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For e-sports articles, this is a novel and high-level story. Other e-sports articles focus on depicting competition, but this book focuses on describing the establishment of the e-sports world. When people focus on the heroes themselves, the author focuses on the ecological niche of the game, that is, establishing the order, how to play and operate, and there are also small figures who have made great achievements in the era. At present, Yasuo has come out, but I hope that the protagonist can play with it. Those difficult operations will inspire more people to like it. There is also the blind monk's roundhouse kick. Later, he will build a team, various tactical plans and hero coordination, which are all very interesting.

I don't know if the author has seen this comment. As an old bookworm, I have a few suggestions. The first is that it is best to divide long paragraphs into paragraphs, rather than describe them in large paragraphs. Although you may use AI to improve the number of words, this will make readers confused and disgusted. The second one is about the main line of e-sports, which is too compact and urgent. The plot should be given a certain amount of time to evolve. Before each plot happens, you should write a little about daily life, or the spread of the game, the situation of the protagonist's company, etc. Let the bullets fly for a while and let the reader's emotions slow down. This can make the plot smoother and better-looking, and the story characters more three-dimensional.

To be honest, creating the League of Legends in another world, from the beginning to the rise of the professional league, is quite interesting. I originally wanted to finish it in a hurry, which is quite boring, but maybe it would be good to have a finale here. This novel from the beginning to the end is all about creating and perfecting the League of Legends as the theme, which is quite alternative and quite interesting.

I personally feel very good, and the author will continue to work hard.

It feels like A to me

Only by never forgetting your original intention can you always succeed

The subject matter is novel and the author writes well

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Personally I think it's super pretty

So far so good

Come on, come on, come on, come on, come on

Very good. Novels like this are rare.