The Man Is a Ghoul, and the Crimson King Awakens at the Beginning!

Not bad, I hope that when the protagonist reveals his vest in the future, others will think that he has a dual personality, imitating the setting of Diavolo in the original work, and replicating the boss's famous trial scene [laughing evilly]. I have read this book so far. Let me talk about the problems. There are many plots that do not stand up to scrutiny. They are a bit childish and submissive. The writing style is not very good, but it can be understood by a new author. The main reason is that there are no other articles with the same theme, so just read it to solve the problem. You can watch it, but only if you can watch it. It is not recommended to watch it with your brain. Overall, it's a C-.

I think the protagonist can get arrows. The existing avatars are very good, but for localization, I think some people from the original plot will be needed to become avatars. I remember that there are many people's self-created avatars on the Internet, which can be used as a reference, or the author can open a topic for us to publish. [Learned][Learned][Learned]

There are a few suggestions to take a look at. First of all, Yamen is very polite. He usually calls Mato Gouo the superior Mato. Moreover, Mato can be said to be crazy. If he saw the one-eyed owl, he would definitely do it directly instead of fear. Mato Wuxi died together with his wife at the moment of her death. What remains is the superior Mato who is wrapped in hatred.

It's okay, I just like acting and beating myself up

Come on, come on, the author is great. It seems to be very good so far, but the quantity is a bit small. I hope that the plot in the future can be conceived well and not collapse. Come on, come on, support me with five stars [please update]

The writing is okay. Please encourage the author.

I personally think it looks good [smile]

Super beautiful, the whole process is wonderful and non-toxic! By the way, I want to ask when Jo Taro will appear I don't recommend reading it with your brain. It's privately written. I don't mind if it's privately written. However, I personally like it very much. I hope the author can keep writing and don't care about the low ratings. Your purpose is to write to the readers who support you. Come on, keep at it.

Come on, author, it's very beautiful! ! ! !

Not bad, very nice behind-the-scenes footage.

I think it's pretty good. Some design points are not very good, except that the system needs favorability. I feel a little bad

The front is a little bit rough but the back is good

Not bad, no poison, no pressure on combat effectiveness, pure behind-the-scenes fun writing

Not bad, cheers for the author

Come on, it looks good.

I want to see Varudo smashed! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

The fighting force is a bit harsh

Super nice Haha

Isn't there a god who would benefit the world?

A very interesting novel

Looks good, but the content is a bit lacking

So is there a female protagonist [thinking], how many are there?

A very good book

After looking for so many Red King books, I finally found one I can eat.

They have all created an organization [laughing evilly] It's not too much to get an arrow to hit someone in the later stage, right?

It's okay, except that the kiss from Fang Cun Aite was a bit abstract, but everything else is okay.

The rating is low. It's really beautiful. Don't be fooled by the rating.

It's very interesting, but the main character doesn't appear at the end. [Laugh][laugh][laugh]

It can look good

Author, you are really a talent