Beast Taming: The School Bully Is a Hidden Evil-Spirit Expert!

Let me evaluate it objectively and give it a five-star encouragement. After all, I am a novice author and my writing is not bad. Anyway, I can read it. The subject matter is good, it is relatively rare in beast-controlling novels, and the imagination is very rich. The various pet animals are very eye-catching, the interactions between the pet owners are quite angry, and the protagonist also has a great love. The shortcomings are quite obvious. The characters are a bit flat, and there are some conflicts in the personality. The emotional description is insufficient (especially the protagonist's despair when the lottery ticket is torn away and the surprise when the lottery ticket is drawn are not shown. It feels that the protagonist doesn't care much). You can try to imagine yourself as the protagonist and then bring yourself into that scene. This is what I did. It will be better. Lack of writing skills is a problem faced by new writers. You can slowly develop your own style, or you can imitate good works, preferably classics, so you can improve very quickly. Also, in terms of narrative, it feels a little bit inconsistent (scratching my head), and there are also some places that are a bit illogical. You can only polish this yourself, and I don't know what to do (scratching my head) There are also some poisonous points. This is a lily novel (the introduction says that if you don't like it, just go away and don't read it and don't read it, and it's gibberish). The protagonist group is basically girls, and the protagonist is obviously T, who was raised as a boy since he was a child. The most poisonous thing is that the protagonist's friend sells bars in the classroom for money, and is also found to be a man. Although the two have feelings, this part is really a bit poisonous. Everything else is okay. Come on come on! You definitely don't want eunuchs. It's rare that I find a book that I'm interested in reading.

It's very innovative. In the early stage, the appearance of the supporting characters was a little too fast, which caused the narrative to be confusing. However, it was much better in the later stage. Here are my expectations for the plot: Three lines: school, institute and competition. I wish the game was abbreviated. Because firstly, many books have written about this line, and secondly, the special setting of this book (the world's prejudice against evil spirits) does not have a strong connection. The research line is closely related to the protagonist's elimination of prejudice, and the group portrait in the school is aimed at the point that "evil spirits are born from evil". Everyone has some problems to one degree or another. The role of the competition line in the plot can only be to highlight the protagonist's strength, change the prejudice of the masses by winning the competition, and recycle the foreshadowing of the protagonist's bellicose and abnormal state in Chapter 56. The specific content of the competition may have little impact on the plot Of course I look forward to the author writing an eye-catching plot

The author's ideas are very clear and the plot arrangement is very routine. Looking at the cover, I thought it was a dark-hearted protagonist, but it's quite the opposite. The author explains the evil spirit beasts in great detail, allowing readers to travel into this world and guarantee the survival of evil spirit beasts up to 100%, even if the contract can reach 💯%. This is a very good strategy book for evil spirit beasts in the world of pet beasts.

It's so strange. I feel like so many of the classmates in front of me are evil spirits and have nothing to do with this "rare" [what] You will definitely have battles when you go to school, and everyone will expose their pets. How could you not reveal your pets all the time? Why would you want to hide your own pet and choose to guide other people's pets to fight? It's a little poisonous, but the subject matter is relatively new.

It's really rare to see such a beautiful animal-controlling lily in Tomato [Blow kiss]

I first read this book as a heroine without cp. It was the first time I saw the setting of evil spirits in a beast-control novel. This was the most attractive point for me. I don't read Lily, so the emotional line that appeared was a bit abrupt to me, but that's okay, the books I'm reading now are a bit mixed. However, the development of the heroine's career line seems to be a bit chaotic. It is doing this now and then that. I don't have the main memory point of the heroine's career line now. What I can watch now is the story of cheese and system. I still hope that the development of the heroine's career line can be greatly smoothed. I have not seen any other books about evil beasts in the evil spirit series, so don't waste this good setting. [Sending Hearts] Emmm, the heroine is also good, she has the ability to be crazy, but sometimes she is so crazy that it gives me the feeling that everyone is outwitting her, which is very embarrassing. There also seems to be a description in the book of a few times when a person who is considered a subordinate would feel embarrassed when seeing her pretending to be cool, and then would focus on saying that she was socially anxious and would pick her toes in embarrassment. But the heroine will fearlessly confront her superiors. Do you feel that this setting will be a bit conflicting? Give me a time when I should be crazy. She is either embarrassed or extremely crazy.

It's really beautiful! ! I couldn't stop at all [laughing] [laughing] I was wondering why there were no dual heroines fighting beasts hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha. Shen Qiulang and Jekarina are very close to each other. There are more than 500 chapters so far, and the development is not fast, but slowly. Also, there are other sub-CPs in this article that are also very good to compare to. There are not many emotional lines in the whole text because there is also the theme of beast control. Beast control is also very novel. What you control are evil spirits. Every evil spirit that the protagonist recovers has a short story [I learned it]. The protagonist also organized a society where everyone's pet beast is an evil spirit and everyone is a good evil person [laughs]

It's very beautiful. I like this kind of beast-control theme very much. It focuses on collecting illustrations and daily life with the beasts. The characters of the beasts are very distinct, and the personalities and preferences of each beast are particularly lively and interesting. Highly recommended! ! [Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates]

I finished it in one day. The protagonist's character is perfect and the story line is very exciting. The encounters and battles with evil spirits are very attractive. The stories behind each evil spirit are intriguing. The evil spirits mentioned in the beginning are just the incarnation of evil thoughts. Although they are evil, they have different emotions and stories. It makes people look forward to what kind of stories will be brought by other partners in the future. As for the emotional line. . . The heroine's taste is definitely not bad, and the other heroine is very attractive in every aspect. As for this lover (I personally think that my sister has such a high vision to like our Xiao Shen, the others should be collectible dolls, QAQ, I still hope that only Xiao Shen can savor it carefully, I haven't elaborated on it), overall it is really worth watching. Compared with the simple adventure and fighting beast control novels, it greatly gives more flavor of life, it is very beautiful, cheers

This is the second satisfying beast-controlling book (•̀ᴗ•́)و̑̑. The first one is "Beast-controlling from Zero Points", which I personally think is very good. I believe that as long as the combat power does not collapse or anything else, it will be a very good book!