the first encounter to the attachment of knowing each other, every step of the relationship between the male and female protagonists is firm and sweet, which is intoxicating. There are no scheming female characters or troublesome male characters in the story, only pure emotional lines. Anyway, it's worth watching [laughs awkwardly]

Write more, don't read enough [adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration]

It's really heartwarming and completely different from the crematorium stories I usually read. It's cruelty-free and sweet. Finally, I want to say: Ling Wenqing Wen Xingzhi 999999999 Everyone who sees this comment is happy Chang'an ༼ つ/̵͇̿̿/'̿'̿ ̿ ̿̿ ̿̿◕ _◕ ༽つ/̵͇̿̿/'̿'̿ ̿ ̿̿ ̿̿ ̿̿

It's beautiful [adoration][adoration][adoration], and the male and female protagonists are sweet.

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I must give this book a thumbs-up. Finally, someone understands our gentle people. Finally, someone cooks and eats for our gentle and jade-like people. I cry. I have also liked reading books by this author for so many years. This is the only author I like. I am looking forward to the next one! (A different feeling slowly arises in my heart) What a joy! Cool! I will warm it up again right now. It feels so good.

The sense of proportion is just right. The transition from restraint to loss of control is a bit overwhelming. Senior Brother Wen's desire for exclusivity was deep in his bones.

The story of pure love and love is so well written, and the senior brother's fall into decline is heart-warming to watch! ! !

It is a very gentle book. Overall, it is very peaceful. The senior brother is very gentle, but due to one of his life experiences, he seems a bit indifferent. But overall, the overall image of the senior brother is not full enough. The heroine baby is very cute, mainly because of her gentleness and kindness, and the baby who cares about the world.

It's very interesting and very to my liking. Zhou Zhou's writing is very consistent and the plot also fits the introduction very well. I hope the author's next book will be as good-looking. I'm looking forward to the author's next book. Come on.

A very novel book, warm and comfortable. It is more readable than those vigorous articles. There is no misunderstanding about the best green tea or anything, it is just a simple daily life. Everyone is good. The support and protection of the master and the sect are more in line with the concept of monasticism.

I really like the character of the heroine, she is cute and lively, and I also like her and Hudong, the corpse brother. The only thing I have some doubts about is that the heroine is tied with the male partner, but she has no words to cooperate with the male partner. The male partner is the main focus, and it is obvious that before the tie, the male partner deliberately feeds the female protagonist. It is said that the male partner can handle it with ease. The following tie feels like a deliberate concession, which is not very logical. But this is a very good little sweet article, the overall flow is smooth, there are no misunderstandings or conflicts, everyone is very good [laughing]

It's very interesting. The female protagonist is really innocent but not stupid, so it's understandable that the female protagonist is practicing quickly. The male protagonist also understands the new issue a little bit, and then chooses to protect it. It's very beautiful!

Very delicate writing, with a warm touch. I feel that the author must be a person filled with great love. After reading it, I feel like I am taking a breath of spring breeze, and every word is beautiful and calm. It's a very different kind of immortality writing, not the best or the most evil. I'm looking forward to its early publication. Can you do a parents' story and add a chapter about the two meeting and getting along with my sister, baby and son-in-law, and give Master and Sister Maomao Little Toad some more scenes [Love]

I've read Chapter 30 so far, and it's quite interesting, very good. However, there are still some areas that need improvement. The descriptions in some places are a bit childish, and similar expressions such as "exercise to the extreme" appear many times. If possible, it may be better to change the expression slightly. The author said that this is the first time he has written a book, and it is already very good as it is written like this. I also like Xingzhi and Qingqing very much!

The writing and style are very celestial, but there is a particularly typical plot where the heroine and the male partner have physical contact and emotional entanglement, and the male partner provokes the male protagonist to stimulate the male protagonist, which is very uncomfortable.

It's a good-looking, fairy-cultivating novel. The main content is the story of the female and male protagonists.