Collapse of Iron************

Personally, I feel that the overall rhythm is okay for a reverse time-travel story, but the only problem is that this Chang Yeyue cannot be said to be completely consistent with Bengtie's Chang Yeyue, or at least it can be said to be completely unrelated.

There are so many mistakes, the long night moon turns into a flowing firefly, what the hell is this?

Good-looking (♥∀♥) I like many heroines

God! [Shy]