Inkstone********

The group portraits are well written and the world view is huge, but the repetition rate of some words is too high and the descriptions can be reduced appropriately. Some plot twists are a bit stiff, such as the part about Miss Kuhu's family. I hope the author can create a better and more natural character, rather than a template. Keep your rhythm. Anyway, it's a good book.

So far it seems pretty good.

The author's writing style is very detailed, and each person's image is very unique. I hope there will be more emotional lines.