There Is Indeed Something Wrong with My Mingtide Trip!

A very delicious plot that breaks away from the usual routine of imitating one scene and forgetting the next and forcibly instilling the character's memory. The author is very careful in shaping the characters, and his meticulous psychological descriptions and micro-movements of the characters in different environments and different psychology can create vivid and three-dimensional characters. The most important thing is that I really like the author's portrayal of the protagonist. Regardless of whether he has strong power or not, he will try his best to protect everything he cherishes, despite his inner conflicts and fears.

Love watching it, 5 stars, looking forward to the follow-up and hoping it will be completed smoothly. The expression is clear and the writing is smooth and natural. It is not easy to tell the truth on this platform where a large number of works cannot be explained clearly. The story is interesting, the plot is reasonable, and the author's own ideas are there. This is what fan works should be like. As for the characters ooc? In my opinion, anything is acceptable as long as it is reasonable. Human nature is multi-faceted, and even the official character design is only a reference. As long as I can justify it, I will accept it even if the author writes that the scar is an undercover agent [laughter]

It is not a formulaic output, nor will it be vigorous in every life. The Gabrielina chapter is about the growth of the amnesiac after waking up for the first time, the Imao chapter is about the tenderness of a weak person in the wasteland, the Yunzhushan chapter is about the mutual support of one master and four disciples, the Chisaki chapter is about the mutual redemption of aliens in a dark society, the Frollo chapter is about the journey of a paranoid and a fellow traveler... The delicate emotional descriptions are deeply rooted in people's hearts. Warmth, depression, sadness... All emotions are natural and follow the natural way.

I highly recommend this book for the following reasons: First, the writing is excellent Second, the writing style is elegant and comfortable to read. Thirdly, the wording should be accurate and just right, without too many modifications to make it complicated. Fourth, the author can examine and reflect on the work Fifth, the author often interacts with readers and actively listens to and considers suggestions. Disadvantages: The author is a night owl, so it is recommended to go to bed early The above comments are all based on my own wishes. The benevolent sees benevolence, the wise see wisdom. I have been kidnapped by this book and am therefore a hostage, so I recommend this book.

It's very cool. I caught up with the main force in two weeks. Just like the introduction said that the protagonist is not perfect but is gradually growing up. You can clearly feel that the author's writing style, conception and handling of details are gradually improving. Especially the skill of writing knives is really surprising. The characterization of each character in the article is really hard. It can be seen that they have a deep understanding of it. After the simulation, there will be no memory in reality, which needs to be unlocked by meeting people in the simulation. This is also novel. Although the author said that he would only write to the final chapter of Li Naxi Tower, I actually really want to read the plot of Xiao Ai. However, there are relatively few readers for this book. Writing less may be a good choice. I hope my review can make new readers get into this book. This is really the best among the best. I have written so much without realizing it. Anyway, I hope the author can work hard. Daily average is too cruel.

I begged for five stars, and I gave it. I would like to give a personal review of this book. It can be seen that Lao A is very careful and has its own setting. The protagonist transforms from an ordinary person to a savior and becomes another lover king. The most interesting point is the setting between time. Through simulation, you can travel through various time points to reverse the tragedy and save the world. Another feature is the doomsday style. The tragedy that is not deeply felt in the game is deepened into the doomsday disaster and the lament of mankind in the text. The rest of the character descriptions of OOC are currently very infrequent, and the degree of restoration is not low. Lao A is also very obedient, and those who are inappropriate should be corrected. But the shortcomings are also obvious: Lao A's writing is quite heavy for newcomers, and it is not recommended for those who can't stand this kind of writing; the book sometimes falls into emotional dilemmas (the Chisaki chapter was scrapped), which makes people worry about Lao A's mental state. I swallow the other minor shortcomings and won't talk about them. Personally, I like the Jia Bei chapter the most, it's unpretentious and stunning. Finally, I want to remind you [laughing evilly]: Author, you have to take care of yourself😭 Write novels when you have a rest😇 When I'm hungry, I write a novel😭 When I'm full, I'll write a novel😇 When I'm tired, I write a novel😭 When you feel good, write a novel😇 When I'm sleepy, I write a novel😭 When you wake up, write a novel😇 Write a novel when you cry😭 When you feel excited, write a novel😇 If you lose followers, write a novel😭 After getting a haircut, I will write a novel😇 If you are angry with Party A, write a novel😭 Once Party A gets the rice, write a novel😇 When I stay up late and become bald, I write a novel😭 When you are radiant, write a novel😇 When you run out of inspiration, write a novel😭 After carrying the pot for initiation, write a novel😇 I suspect that I will write novels when I am born 😭 When you are free in this world, write novels😇 When I miss my family and friends, I write a novel😭 When relatives and friends come to visit, I write novels😇 Write a novel when you are besieged by keyboard warriors😭 The keyboard warrior writes a novel after being sanctioned😇

I read a chapter. The author's writing is quite good. The writing is very comfortable to read. Mingchao's articles are also hard to find. Unfortunately, I like to read long or completed ones. It's too uncomfortable to follow the book. [Crying] So I'm sorry for the author. I have nothing to do and I'm here to give you a gift. Just hold on. [Sending my heart]

After reading it for so long, I realized there was no comment. Please add it. All in all, this book is worth reading, and it is also one of the best among Mingchao fandoms. After reading it for so long, you can feel that the author is writing the book seriously. Personally, I don't think there is anything that particularly affects the viewing experience. Among them, the Chisaki volume is the most touching. Perhaps ordinary stories can touch people's hearts more. The other volumes can also be used. Is it because simulation writing is too cliche? Why are so few people watching? Finally, I hope that the author can keep writing, change those unhappy stories, and give them a good ending. Come on, big brother who writes books [Like]

I have finished reading the first chapter of The Witcher. Gabe has done a good job in shaping the emotions of the protagonist and the scene creation is also very good. I just don't know if the part where the protagonist and the Headless Horseman break up can be released in the game (I guess that kind of expression in the game cannot be censored).

After staying up all night to catch up with the big group, I suddenly wanted to write a long review. In this book, in so many volumes, Lao A is not only writing simulations one after another, but more like using countless fragments of parallel time and space to piece together an extremely large, delicate and fatalistic world. Each volume may carry the obsessions and regrets of different characters. I have followed the Potato Chapter so far and watched the simulations in these volumes unfold one by one. The shock in my heart really cannot subside for a long time. Lao A's writing style is so delicate. It is not superficial rhetoric, but like an extremely gentle scalpel, dissecting the secret struggles, obsessions and regrets of different characters for the readers to see bit by bit. The simulation of so many volumes is like a big dream from which one cannot wake up. Even though I knew it was fake, and I knew every ending would involve a knife, the tears still couldn't stop falling. It's really hard for me to express the feeling of fragmentation that spans countless parallel time and spaces in words. Whether it was the Chisaki chapter or the Flo chapter, I felt empathy from the bottom of my heart. The one that impressed me the most and had the highest evaluation was naturally the Koka chapter. Whether it was the delicate description of the prison process and Koka's growth in the volume or the intertwined description of reality and the past in the end volume, it ranks among the top literary works I have read. Finally, now that I have seen it, I have some thoughts that I want to say to prisoner A. Thank you for writing such a touching story with such gentle and cruel writing. This is more than just a fanfic, it's more like a dream that makes people cry. Looking forward to the plot of the next volume, looking forward to the reunion after the simulation, and even more looking forward to the finale of the 2.0 Lina Xi Tower. I hope that the final outcome of our prison journey will be worthy of his ups and downs along the way, and that I wish Xi can get the happiness he desires in the end! ! !

This is the best Mingchao fanfic I have ever seen. Really, you can read it even if you have not played the game. The emotions are delicate and the characters are fleshed out. I think fanfics like this are worthy of publicity. Fanfics should not only be written for insiders, but should also be read happily by outsiders.

The emotions are delicate and the plot is very good. Don't look at the ratings. The current ratings are low just because there are few people. I hope more people will support me and don't let the author stop updating. I feel comfortable watching it. I look forward to the next small card. I recommend everyone to read it. Originally, Mingchao fan fiction is rare, but the writing in this book is very delicate and worth reading.

The writing style is very sophisticated, it doesn't look like a new author at all [Like] There are no big problems with the plot, it would be nice to have more realistic content. Now I feel that the pace of the simulation is a bit fast [laughing]

There are not many Mingchao fanfics. Personally, I only read the plot of Frollo... The plot is relatively good. As expected, the emotions range from low to high. The further you watch, the more obvious you can feel the suffocation that is as immersive as the protagonist. Frollo's paranoid character is very consistent with the description of the game. To be honest, I thought the protagonist would directly save him [laughing], but unexpectedly it became a knife to attack Frollo. I haven't read the other chapters. The author describes the details and the characters very delicately. Although there are still some areas that could be improved, it is not harmful to read. Finally, I'm really looking forward to the meeting between the protagonist and Frollo. The author would like to give it a boost and update it [Like]

Dear author, your writing is so contagious! In the first volume of The Witcher, Gabrielina's charm is vividly portrayed, so that even a person like me who has never played Ming Tide is deeply attracted and can't help but fall in. Unexpectedly, I drew the strongest resonance mentioned in the book at draw 23. This is probably the fate of this book! Your story brings the characters to life and makes me excited for what's next in this world. Please keep writing, I will keep updating

The author's writing style is really good. It's one of the few simulation novels I've read that is very comfortable. [Shy] I just don't know when to write the plot of Frollo and Amis. These two are really in trouble [I'm about to cry]

I think this book allowed me to experience the despair of Mingchao's worldview. The drifters in the game plot are too strong, and there is no sense of despair at all. I quite like this slow-paced plot, and the protagonist's kind-hearted and even somewhat stupid character really makes me like it. And this kind of thing that is similar to a simulator but not a system is quite novel. In fact, I really hope that the author can read the later ones. I don't think there is a problem with the author's writing style, but there are not only few books on Mingchao on this platform, but also low traffic. The one with the most readers seems to be the one about the strange invasion of Mingchao. If the author really finishes the book or starts a new book, I will definitely continue to support it (if there is a new book, I hope the male protagonist is still named Cheng Xi)

I think the author's daily writing is very interesting. It makes me temporarily forget the original plot and follow your rhythm. Occasionally, it will feel better when compared with the original plot. The knife is also very cruel. I cried several times when I was knifed. In the first few volumes, I listened to the songs recommended by the author and my emotions came up instantly. I cried while reading. It is very unique, but The previous plot after leaving the simulation is not that attractive, but I feel that the Black Coast one is much better than the previous one. It is one of the few Narushio fans that I think is reasonable and delicate. It may be worse than the Tongtendai one, but it is already very good. I can only say that the content and direction of the description are not the same. I really prefer the bigger one [Star][Star]

The author's writing style and ideas are particularly excellent. He is also very careful in controlling the details and logical understanding of the plot. He is good at writing with both sugar and knife. It is a rare work [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration]

It's okay, it's good, although I don't know what's good about it. After all, I didn't read this article carefully. It should be one of the best articles in Tomato. It's not recommended to skip reading, because skipping the plot means skipping your own people... Ahem, it's still worth reading.

It is rare to find a truly high-quality Mingchao fanfic on Tomato, with an original plot, delicate emotions, and the true background of Mingchao, which is the end of the world. The end of the world should have despair. Because despair exists, the emotions between people will be more precious. All in all, I give this book a high rating. Five stars is the upper limit of the platform, but there are not many chapters at the moment. If the quality is maintained, the future can be expected.

The writing is delicate and the rhythm of the plot is well grasped, and the characters' thoughts are not obtrusive. Personally, I think it is better than the Tongtiandai book. It is a cherry tomato among a bunch of Rotten Tomatoes. The score is indeed a bit low [laughing and crying] It suddenly occurred to me that the author is also a knight chef, and so am I. The first three golden chapters are indeed a bit jerky, but they are getting better and better later on. Come on, the author hopes that your works will get better and better like Saber, and don't be infected by the curse of the knight chef in recent years ( ´ ▽ ` )ﾉ

It's a no-brainer to watch Mingchao fandoms. The writing is smooth and clear, and the relationship between the original characters and the original Mingchao characters is well handled. Repeated simulations not only did not destroy the original character designs, but made their images more attractive. There is nothing poisonous about this book so far, and the author is very obedient [laughs] Secondly, the author has a large amount of updates and is full of updates. Tens of thousands of words are updated every day, so he can give praise (Abyss Fushuluo has become a supervisor who only kills evil people in this fanfic, which can be saved)

It is the best simulator fanfic I have ever read so far. It is one of the best simulator fanfics, plus Ming Chao, five stars for no brains (Where can I find such a good book and an author who actively interacts with readers! I must break through the barrier of 8.0!) [Like][Like][Like]

The content is interesting yet rigorous, and the character creation is very good. Each character is "live" and can be imagined in the mind when reading, making the characters more than "two-dimensional". The author's sophisticated writing style stands out in this platform where most people are wrong. It is a rare masterpiece. Come on [Like]

Great, needless to say. The very few Mingchao fan fiction writers who are very good are really very attentive and put a lot of ingenuity into their work. Come on, author! ! ! [Blow kiss] No comments, please move to the text [Like]

To be honest, this book is really good. I prefer to read refreshing novels. I rarely read this type of book because it is too depressing. And when I didn't see the positioning of Lao Cheng, the sound traces of female painters' paintings were undoubtedly crucial, but this borrowed power made me feel very uncomfortable, but I didn't give up on the book, and I couldn't just read Shuangwen. Until I understood the role of the protagonist, I felt comfortable.

I have been reading it for a long time, and it can be said to be a very good article in Mingchao fandom. Although I don't know why the rating cannot be improved (maybe there are many people who are too lazy to rate), I will not be stingy with my 5 stars. I hope the author can work hard and continue writing.

To be honest, after reading it for a day, I have read the latest. The author's writing and plot are very good, but I have a problem, that is, I feel that the author simulates too frequently, or there are too few scenes describing the current main timeline. It felt okay, but once I arrived in Chisaki, it seemed very crowded. One heroine described it for a long time and then seamlessly switched to the next one. Besides, except for Imshu, the gap between the end of the simulation and the reunion was too long, especially for Obei-san. Even I, who could read it in one sitting, felt that it was too long, let alone Needless to mention those who are catching up, I even saw a book review at the reunion saying that the male protagonist's codename had been forgotten. In this case, the plot continuity for readers may not be very good. There is still no news about Kati's return at the end, but the plot of Coletta started directly. As a reader, I would like to give the author a small suggestion from my personal point of view [Salute][Salute][Salute], that is, I can write more about the main plot later, and meet again earlier. From my personal point of view, I would like to thank the author for his understanding. I personally feel that the rating can be improved if this is changed. Advantages: The writing style is really good. It can write the emotional line of the simulated plot so that the reader does not feel abrupt, which has defeated most simulation articles. Not to mention that almost every simulation section can be used as a single female protagonist by adding some, and the male protagonist's personal outlook and combat power curve are relatively natural. Therefore, I would like to ask the author to refer to my personal suggestions. The main line should be increased in length, and the simulation sections can be appropriately reduced. Thank you. [Sending my heart][Sending my heart][Sending my heart]

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