Thanks for the Invitation*******

It feels pretty good. In daily life, being ordinary is the real thing. There are many female protagonists, and the emotional line is also relatively slow to develop. There has not been much progress yet. The female protagonist has already fallen in love with the male protagonist and started fighting. The male protagonist has not noticed it yet, and he is a slow male protagonist. The male protagonist's fighting ability is not bad, and he relies on him to turn the tide in major events. However, he always relies on the male protagonist to lie down [laughing and crying]. In the early stage, he was a bit too frequent, and he was always in the hospital. The role of other characters was not high. Then the male protagonist opened another plug-in, which is a Yaolao type plug-in. To be honest, when the plug-in appeared, it felt a bit abrupt and a bit out of tune with the world view, but the time and space plug-ins are still good. Also, the plot is a bit incoherent at times, and it suddenly enters a dungeon without any twists and turns in the middle. I think I should either add a twist or just write a side story when I get stuck. Sometimes there are some minor logic errors, but they are harmless. As for the plot, there are two settings and the content of the original book cannot be completely brought in. But for someone like me who doesn't know much about Harry Potter, there is no sense of violation after reading it. The author has a high output. He can guarantee almost 5,000 words per day. On good days, he can produce 10,000 words. This is great! All in all, it's not bad. If you like daily life, you can check it out.

It's good to watch, I love watching it, the plot is more daily, but I personally like to watch daily life. The heroines in the first grade are not so sweet for the time being, just a little ambiguous, and the author updates it steadily, with a single update of 5,000 words.

Personally, I think it's pretty good. It's well written for newcomers. The perspective is different from other fandoms, but there are some small logic problems. Overall, I'll give you one star first and see how it goes later [Learned]

I see the Ultra spirit and the light of hope in the male protagonist [Shy] I like this harmonious, united, and hopeful Hogwarts [Sending my heart] I hope that the love in the future will also be sweet [Love]

The protagonist's plug-in is to give him a brother from God and give him some powers and talents, which is generally good. But after the second volume of Harry's family ethics drama, I seemed a little tired, and I basically skipped through it. In fact, I didn't see how familiar the protagonist was with Harry. Come on, author [love]

Surprisingly good, but it may not attract too many people, come on Chapter 18 of Volume 2: Why does Harry's mother let the protagonist use the Fidelity Curse? This seems to make the protagonist very inexplicable. Well... There is also a bit of a holy mother. He is gone. He can be kind, but he cannot be nosy, and he cannot be a holy mother, because he is the protagonist.

In Tomato is a great work, and the author combined it very well. There is a certain foundation of skills. The main focus is daily writing, but it is not a running account style narrative, but uses daily writing to bring out various branch plots, and the description of the branch plots will not steal the limelight of the main plot. Very nice. It can be seen that the author's outline is very good, using some inadvertent little things (alchemy objects) or some small supporting characters (the three Soviet and Russian sons) to lead the world that the author wants to express. This is actually a world with the world of Harry Potter as the main axis. As far as it seems, the author has integrated several worlds together very well. It is not abrupt, but very harmonious.

The author is a stunner

It's beautiful and comfortable to watch, and the heroine also likes it

It feels good and gives people a very comfortable feeling

Who are the protagonist's roommates?

It's very beautiful, that's why I always mention Merlin XXⅩ when I talk It seems to be getting hotter and hotter

Very good, so beautiful

After reading the beginning, there is nothing sinister about it. I will first give 5 stars to Daily Update 1W4 to prevent the author from running away.

It's well written and worth reading, keep up the good work.

The rich story of character creation is also more interesting. Anyway, in my opinion, it is very good. I recommend it to the brothers who click in. This book I cut the author in half

This is the most beautiful and heartwarming Hogwarts I have ever seen.

Is she a female author? It feels very delicate.

The author may not have read the original work carefully, but he wrote it well.

Not bad, very pretty

Personally, I think it's pretty good, compared to other Harry Potter fan books.

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