Is There a Problem with Boys Dreaming of Becoming Magical Girls?

The magical girl version of "I Want to Be a Shadow-sama" has an above-average plot. I look forward to writing a grander, more exciting, ups and downs story in the middle and later stages, Kuuya! Come on, the author of the book is great.

The setting is good, the protagonist's goal of pursuing power is quite clear, and it's very interesting to watch. However, the principles and side effects of the first transformation are not explained clearly enough. I look forward to renovating the previous chapters and clarifying the details of the settings in the future. [Praise]

It's okay, but I also saw an earlier one on the starting point. The first few chapters are almost exactly the same. I haven't read the rest yet. I'm curious whether it's a reference or a pure copy.

WC is okay, the writing is not that great, but the plot is okay. I read it, and the author has written many books, and I looked through it. Especially when I saw the one about many children and many blessings [laughing and crying] I obviously felt that the author's writing and plot have improved a lot, and I don't rule out the possibility of using AI.

It's quite interesting, but the author is writing three books at the same time. I'm worried that I might run away if I can't stick with it [crying]. I don't know when I can reconcile with my sister and fall out of love. I guess the direction will change. [What] My deskmate has a high affection for the protagonist.

A novel that I found by accident. The subject matter is not new. A man transforms into a magical girl and what happens is based on this! ! It's a cool article... But it's a bit too poisonous. Suitable for book lovers, looking for novels to read

How can I put it, it gives me a feeling of Lord Shadow. The first few chapters look very good. I hope it doesn't break down. I'm a little afraid that you will run away if the author is more open. The rating depends on how the author writes in the future. Whether it is two stars or five stars depends on how the author writes in the future.

The author has written the best one among the six books he has written. I suggest you concentrate on writing this one. There is no desire to read the others. The name is well chosen and the subject matter is quite novel. There are not many overlaps in the market. The author's writing style is on point. Don't worry about typos and sentence errors. As long as you are not the kind of person who desperately wants to fall in love, you can basically read it. The author also has a lot of character descriptions in the article. I won't go into details. I'm afraid it won't pass the review.

It's broken. Why has it been removed from the shelves?

No, why is the book gone? Was it reported? There is nothing particularly illegal.

It's okay, but I always feel that the author's writing is like elbowing my brain. I feel that my sister and brother are magical girls, which is quite classic. One of their plots is that I just want to become stronger, and the other is why he ignores me. I don't feel that the two of them are written in the same style and worldview. Everything else is okay.

How can I put it, I really like this kind of mindless novel, "The One Who Wants Shadow's Strength", the author must have borrowed it from it, hahahaha, but I really enjoyed reading it, there was a lot of déjà vu in many places, I hope the author will continue to write more, there are very few novels that make me laugh from ear to ear [laughing]

Sorry, I just sent it after reading it

Why was it taken off the shelves? It's gone if you haven't enjoyed it yet

What's going on? The writing is pretty good, and there isn't much special content. Why was it removed from the shelves?

Except for the three time travels that are basically useless, the settings are quite classic. The classic magical girl novel is about a girl transforming into a magical girl. The character of the protagonist is imitated by the shadow master next door. He is a middle two, calm and powerful. It can be seen that this book comes largely from the shadow master. The only difference is that the protagonist really has goals and ideals, while Master Shadow just thinks it's fun. In short, it's very interesting and worth watching.

Ah ah ah, the book is gone

Author, why did you tear it up?

Why? The book is gone? 😢😢😢

A crooked tone, a crooked person?

It's not a book. Why is it gone?

Why was the book sealed?

Uh-huh, uh-huh, uh-huh, uh, sky white frame glasses Haha Ha ha Haha tie hand suit hand hand suit hand hand suit hand Crutches—————————— Cane legs legs legs legs legs legs feet feet Then there is only one answer

Author, why is your book so dead? Resurrection soon

It's well written, it's different from the magical girls I watch, and what I like is different

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The feeling of Lord Shadow

Although it is called a masterpiece, I feel that the author wrote it according to my xP, so it can be regarded as a minor masterpiece. Hey, what's wrong with this book?

As long as you don't write about romance, love, love, [smile] you are a good novel

Similar to the combination of a magical girl and a shadow warrior, the protagonist is invincible and cool