I Create a Mecha at the Beginning, and I Backhand the Super Beast Weapon

When you update, subtle flaws will be magnified, and the greenness of the writing will be criticized. When you update twice, a little patience is born, and the progress of the plot is paid more attention to. When you are on the third watch, the little praise starts to sound, and the number of dead harvests starts to decrease. When you update the fifth update, readers' support will spontaneously form, and the voices of praise will become louder and louder. When you are at the tenth watch, the Confucian debates are deafening, and the tolerant attitude is implemented both internally and externally. When you are twenty, you will have a place in the bookworm's memories. Even in your long life, your name will leave a dazzling trace. Updates may not solve all problems, but more than 90% of problems come from insufficient updates.

This Super Beast Arms fanfic is pretty good! The plot closely follows the essence of the original work, and the character creation is also very interesting. You can feel your full love for this IP~ Although some of the writing is a bit immature, it does not affect the reading experience at all. Instead, it reveals a sincere spirit. I hope you will polish it to be more brilliant in the future!

The writing is pretty good, keep it up 👍

Great, I found another copy of Super Beast Arms

Not bad. Average. It didn't use a lot of barrage words, and it didn't randomly modify the original plot. You can take a look

It would be nice if it was third person