Beast Control****************

Let me evaluate it objectively and give it a five-star encouragement. After all, I am a novice author and my writing is not bad. Anyway, I can read it. The subject matter is good, it is relatively rare in beast-controlling novels, and the imagination is very rich. The various pet animals are very eye-catching, the interactions between the pet owners are quite angry, and the protagonist also has a great love. The shortcomings are quite obvious. The characters are a bit flat, and there are some conflicts in the personality. The emotional description is insufficient (especially the protagonist's despair when the lottery ticket is torn away and the surprise when the lottery ticket is drawn are not shown. It feels that the protagonist doesn't care much). You can try to imagine yourself as the protagonist and then bring yourself into that scene. This is what I did. It will be better. Lack of writing skills is a problem faced by new writers. You can slowly develop your own style, or you can imitate good works, preferably classics, so you can improve very quickly. Also, in terms of narrative, it feels a little bit inconsistent (scratching my head), and there are also some places that are a bit illogical. You can only polish this yourself, and I don't know what to do (scratching my head) There are also some poisonous points. This is a lily novel (the introduction says that if you don't like it, just go away and don't read it and don't read it, and it's gibberish). The protagonist group is basically girls, and the protagonist is obviously T, who was raised as a boy since he was a child. The most poisonous thing is that the protagonist's friend sells bars in the classroom for money, and is also found to be a man. Although the two have feelings, this part is really a bit poisonous. Everything else is okay. Come on come on! You definitely don't want eunuchs. It's rare that I find a book that I'm interested in reading.

It's very innovative. In the early stage, the appearance of the supporting characters was a little too fast, which caused the narrative to be confusing. However, it was much better in the later stage. Here are my expectations for the plot: Three lines: school, institute and competition. I wish the game was abbreviated. Because firstly, many books have written about this line, and secondly, the special setting of this book (the world's prejudice against evil spirits) does not have a strong connection. The research line is closely related to the protagonist's elimination of prejudice, and the group portrait in the school is aimed at the point that "evil spirits are born from evil". Everyone has some problems to one degree or another. The role of the competition line in the plot can only be to highlight the protagonist's strength, change the prejudice of the masses by winning the competition, and recycle the foreshadowing of the protagonist's bellicose and abnormal state in Chapter 56. The specific content of the competition may have little impact on the plot Of course I look forward to the author writing an eye-catching plot

The author's ideas are very clear and the plot arrangement is very routine. Looking at the cover, I thought it was a dark-hearted protagonist, but it's quite the opposite. The author explains the evil spirit beasts in great detail, allowing readers to travel into this world and guarantee the survival of evil spirit beasts up to 100%, even if the contract can reach 💯%. This is a very good strategy book for evil spirit beasts in the world of pet beasts.

I first read this book as a heroine without cp. It was the first time I saw the setting of evil spirits in a beast-control novel. This was the most attractive point for me. I don't read Lily, so the emotional line that appeared was a bit abrupt to me, but that's okay, the books I'm reading now are a bit mixed. However, the development of the heroine's career line seems to be a bit chaotic. It is doing this now and then that. I don't have the main memory point of the heroine's career line now. What I can watch now is the story of cheese and system. I still hope that the development of the heroine's career line can be greatly smoothed. I have not seen any other books about evil beasts in the evil spirit series, so don't waste this good setting. [Sending Hearts] Emmm, the heroine is also good, she has the ability to be crazy, but sometimes she is so crazy that it gives me the feeling that everyone is outwitting her, which is very embarrassing. There also seems to be a description in the book of a few times when a person who is considered a subordinate would feel embarrassed when seeing her pretending to be cool, and then would focus on saying that she was socially anxious and would pick her toes in embarrassment. But the heroine will fearlessly confront her superiors. Do you feel that this setting will be a bit conflicting? Give me a time when I should be crazy. She is either embarrassed or extremely crazy.

It's really rare to see such a beautiful animal-controlling lily in Tomato [Blow kiss]

I finished it in one day. The protagonist's character is perfect and the story line is very exciting. The encounters and battles with evil spirits are very attractive. The stories behind each evil spirit are intriguing. The evil spirits mentioned in the beginning are just the incarnation of evil thoughts. Although they are evil, they have different emotions and stories. It makes people look forward to what kind of stories will be brought by other partners in the future. As for the emotional line. . . The heroine's taste is definitely not bad, and the other heroine is very attractive in every aspect. As for this lover (I personally think that my sister has such a high vision to like our Xiao Shen, the others should be collectible dolls, QAQ, I still hope that only Xiao Shen can savor it carefully, I haven't elaborated on it), overall it is really worth watching. Compared with the simple adventure and fighting beast control novels, it greatly gives more flavor of life, it is very beautiful, cheers

It's really beautiful! ! I couldn't stop at all [laughing] [laughing] I was wondering why there were no dual heroines fighting beasts hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha. Shen Qiulang and Jekarina are very close to each other. There are more than 500 chapters so far, and the development is not fast, but slowly. Also, there are other sub-CPs in this article that are also very good to compare to. There are not many emotional lines in the whole text because there is also the theme of beast control. Beast control is also very novel. What you control are evil spirits. Every evil spirit that the protagonist recovers has a short story [I learned it]. The protagonist also organized a society where everyone's pet beast is an evil spirit and everyone is a good evil person [laughs]

This is the second satisfying beast-controlling book (•̀ᴗ•́)و̑̑. The first one is "Beast-controlling from Zero Points", which I personally think is very good. I believe that as long as the combat power does not collapse or anything else, it will be a very good book!

The novel is tied, and it is quite good. It is a novel about beast control, but it is not the kind of academy competition type. It should be more about the study of animal pets. Evil spirit pets are a type of beast-controlling novel that I have relatively little contact with. I usually read the ones with a richer variety of beast-controllers. This is definitely my first time playing with evil spirits. I was a little hesitant at first because I prefer the kind of delicate and beautiful beasts. Well, cheese doesn't quite fit my aesthetic taste, but after reading it, I thought it was quite cute, ugly, cute, and quite interesting. It's an interesting soul. Shen Qiulang has a very rich personality. Personal charm is also quite good. Well, this is my first time reading Baihewen, and I can accept it.

Good-looking and good-looking, we dotes on our masters, and our insensitivity is inversely proportional to our combat effectiveness [laughs]

It's very beautiful. I like this kind of beast-control theme very much. It focuses on collecting illustrations and daily life with the beasts. The characters of the beasts are very distinct, and the personalities and preferences of each beast are particularly lively and interesting. Highly recommended! ! [Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates]

The subject matter really piqued me. The combination of beast + lily is too rare nowadays. But there are still some poisonous points, the writing style is quite green, the description of some scenes is too straightforward, lacks a sense of atmosphere, and the narrative rhythm is also fast and slow. But overall it's still very good! Thank you to the author for writing! Don't stop updating, I'm still waiting to see the ending. There are some quirks, but acceptable. There are too many things on my mind.

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I've caught up with the big team and written a book review Overall, it's 4.5 Stars. It's a very good beast-control novel. The focus on evil attributes is really unique and different from other beast-control novels. However, the shortcomings are also obvious, which is the protagonist's character and words and deeds. This is indeed a bit problematic. The protagonist's behavior style is becoming more and more like a gangster/little girl. . Another point is that the protagonist is very crazy. Although we all know that the protagonist's golden finger is very powerful (in the picture book), I personally feel that the value shown by the protagonist is not enough for her to be among a bunch of big guys.

It's good-looking and good-looking. It specializes in writing about evil beasts. It's a novel subject matter. I like the heroine's pet beasts and the Wuduo family the most. The Wuduo family is so cute [Blow kiss][Flow kiss][Flow kiss]

😍After viewing, it was like seeing myself in space, feeling suffocated because there is no oxygen in space. There were fairies dancing next to me. In this suffocating feeling, I saw (Beelzebub) a huge king of flies. This novel gave me the feeling that Beria was waving to me in space, two Jiahao were standing beside my bed, and there were two Saufuri, which made me feel an unprecedented feeling😍I have never tasted such a delicious novel. It tasted like eating Asmodeus, which made me feel very interested! It's so plump, tender and fragrant that it's hard to resist its charm! [Adoration][Adoration][Admiration]

It's just for me. The world view is too small in terms of viewing. Some places are illogical and the sense of substitution is not very strong. It feels very bland to read, a daily novel. However, a novel with two female protagonists controlling beasts is really rare [grievance]

The beast-control novel is relatively good, and the world view is okay. Don't collapse, and you must finish writing. Don't suck. I had a hard time finding one that I could read. Author please. Don't leave it unfinished, and don't stop updating it. Give you five stars of encouragement [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

It's similar to Pokémon, but the technology tree is obviously not as high as Pokémon League. The pet's skills are described in detail, and the plot is easy and daily. It's fun but not too brainless. Last but not least, this is Lily!

It looks great for the time being, but it shouldn't be Shuang Jie. After all, the other heroine doesn't look simple at all. She may have suffered huge emotional damage? Like if the other half dies? And then you usually play with healthier flowers? The above is just speculation. Retreat, come back when it's over

One person holds a script and plays weird rules with others Even the tools are a little bit playful

I've seen the latest chapter now. , I personally think it's very interesting and novel, but I'm a little curious about when the other heroine will appear? I really like this style😍😍😍Please update quickly, update quickly! ! !

It's very interesting. It's a pity that this book will be unblocked. I don't know if it will be unblocked. I hope the author won't be discouraged.

It's great, perfect, very imaginative, and the introduction to animal pets is very interesting [Like][Like][Like][Like]

Generally speaking, it looks okay, and there are no big surprises. However, although the world view written by the author has a relatively shallow record of evil spirits and other creatures, it cannot be said that the basics (I am talking about the basics, not all, you are right if you want to find fault) shown by so many people are all evil spirits. It feels like there are no other types except the evil spirits.

It's quite beautiful. I can't stop watching it. It's just a little lacking.

Although there are some minor flaws in the early stage, I am really attracted to the protagonist and writing style. Also, which lily is the most fragrant [laughs] Author, please don't make any comments based on bad judgment! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

It's very interesting. It's the first time I've seen this type of movie. It's very novel and the plot is super interesting. The author would like to give you a lot more work. I can't get enough of it.

When I first started watching it, I was drawn in by the novel subject matter that I had never seen before. I didn't notice it was a lily novel late at night. I only realized it after watching it. I don't read Bai or Nan, but! The author writes so beautifully that I keep following it! I hope the author will post more updates! I really like the different images of each beast in it. Baby Cheese is really cute and well-behaved. [Blowing a kiss] The heroine is not the silly or holy kind, I just like to watch this!

Is there any similar book? After reading this book, I couldn't read anything. It's really good. I really like the character of Ekaterina. I also like the 100-cent setting. This book is very interesting to me. It's very suitable for my taste. Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking